Reply
T.O.M. v2
Takashi8188
Posts: 2,410
Registered: 02-21-2009
0

Code Geass: R3 Zero's Requiem

you all know that i was planning on making a fanfic based on the possible outcome of what could happen after R2

- and this is it.... how ever the first ep wont be on for about a week

 

 

 

 

but in about two minutes i will have the prolouge to the story up (just to get give everyone a taste of whats to come)

T.O.M. v2
Takashi8188
Posts: 2,410
Registered: 02-21-2009
0

Re: Code Geass: R3 Zero's Requiem

Reply to Takashi8188 - Message ID#: 49980648

and here it is.... but...its just the start - the rest will be up in less than a weeks time


 

Code Geass R3: Zero Requiem

    It has been 18 years since peace has been established world wide. A man by the name of Lelouch Vi Brittania was killed by the iconic hero Zero, thus establishing Lelouch’s greatest dream, Zero Requiem. He achieved this by uniting the world against one common enemy, himself, and then eliminating this enemy to cause a united world to remain at peace. The new Queen of Brittania, his sister, Nunnally, and the new Zero, his fateful friend Suzaku, take over as the new leaders of this peaceful world. And for the past eighteen years there has not been the slightest disruption of this peace but now....... one more chapter is to be written in the tale of a man by the name of Lelouch Vi Brittania.

T.O.M. v2
Takashi8188
Posts: 2,410
Registered: 02-21-2009
0

Re: Code Geass: R3 Zero's Requiem

This widget could not be displayed.

oh and i forgot to mention that i am also putting this same story up in the fanfic section too

 

(but i wont start it there till i put up the rest of ep 1)

Gundam Pilot
JQuest15
Posts: 27,235
Registered: 01-16-2009
0

Re: Code Geass: R3 Zero's Requiem

[ Edited ]
This widget could not be displayed.

Takashi8188 wrote:  (then im doing good)

What does R3 stand for?

 

 

:smileyindifferent:

Message Edited by JQuest15 on 06-07-2009 05:33 PM
Midnight Runner
Fear_Itself
Posts: 14,031
Registered: 02-29-2004
0

Re: Code Geass: R3 Zero's Requiem

Rebellion, Revolution, Reconstruction.
Justice divine doth smite you with its hammer.
Kei Pirate
LordJupiter
Posts: 6,228
Registered: 05-04-2009
0

Re: Code Geass: R3 Zero's Requiem

Rape 3?
Midnight Runner
Fear_Itself
Posts: 14,031
Registered: 02-29-2004
0

Re: Code Geass: R3 Zero's Requiem

Revolution, Reconstruction, Requiem.
Justice divine doth smite you with its hammer.
T.O.M. v2
Takashi8188
Posts: 2,410
Registered: 02-21-2009
0

Re: Code Geass: R3 Zero's Requiem

Reply to Fear_Itself - Message ID#: 49984237

yes.... fear you are right.... (so listen to him)

 

oh and give me some time and i should have part of the first ep up....hope you like it....(but it will take some time.... sorry bout that....)

Kei Pirate
memyself
Posts: 6,274
Registered: 07-10-2003
0

Re: Code Geass: R3 Zero's Requiem

[ Edited ]

Reply to Takashi8188 - Message ID#: 50069481

I could see an R3.  Empress Nunnally gives all nations a choice -- remain part of the Britannian empire (now a democracy), be a commonwealth of the empire, or full independence.  Under the new order, peace and prosperity reign -- until national rivalries are renewed.  Jealousy and corruption threatend to undo the world Lelouch has created, and it is beyond the abilities of Nunnally and Suzaku to save this world.

 

As the world creeps closer to war, Kallen from a distance observes wondering if there is anything that can be done.  Until one day she comes home and finds C.C. waiting for her.

 

 

C.C.:  Do you really want to save the world Lelouch left for us?  I'm afraid it is beyound your abilities.  Only Lelouch can save what he created.

 

Kallen:  But Lelouch is. . . .  He's dead.  Isn't he?

