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Code geass R3: Chaotic Renya

umm, I just remake this new board since the last one is ulter failure :smileysad:. If you haven't read my previous board then let me said this one more time. I'm very bad grade at writing and English at school so please pardon my misspell, grammar and/or pronounce, and feel free to fix my mistake. Lastly, please give me some reply that said your opinion of my story, tell me if it bad or not, please at least post something or else i never know if anyone even bother to read it. OH! before i forgot, my title name is lame, so please if you think of better title, please let me know.

 

Since i like comedy, i add a little in the story at well. Hope you guy dont hate me for this.

Take note that when I put () it mean the character is doing an action,  and if I put “” inside () that mean the character is thinking, thank.

Code Geass R3: Chaotic Renya

Prologue

18 years have pass since the "death" of the Demon Emperor Lelouch, Princess Nunnaly now becomes Empress of the Holy Empire of Britania, along side with Zero the Hero of the World. The two with their friends have brought peace to the world for the last 18 years, but unaware of the Evil that hides under the world waiting for the chances to bring destruction one more...

A black car have just arrive in front of the abandoned mansion several mile outside of the city (sorry forgot the city name, but I’m not sure if it Ashford or not) from the car come out 3 people that seem around the same age, 2 of them walk toward the house hand in hand while the third walking behind them looking around in aw. One of the two who walk toward the house (a young man with a long black hair that reach his shoulder and a pair of noble purple eyes) take out a key and open the door, he then offer a hand to the young woman (who have long beautiful light green hair that seem to be twice at long at the young man and sparkle golden eyes) then both look at each other then smile warmthly.

 

                 Young woman: So this is where we going to live from now on huh? Not bad at all!

                 Young man: Of course, it is the house HE chooses anyway, and you know how HE is.

                 The young woman then walk back to the third person (a young man who have a beautiful long light green hair just like the young woman but shorter than her and two purple eye just like the first young man, but this person have a beauty that could make anyone think he a woman instead of the man he suppose to be (WOOO BISHOUNEN LOLOL!)) who still standing outside looking around at the mansion, she take his hand and look in his eyes then smile.

                 Young woman: This is the first time you see a different scene than the old house that we use to live in before. Do you feel excited  R..E..N..Y..A..?

Renya: Yes! this thing is way bigger than our old house, and it the first time I even see a place full of people at we pass by before in the city.

The young woman then smiles again and led Renya toward the house where the first young man was waiting. At they come close, the young man put out his hand to Renya.

Young man: Well....it not really my thing to said this but..... Welcome to your new life kiddo! (With a big smile)

                Renya (smile back): Thank you, FATHER!

                                                                          END PROLOGUE.

 

 

 

 

Episode 1: Fate Encounter.

The mansion have been abandon right after it was build 2 years ago, but the inside is brand new. All furniture and everything inside the house show that there are people regular come and clean it everyday ever since it been abandoned. Anyone who comes inside the house will immediately realize that this mansion is build for the riches and nobles.

                 Young woman (look around the house): This house is AMAZING! I’m impress that you able to obtain it Lelouch!

                 Lelouch (smirk): Heheh don’t you underestimate your husband now C.C. I have foreseen a day when we have to move out of that isolated orange farm and live with society because of Renya. Actually I already planed to move here 2 years ago so that Renya can learn more from society for himself instead of reading it in book. And I think it good that he interacts with kids his age, I don’t want him to live in that house forever isolate from the real world.

                 C.C.: I guess you right, but how did you obtain this amazing house? It cost at least a fortune.

                 Lelouch: well 2 years ago I talked to Jeremiah about it, and he also think it a good idea too and said to leave everything to him. I guess he did overdo it a little bit.

                C.C. (mockingly): Heh, his loyalty to his Demon Emperor know no bound I see.

                Lelouch: oh cut out with the Emperor already, this past 18 years I have become a good father and a good farmer at that. The Demon Emperor dies 18 years ago.

                C.C. (smirk): So you a bad husband then?

                Lelouch (blush): That… that is up to you to decide! (Then he decides to chance subject since he knows he will lose at this game to C.C.) Any….Anyway you and Renya should get a chance of cloth. We have somewhere to go!

                C.C.: Huh, where?

                Lelouch: There a pizza restaurant in the city that happen to catch my attention, (laugh) and I know you wanna go there, after all you been pizza-free for the last 18 years.

                C.C.: Who care about the cloth, we going right this instant, (then she yell to Renya) Renya, get to the car, we going to the city!

