Babbling

[Buddyroe274]

Judging from your posts here, you may need a ghost writer........The real question is will the ghost writer need you.

[ihavequadrophenia]

My cynicism comes from my old man and his old man...and personal experience. And someone once told me I wrote a lot like Salinger. I don't see it, but whatevs.

[fugglesss]

well ill be proofreading and spellchecking and using all the stuff i was supposedly taught in college,

and have you read twilight?

thats all that needs to be said, really.  a 10 year old honor student could have written it. 

[fugglesss]

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ihavequadrophenia wrote:
My cynicism comes from my old man and his old man...and personal experience. And someone once told me I wrote a lot like Salinger. I don't see it, but whatevs.

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really the only critically acclaim literature ive read in leisure was http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Love_in_the_Time_of_Cholera

ok so maybe i need to read a couple of classics before i really start writting.. just make notes until then 

so i can do better than pure trash .. then people will still feel good about themselves after they read me lol

[Buddyroe274]

Spellchecking, and proofreading don't make for good writing, but to hell with it.......Normally I save the troll dance for you, but there is another that has my interest tonight.......Perhaps another time.

[fugglesss]

mmhmm

[Krackitty]

This kind of crap works for Nicholas Sparks (sans the supernatural themes), so I'm pretty sure you'll be rich soon.

[poiumn]

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fugglesss wrote:

since they seem to be the thing these days

here are some story lines im considering actually writing. dont steal my ideas or i will find u..oh yes... i will

1. rich teenage guy who is heir to ultra creepy huge corporation (evil) falls for ordinary girl.. he then decides that he doesnt want to be heir of or run the creepy corporation ... so he runs away with girl..corp tries to kill him and girl.... has to do all kind of crazy stuff to protect girl ... we are suppose to feel all gushy over his love of someone poor when is oh so rich

2. guy falls for girl. girl is of two worlds.. .can switch into another mythical land much like they do in the witch lion wardrobe... but in other world girl is evil... guy somehow follows girl into other world (haven't figured this part out yet, plot hole!) .. but in other world he is the savior that is supppose to stop evil girl.. so he has to kill her but loves her so tries to change her from being so evil ... oh what will he do?? will he choose to save the world or the love of his life? will he figure out a way to do both??? oh the woe!!

(lots of ultra cool fight scenes!!) 

3.  normal unpopular girl hooks up with jock. he ends up beating her up on a regular basis - another non jerk like jock finds out about it somehow - beats up her bf for beating her up .and becomes the new bf... later,after going to juvenile hall or whatever the first boyfriend goes crazy and does all this lifetime channel type stuff to terrorize them .. how will the happy couple get rid of the insane ex abusive boyfriend??? .someone dies at the end .. oh who will it be??? 

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Write them all.

[naraku361]

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fugglesss wrote:

3.  Normal unpopular girl hooks up with jock. He ends up beating her up on a regular basis - another non jerk like jock finds out about it somehow - but gets beat up and becomes a violent, drunken paraplegic... After going to juvenile hall or whatever the abusive boyfriend goes crazy and has to protect his girlfriend from the insane cripple... How will the happy couple get rid of the insane loser in a wheelchair? Someone dies at the end, but who? Probably the cripple, 'cause he couldn't even win a fight when he had legs. Then the unpopular girl realizes that the beatings were just because he wanted a sandwich and she should have just complied with his demands, so she starts to. And they all lived happily ever after.

Fin. 

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I like this version better.

[fugglesss]

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naraku361 wrote:

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fugglesss wrote:

3.  Normal unpopular girl hooks up with jock. He ends up beating her up on a regular basis - another non jerk like jock finds out about it somehow - but gets beat up and becomes a violent, drunken paraplegic... After going to juvenile hall or whatever the abusive boyfriend goes crazy and has to protect his girlfriend from the insane cripple... How will the happy couple get rid of the insane loser in a wheelchair? Someone dies at the end, but who? Probably the cripple, 'cause he couldn't even win a fight when he had legs. Then the unpopular girl realizes that the beatings were just because he wanted a sandwich and she should have just complied with his demands, so she starts to. And they all lived happily ever after.

Fin. 

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I like this version better.

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making him a crippled stalker would make him seem much more crazy. and he'd have even more reason to be angry with them for crippling him since it would also end his whole athletic career