 

C.C.:  Yes.  He's quite dead.  But it is not death as you know it.  I am not sure how to pull this off, especially without having my geass powers left.  But if he knows what is going on in this world, if we can reach him, if he can and is willing to break through, we may be able to bring him back -- just this once.  Just for one moment.

 

 

 

 

 

Naaaaaa.

 

Message Edited by memyself on 06-13-2009 10:33 PM
Come join me at: http://www.animeboards.com/
T.O.M. v2
Takashi8188
Posts: 2,410
Registered: 02-21-2009
0

Re: Code Geass: R3 Zero's Requiem

Reply to Takashi8188 - Message ID#: 49980648

 

 

01 - The Rebirth of a Demon

 

*At a Brittanian Military base*

 

Officer: Sir Isaak, the preparations are complete. What shall we do now?

Isaak: That is good, to think it only took 18 years to clear all the annoying obstacles in our path. We are done for now, however prepare all units to get ready, tomorrow Japan becomes

ground-ZERO once again. *evil laugh*

 

*Scene ends and theme song starts*

 

*There are two people talking in the shadows*

 

?? *actually Lelouch*: So witch, has it been long enough for me to come back in to the light of society?

?? *actually CC*: Can’t really say….. It has only been 18 years, the world may not need the real Zero yet.

??(Lelouch): who said Zero was coming back? The world may not need the real Zero back but I doubt it would mind one more face in the crowed of people behind the scenes

??(CC): So how exactly do you plan on making your comeback? Do you plan to go back to your old academy, back to Ashford?

Lelouch: *walking out of the shadows* That is exactly what I plan on doing

CC: *following behind him* I don’t think that is a very good idea, someone may recognize you.

Lelouch: its been 18 years since I died…. I think It should be safe enough.

CC: 18 years or not, you haven’t changed in the slightest, you still look like a school boy.

Lelouch: That is exactly why it will work with me going back to school. In fact it seems that a select few special people happen to be attending this year.

CC: And who might these be…?

Lelouch: from what I hear, it sounds like everyone I know has kids in school

CC: Is that so…. Who would have thought that you would one day be surrounded by the kids of the very people you grew up with.

Lelouch: Yes, it is ironic, don’t you think?

CC: That it is, but you had better hurry, isn’t tomorrow the first day back at school?

Lelouch: you are right, tomorrow is the first day, of a new beginning.

 

*scene ends*

 

*The next day at Ashford academy*

 

Lelouch: Looks like not much has changed.

CC: true, only fitting I say. But….. What name are you going to go by, you cant possible use your real one.

Lelouch: I plan on using Lelouch, Lelouch Lazarus

CC: Let’s hope no one realizes the similarity.

Lelouch: now where was the headmasters office? *bumps into some guy with green hair*

Guy: oh sorry. Wait could I help you with something

Lelouch: yes actually, where exactly is the headmasters office?

Guy: well…. Headmistress Milly Cardemonde

*tells him directions* oh and by the way my name is Zach, yours?

Lelouch: um…. Zach, it’s Lelouch

CC: mine's CC

Zach: well, be seeing ya around I guess *walks away*

Lelouch: well, looks like Rivalz finally got his way. Took him long enough.

CC: So what do you plan on doing once you meet Milly again?

Lelouch: I actually plan on telling her, she would be nice to have as an ally in the school

CC: I really don’t think that’s a good idea, you know, the whole “you’re now immortal” thing.

Lelouch: I see your point, but soon enough the world is going to know so, I think it’s only right that my friends know first.

CC: no way is this going to end well.

Lelouch: oh enough, you’re too pessimistic sometimes

CC: and since when are you optimistic?

Lelouch: you will see why soon enough

*they are at the headmaster’s office - he knocks on the door*

Milly: come in.

CC: *gulp*

Lelouch: ah, Milly, you seem to have become headmaster after all.

Milly: After all? Do I know you?

Lelouch: well…. I guess 18 years have been a long time. But at least time hasn’t done you any harm, oh and how is Rivalz doing? I haven’t seen him in years, either.

Milly: *her eyes widen* no way, this cant be possible, you’re….. you’re

Lelouch: I am what? Dead? No, not quite, hell wasn’t ready for me yet

Milly: but I saw you…… Zero, he….. He…. Killed you

Lelouch: ah yes, you were the reporter there weren’t you?