Renya (yell back): Huh, why? We just get here.

                C.C. (take Lelouch hand and run to the car while yell back at Renya): Don’t worry, you gonna have lot of time looking around later, right now we have more important thing to do.

Renya (now reach the front door): What is it that so important that we have to leave right away?

                C.C.: it PIZZA!

                            In the city…

 Lelouch’s car park in front of a restaurant call “Cardemonde’s Family Pizza”, Lelouch step out of the car then looks up at the name and smile.

                C.C. (walk toward Lelouch): hmm, so this is what catches your attention?

                Lelouch (still smiling): Well, it been 18 years since I last saw him, it good if I paid my own buddy a visit and see how he doing.

                C.C.: Won’t that surprise him? After all you suppose to die remember?

                Lelouch: hmm, if it him, I think it’ll be alright, since he did help me out in the past even after what I become.

                C.C. (smirk): If you said so.

The three of them walk inside the restaurant and seat in a family booth. A waitress immediately come and asks for their order. Lelouch then look at the waitress while C.C. and Renya focus on the menus in their hand.

                Lelouch : Actually, can you tell me who the owner of this place pleases? (Smile at her)

                Waitress (look at him confuse): oh, the boss name is Rival, Rival Cardemonde, same at the name of this place. But this it odd, since the boss is quite famous because of this Pizza business of his, he own many restaurant across the world, he even in the new before at a multi-billionaire. Most people in the city should know about him.

                Lelouch: Guess I’m not one of those people, actually we just move here from the country so there lot of thing we don’t know. Is Mr. Cardemonde here?

                Waitress: Yea, he may own a lot of restaurant across the world, but he spend most of his time in this place, I think because his wife is the principal of the famous Ashford Academy and his children also attend there.

                Lelouch (smirk “Ashford’s principal? This is better than I though!”): Would you mind showing me to his office please? (Give a killer smile to the waitress)

                Waitress (blush): S...Sure! But I don’t know if he will let you in though, after all you can’t just go and meet with a multi-billionaire just like that.

                Lelouch: Oh don’t worry, actually I hear of him before from my parent, it appear they attend Ashford Academy together when they in high school and are good friends, that when I notice the name, I though I should greet him.

                Waitress: I guess it alright then, please follow me.

 At Lelouch stand up and ready to go, C.C. suddenly stand up too and follow him.

                Lelouch: C.C. you don’t need to follow me.

                C.C.(give Lelouch a glance): hmm you think I’m just gonna let you go and flirt with that waitress, then you are so wrong buddy.

                Lelouch (blush): Fl…Flirt? I don’t know what you talking about, you worry to much. (look away from C.C. eyes.

                C.C.: Like you can fool me, you been isolate from woman for 18years now, I bet the beast in you is ready to be release. Don’t you think I forget about the 500 dates event you have back in your school days? I AM GOING, whether you like it a not.

                Lelouch (sigh): Fine fine!  There no use in argue with it, come if you like.

                C.C. (now look at Renya): Renya, just order whatever you like, we’ll be right back, Ok?

                Renya: B… But I don’t…

Before he could finish C.C. and Lelouch already gone.

                Renya: … know how or what to order! (Sigh) (“This is the first time I even walk in here, how they suppose I know how to order this thing, I don’t even know what pizza taste like”)

                                While Renya looking at the menus and sigh, he didn’t notice a girl in waitress uniform stand next him.

                Unknown: Umm…. Excuse me!

                Renya (just realize what happen): Oh, sorry, can I help you?

                Unknown: your order please!

Renya then look up, and what he see make him daze at can’t believe what he saw. This is the first time in his life that he ever saw a woman beside his mother and his aunt. Her figure is slim and beautiful just like his mother, she have smooth long crimson red hair that can melt his heart, and at he stare at her beautiful blue eyes, Renya suddenly feel strange, a feeling he had never had before. But then the beautiful girl interrupt his paradise.

                Unknown girl: um… may I take your order please?

                Renya (still in daze): wow, you beautiful!

                Unknown girl (blush): T…. Thank you? (Then giggle and give Renya a smile) This is not first time I hear that, but you are the first to ever said that straight to my face.

                Renya (now blush a little): I…I’m sorry, I don’t know what wrong with me.

                Unknown girl (smile again): oh don’t worry yourself about it. Actually I also think that you are the most beautiful girl I ever saw at well. (Now blush, thinking how she been stand there and stare at this beautiful girl before ask her for order)

                Renya (now stop blushing): GIRL? But I’m a GUY!!!

