I have been reading all of your posts, chapters and all, and one thing i have noticed in them is that, while it might be intentional, your characters are not true to the anime series. The way you portray Kallen and/or CC do not reflect their individual personalities in their origional state. Lelouch is a very smart, philosophical person but i dont think that you have accurately captured them. CC is a very unemotional, cold-hearted girl but you have portrayed her as someone who grew up as a normal person and has a school girl crush on someone. Lloyd and Rakshata are in love, i can understand that, but they way you make them interract with each other is contradictory to their personalites. Lloyd is a sociopath but you protray his as someone who cares about everything.
I'm not trying to annoy you or anything, and i also understand that this is your fanfic, so i am just pointing out that if you wanted to make it seem more consistant with the actual anime, these are some points that you might want to take into consideration.
if u ever want my opinion just say, if u dont want it at all just say. I'm just trying to help.
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