Milly: but I don’t get it….. You look exactly the same as you did 18 years ago?

Lelouch: yes, I do, yet another benefit of a certain power.

Milly: ....?

Lelouch: Don’t worry about it too much, I am the same person you once knew.

Milly: FIne...as you say...i wont ask too many questions right now...but why are you back here?

Lelouch: I have my reasons. But don’t worry I wont be causing nearly as much trouble as I did before.

Milly: Let’s hope not, we are finally at peace after all of that

Lelouch: and you’re welcome, so could you um….. Fix up some paper work saying that I am who I say I am.

Milly: anything for you. But you should know, that there are a lot of kids that go to this school that you know the parents of, don’t do anything stupid or to attract too much attention, you can’t go getting caught again.

Lelouch: I know that already. But how is Nunnally doing?

Milly: funny you should ask that, but I won’t say just yet, but I will say, that you should see the rest of the Senior class before asking too many questions.

Lelouch: so, who all should I know?

Milly: the entire student council, and anyone that looks like they are familiar or doesn’t quite belong. You will know what I mean when you see them

*Lelouch & CC leave - are walking to their class room*

CC: well that wasn’t as bad as I thought it would be
Lelouch: I told you, everything will be fine

*as they are walking into the room Lelouch sees something that catches his eye - bright red hair*

Lelouch: is that who I think it is?

CC: no way, it can’t be, but, she looks just like her

Lelouch: I know, but it cant be!

*out of sheer curiosity he takes the empty seat beside the beautiful, red-headed girl noticing one small difference between her and Kallen Kousuki - she has brilliant purple eyes*

Girl: hey, you new here?

Lelouch: yeah, just transferred

Girl: hmm…. That’s cool, by the way, I’m Reiko.

Lelouch: okay, I’m Lelouch, but I know I don’t know you but, you look so familiar

Reiko: that’s odd.

CC: what is? *taking the seat behind Lelouch*

Reiko: It’s just that, you seem oddly familiar to me too.

Lelouch: (oh no it can’t be, but it has to be) So Reiko, anything I really need to know?

Reiko: yeah, one, I am on the student council, I’m the secretary

Lelouch: *to himself* (no surprise there) - so who is the Pres?

Reiko: you must be new, it is none other than the Headmaster’s daughter.

Lelouch: (once again, no surprise) so, who are the other people?

*just then, a guy with spiky blonde hair with a “drop dead attitude” comes in*

Guy: hey kid you’re in my seat!

Lelouch: am I? (I should……)

CC: (oh no, not now) um…. Excuse us we didn’t know.

Reiko: hey don’t be mean to my new friends, Takashi!

Takashi: Friends you say, well, *turning to face Lelouch* sorry about that then, I will just take the other one then…….for today.

Lelouch: *leaning in to whisper into Reiko’s ear* what’s his problem?

Reiko: oh, don’t mind him, my boyfriend here has…. jealousy issues.

Takashi: I don’t have “issues” I am just overly protective *with slight sarcasm added*

Lelouch: don’t worry I completely understand

Reiko: oh yeah by the way he is also Vice - president of the student council

CC: (how the hell did he get that!!?) hmm….

Lelouch: wow! That is the same office I held back at my other school

Takashi: sweet, hmm…. I may end up liking you after all

Lelouch: that’s good to hear (who does this brat think he is? Talking as if he owned the place or something)

Reiko: and don’t worry, he gets nicer the more you get to know him

Takashi: oh and if you didn’t guess, I am extremely nice to her.

Reiko: *blushes* oh don’t say that, they might get the wrong idea

Takashi: but that’s the whole point.

*just then an explosion goes off*

Reiko: What the hell was that

Takashi: nothing good if I had to guess

Lelouch: oh boy, not good (why did I have to be right)

CC: don’t tell me (it can’t be… not on the same day we get here)

*TV is turned on*

-Announcer: this just in, there has been an attack staged on the government building - Queen Nunnally and King Zero were not in the building but only because they were both still on their way there.