                Unknown girl (shock): ehhh… I’m so so so sorry, it just that… you... so… so…, please I’m very sorry sir. (bow and blushing)

                Renya (now had calm down): N…no I should be the one to apologize, it just that ever since I was little, because of my look, my mother make me wear bunch of embarrassed cloth, and it start to get to me.

                Unknown girl (still blushing): I’m still very sorry for that. My name Rae, Rae Weinberg, nice to meet you. How may I take your order? (Now giving Renya a big smile)

                Renya (don’t know what to do): I’m Renya, Renya v…

Suddenly, Renya remember that his father have warn him that he must reveal his heritage to anyone under any circumstances, but to use the name his father had tell him to.

                Renya (“that was close”)... it Renya Lamperouge, nice to meet you. But actually, this is my first time eating this pizza; I have no idea what to order.

                Rae: oh wow, never eating pizza before? That is a surprising new, I never image that I’m gonna meet someone who never know the taste of pizza before. Alright, at an apology for before, I’ll help you order the best dishes in the house. How many order do you want?

                Renya: huh? Umm, uh… orders for 3 people please.

                Rae: alright, just wait for little bit.

                Unknown: Rae…. RAE, are you ready to leave yet?

 Both Renya and Rae turn toward the person who the voice belong to. At Renya glance around, he notice the person who the voice belong to. At his surprise there stand a women who look almost identical to Rae, except her crimson his is shorter and she look a bit older than Rae.

                Rae: Oh, mom, I’m almost done, this is my last costumer, can you wait for a bit?

                Rae (now to Renya): That my mom, I have an early leave today since my dad just come back home, and we plan to eat dinner in a famous restaurant. (Rae impression is now somehow brighter than before at her talking about her family.) Anyway you are my last costumer, I will turn in the order, and they will deliver it to you later. well nice talking to you Renya, and sorry about my mistake before.

                Renya (smile): oh don’t worry about it, I don’t mind anymore.

Rae run to turn in Renya’s order, then run toward her mom. Before she out of the door, Rae turn back to Renya and wave her hand good bye. At the door close, Renya is still staring at the space where Rae was standing.

 

                                In front of Mr. Rival office….

 

                Waitress: Can I have you name please?

                Lelouch: oh it Lelouch, Lelouch Lamperouge.

                Waitress (shock): Le…Lelouch?

                Lelouch (laugh): yes, Lelouch, but it not the Demon Emperor Lelouch, I just happen to have the same name at him.

                Waitress (relieve): oh… you scare me for a moment. Y…yea you right, there no way that Demon still alive, I’m sorry for confusing you with a savage beast like that.

                Lelouch (still laughing): I got that a lot when people learn my name, don’t worry about, although it a real hassle to have this name.

                Waitress: I bet. Please wait right here, I’ll go tell the boss you want to meet him.

                Lelouch (give her another killer smile): Thank!

The waitress blushes and knocks on the office door.

                Unknown: come in!

The waitress walk in then close the door behind her.

                C.C. (now staring at Lelouch): do you have to flirt with her one last time before she go in, u beast?

                Lelouch (look away from her eyes): I don’t know what you talking about, I just smile at her like I normal did with other girls. (Smile playfully)

                C.C.: So she not the first huh? But wait, we been staying isolate for 18 years, the only girl you ever saw is me and Anya. !!!!!!!!! Don’t tell me you flirt with Anya too. (Now furious)

                Lelouch (now scare a little cause he know he take it a little too far): N...No of course not, I would never do that to Anya, come on I was just joking.

Then Lelouch were safe by the waitress that walk out of the office.

                Waitress: Ok, the owner would like to see you now.

                Lelouch: thank you! (“Phew, that was close. Save by the waitress”)

After the waitress disappear, Lelouch fix his cloth, ready to go meet his old friend again.

                C.C.: So you just gonna greet him?

                Lelouch (smirk): That the plan, at least it was tilled I learn who he married to.

                C.C.: don’t tell me you up to something after 18 years again?

Lelouch (now give C.C. a sinister smile): oh you’ll see C.C. you’ll see.

Lelouch open the door, and walk in to see his old friend who he have miss for the last 18 years.

 

End Chapter.