Lelouch: oh no!! (who ever done this shall pay!! )

CC: this really isn’t good

Reiko: who would want to harm Zero or Nunnally

Takashi: yeah they were the best things that ever happened to Japan

Lelouch: oh, I take it you’re both Japanese

Takashi: and what of it? (if he dares calls me an eleven I swear I will kill him now)

Lelouch: oh I meant nothing by it, I was just asking

Takashi: well, not completely, we are both half Brittanian

Reiko: yeah my mother is Japanese but my father was, full blooded Brittanian

Lelouch: was? You mean

Takashi: don’t ask about him, he died at the end of Lelouch Vi Brittania’s reign

Lelouch: oh I am sorry

Takashi: by the way what was your name again?

Lelouch: um…. I was named after him, my name is Lelouch

Reiko: *eyes water a little* that’s sad

Takashi: there you go, you made her cry

Lelouch: I am sorry for what he has done

Takashi: what do you mean? not like you could have helped it. Hell you were probably even born after the bastard was dead.

Lelouch: about the same time, but……

CC: but nothing, it wasn’t your fault, deal with it (don’t ruin it now)

*TV is still on*

-Announcer: we have no reports yet as to who these terrorists are but they seem to be using siege techniques used by Zero during the Black Rebellion. Okay Zero is on the scene, he has just released the Black Knights, wait it’s the Zero Squad, with the nigh ancient yet famous Guren leading the charge.

Reiko: HEY there’s my mom!

CC: (you mean to tell me that she really is hers)

Lelouch: so your mother is Kallen Kouzuki? I hear she is quite the pilot

Takashi: that’s an understatement, she was Zero’s #1 since the beginning

Lelouch: oh I know about that (all to well)

Reiko: well if they are releasing mom this soon then they must be desperate or really pissed.

Lelouch: knowing this Zero, I say both

Takashi: maybe, but he is a mastermind, he should get rid of them in no time at all

CC: well we will see won’t we?

Announcer: WHAT THAT CAN’T BE RIGHT, sorry but there seems to be confusion with the viewers at the scene, they say that the new terrorists are winning.

*just then the TV cuts out and is replaced by the silhouette of an unknown man*

??: My name is Isaac and I have made my stand, the whole world shall bow before me!! You don’t stand a chance, even your great “miracle worker” stands in awe before me, I have even taken down the beloved Guren, and its pilot Kallen Kousuki

Reiko: NO!!! no way mom could be beaten, no way!!

Isaac: But no harm shall come to anyone. I am giving you my demands, and if they are not met in a week’s time I shall come again, this time, sparing no one.

My demands are as follows:

Return the world’s government structure to what it was under Charles Zi Brittania’s rule

Second: all non-pure blood Brittanians shall be enslaved

Lastly: all forces known as the Black Knights, of any level, shall now be under my control

Good bye, I hope you willingly comply to my demands, because it would be a shame to see the entire world fall into the chaos it just so recently escaped from.

*TV returns to normal news*

Reiko: no they won’t do it

Takashi: no they can’t, we won’t let them

Lelouch: but what can you do to stop them?

Takashi: I don’t know….. We will just have to think of something

Reiko: but… there’s nothing we can do

Lelouch: for now…. Soon enough I’m sure everything will be taken care of

CC: ( I don’t want to know what he means by “for now”) hmm…. Soon enough


 

here it is....hope you guys like it....(its the whole ep.... and sorry its sooooo long)

Gundam Pilot
JQuest15
Posts: 27,235
Registered: 01-16-2009
0

Re: Code Geass: R3 Zero's Requiem

Reply to Takashi8188 - Message ID#: 50070042

Wouldnt this go in the fan fic folder? >.>

 

Just sayin is all.

T.O.M. v2
Takashi8188
Posts: 2,410
Registered: 02-21-2009
0

Re: Code Geass: R3 Zero's Requiem

Reply to JQuest15 - Message ID#: 50070064

yes it should... and i will work on it in a few minutes - ok

 

so...did you like it?

Kei Pirate
FrostDancer
Posts: 7,243
Registered: 11-17-2007
0

Re: Code Geass: R3 Zero's Requiem

Reply to Takashi8188 - Message ID#: 50070042

I will say this. Very interesting so far. Others would be better at handing criticisms than I would, so listen to them. Keep up the good work.

"I, who stand in the full light of the heavens command thee, who opens the gates of hell, come fourth divine lightning! This ends now! Indignation!" - Jade Curtiss(Tales of the Abyss)
"THE PRESIDENT HAS BEEN KIDNAPPED BY NINJAS.
ARE YOU A BAD ENOUGH DUDE TO RESCUE THE PRESIDENT?" - Bad Dudes
Midnight Runner
Noble10
Posts: 11,292
Registered: 02-14-2009
0

Re: Code Geass: R3 Zero's Requiem

Reply to Takashi8188 - Message ID#: 50070042

1. "ground-ZERO" is a TERRIBLE pun and I would of demanded Isaak be executed for saying it, if it weren't for the fact that he's my character.

 

2. Milly would NATURALLY have a few more questions if her former friend-turned-Tyrannic Emperor that died showed up 18 years later. (I'll forgive it as necessary for the progression of the story).

 

3. Lelouch and C.C. (C.C. especially) seem FAR too interested in interacting with and understanding Rapeko Reiko and Takashi. I would use the phrase "out-of-character", except that wouldn't come CLOSE to accurately describing the unfathomable levels of character atrophy that is occurring. (unless this is another act, though my leading theory is that 18 years of hiding made them totally coo-coo / koo-koo / however you spell it)

 

4. KING Zero? That's just... nevermind. :smileyindifferent:

 

5. Thank you Takashi. Thank you for giving my character the ability to change the way his name is spelling with a snap of his FABULOUS fingers.

 

Other than that, great job, yay for the premiere of your fanfic and double-yay for the appearance of my identity-amorphous character! :smileyhappy:

"I watch the world. The sun shines. Stars twinkle. Plants grow. Animals feel. And humans have souls. I watch the soul. The soul can hear the voice of God. Taste its sweet fragrance. Savor its words. Touch its outstretched fingertips. I watch the world. I watch the soul. I realize that the light guides my footsteps."


NX

T.O.M. v2
Takashi8188
Posts: 2,410
Registered: 02-21-2009
0

Re: Code Geass: R3 Zero's Requiem

Reply to Noble10 - Message ID#: 50071373

yes...im sorry for all of that little stuff but...i ran out of editing time..so  i went with what i had....

 

 

oh..and you could have help me more if i could PM you......

Gundam Pilot
JQuest15
Posts: 27,235
Registered: 01-16-2009
0

Re: Code Geass: R3 Zero's Requiem

Reply to Takashi8188 - Message ID#: 50070042


Takashi8188 wrote: CC: Is that so…. Who would have thought that you would one day be surrounded by the kids of the very people you grew up with.

 



1st..thats sounds so ** Yo Jo e! ** weird you have no idea. xD

 

Isaak.....Brilliant, though i had no idea he was gonna be the antagonist.

 

 

Good job you came through bro.

T.O.M. v2
Takashi8188
Posts: 2,410
Registered: 02-21-2009
0

Re: Code Geass: R3 Zero's Requiem

Reply to JQuest15 - Message ID#: 50073474

glad you liked isaak

 

- and.... well... i was having a little touble with finding the best line for that particular part....

 

 

 

anyways...did you like it?

Kei Pirate
jamitrius
Posts: 12,734
Registered: 08-23-2007
0

Re: Code Geass: R3 Zero's Requiem

Reply to Takashi8188 - Message ID#: 50073569

This seems familiar. :smileytongue:
protoman8788 RainyCityNights Masta_ShakeZoidberg JQuest15
He said, "What is a Jamitrius?"

I want to fill your bowl with my cereal.



Sailor Scout
Posts: 11,352
Registered: 03-16-2008
0

Re: Code Geass: R3 Zero's Requiem

Reply to Takashi8188 - Message ID#: 50073569

Good start, i enjoyed it.
"The world will know that few stood against many, that free men stood against a tyrant, and in the end even a God king can bleed".
Kei Pirate
jamitrius
Posts: 12,734
Registered: 08-23-2007
0

Re: Code Geass: R3 Zero's Requiem

Reply to Noble10 - Message ID#: 50071373


Noble10 wrote:

1. "ground-ZERO" is a TERRIBLE pun and I would of demanded Isaak be executed for saying it, if it weren't for the fact that he's my character.

 

2. Milly would NATURALLY have a few more questions if her former friend-turned-Tyrannic Emperor that died showed up 18 years later. (I'll forgive it as necessary for the progression of the story).

 

3. Lelouch and C.C. (C.C. especially) seem FAR too interested in interacting with and understanding Rapeko Reiko and Takashi. I would use the phrase "out-of-character", except that wouldn't come CLOSE to accurately describing the unfathomable levels of character atrophy that is occurring. (unless this is another act, though my leading theory is that 18 years of hiding made them totally coo-coo / koo-koo / however you spell it)

 

4. KING Zero? That's just... nevermind. :smileyindifferent:

 

5. Thank you Takashi. Thank you for giving my character the ability to change the way his name is spelling with a snap of his FABULOUS fingers.

 

Other than that, great job, yay for the premiere of your fanfic and double-yay for the appearance of my identity-amorphous character! :smileyhappy:


 

Well I would assume he would want to know why Reiko looks so much like Kallen.
protoman8788 RainyCityNights Masta_ShakeZoidberg JQuest15
He said, "What is a Jamitrius?"

I want to fill your bowl with my cereal.



Midnight Runner
Noble10
Posts: 11,292
Registered: 02-14-2009
0

Re: Code Geass: R3 Zero's Requiem

This widget could not be displayed.

Are you talking about me? I don't see anyone else around, so you must be talking about me. :smileymad: :smileytongue:

 

FYI, I'm not one of those berserk CG lovers (like the guy with that name) that thrash everyone who speaks anything remotely negative about CG. I love it as a whole, but I can recognize the flaws in it as well...

 

Besides, this is the first fanfic I have made a character for. If you ask me, I say that's a cause for celebration.

"I watch the world. The sun shines. Stars twinkle. Plants grow. Animals feel. And humans have souls. I watch the soul. The soul can hear the voice of God. Taste its sweet fragrance. Savor its words. Touch its outstretched fingertips. I watch the world. I watch the soul. I realize that the light guides my footsteps."


NX

Midnight Runner
Fear_Itself
Posts: 14,031
Registered: 02-29-2004
0

Re: Code Geass: R3 Zero's Requiem

Which one was yours again?
Justice divine doth smite you with its hammer.
Midnight Runner
Noble10
Posts: 11,292
Registered: 02-14-2009
0

Re: Code Geass: R3 Zero's Requiem

Reply to Fear_Itself - Message ID#: 50083309

Isaak. (and Isaac apparently, thanks to Takashi's spelling)

"I watch the world. The sun shines. Stars twinkle. Plants grow. Animals feel. And humans have souls. I watch the soul. The soul can hear the voice of God. Taste its sweet fragrance. Savor its words. Touch its outstretched fingertips. I watch the world. I watch the soul. I realize that the light guides my footsteps."


NX

T.O.M. v2
Takashi8188
Posts: 2,410
Registered: 02-21-2009
0

Re: Code Geass: R3 Zero's Requiem

This widget could not be displayed.

as much as i love watching Noble getting thrashed.... stay on topic plz...

- i want more opinions and... such... - even possible ideas for the rest of the story

Gundam Pilot
matrixman124
Posts: 28,248
Registered: 11-06-2004
0

Re: Code Geass: R3 Zero's Requiem

Can't you think of your own ideas? XD
マトリックスにある... 私は考える... 多分... My Member Card. . . I'm Married to Angel
HEIL MUSTANG! 'He Will Make The World A Better Place!'
!!!!!!!retcarahC hcealB yM What? I can't hear you. I'm too busy fapping to Hetalia. Visored FC! Need some motivation?
IT'S ALIVEEEE~!!
AIM: matrixman124 YIM: matrixdude124 SteamID: doublefang5
You will be missed, Gecko.