 

 

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oh i forgot to mention, the Renya in my story have nothing to do with the manga "Code Geass: Jet-black Renya". And before anyone ask, it mind be that C.C. still remember about the past Renya and decide to give her son that name. So if the name offend anyone, then I'm sorry about it.
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since no body post any comment on the story, i guess it really bad huh? guess i should stop post new chapter. Total failure >.< sigh
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Don't let lack of constant replying to your stuff get you down. :smileywink:

People are reading it but not everyone does the whole reply to everything thing around here. I'd say keep posting your story in this thread, chapter by chapter, and see where the practice takes you. :smileywink:
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alright, i'm currently work on chapter 2, but i need some help, for more detail see this same thread in Fan Fiction session.
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Alright, before anyone think anything, i KNOWN that most of the line in this episode is lame and grammar and spelling probably wrong a lot too. I write this when i got a major headache and too lazy to fix it, so i'm sorry to anyone who read this first. And also to Lelouch and C.C. fan, I'm very sorry, i change Lelouch and C.C. personalities a little bit, since i figure 18 years of solitude with their son should make them a little different from before.

 

Episode 2: Transfer Students.

 

 

                                At Lelouch and C.C. walk in the office, they spot a man with short blue hair  standing over his desk with his back toward them.

                Man (seem angry): I don’t know who you are or what you want, but how dare you use the name of my best fri- (now turn around to look at Lelouch and C.C.)

                Man (surprise): -end, no… no way, Le… Lelouch is… is that really you? (Focus on Lelouch)

                Lelouch (smile):  The one and only.

                Man: How…. How can this be, I saw you get stabbed with my own eyes 18 years ago, you not a ghost or an illusion are you?

                Lelouch: Come now Rivalz, if I’m either of those, then how come my hair grows longer than the time I “die”?

                Rivalz: Yes… yes you right, you may look identical to the Lelouch I know from the past, but your feature did change. But how can you be alive, and don’t look any older than before?

                Lelouch: Let just said, I have inherit a special power from my father, that save my life and give me my youth. I can’t tell you more than that.

                Rivalz: That hard to believe, but it don’t matter at long at you still alive.

                                Rivalz run toward Lelouch and give his old friend a hug at though he just had been reuniting with his own family.

                Rivalz (now crying): Lelouch, thank goodness! You don’t know how glad I am now that I know you still alive. These past years, not once had I forgot the day that I saw my best friend die in front of my eyes. (Now releasing Lelouch)

                C.C.: Hmm, and I though everyone hate the Demon Emperor. Never though that I hear someone said they be glad that he still alive.

                Rivalz (now realize that there someone else beside him and Lelouch): *sniff*… umm, sorry, and who mind you be? (Look at C.C.)

                Lelouch: Oh right! Let me introduce you Rivalz. This is C.C., she my wife for the last 18 years.

                Rivalz (Laughing): Wife Eh! Lelouch, even after you “die” you still popular enough to catch **werd** a beautiful young lady. (Now to C.C.) But you look familiar, have we met somewhere before?

                Lelouch (Laughing): Trust me Rivalz, she not at young at you think she is. And I doubt that you ever met her before either. (“Now that I think of it, could Rivalz have met C.C. back when we still at Ashford? Well best if he doesn’t know more than he already had”)

                Rivalz: Right, right!  Anyway, nice to meet you C.C. and thank for took care of my best bud all this time.

                C.C.: Same to you to.

                Rivalz: So can you stay for a while Lelouch, I want to chat with you about what happen in the past years.

                Lelouch: I would love to, but I can’t, my son is probably waiting for me.

                Rivalz: oh you have a son now? I actually have a twin one girl, one boy; they just turn 17 last month.

                Lelouch: my son is the same age at well. And correct me if I’m wrong, but are they the Prez’s kids?

                Rivalz (laugh): That right! I manage to make her love me, I’m amazing am I?

                Lelouch: That is while an accomplishment.

                Rivalz: Well, since our kids the same age, I hope they can become friend with each other like we use to.

                Rivalz (now serious): Lelouch, if there anything I can help you with, don’t hesitate and ask. I am now different than how I use to be. I’m not the same boy who can only watch his friends die and not be able to do anything. I don’t want to lose you a second time. (He start to cry again)

                Lelouch: Same old Rivalz, you may be older now but you haven’t change a bit. Actually there is something you can help me with.

                Rivalz: what is it?

                Lelouch: I need you to tell the Prez to make three transfers file to Ashford Academy. One for me, one for my wife, and one for my son.

                Rivalz: huh? You intend to go back to school?

                Lelouch: why not? I look the same at I was back then, I can easily blend in at a student.

                Rivalz: Well, alright if that what you want. I’ll talk to Milly about it. So what do you want to put in the files?

                Lelouch: The Prez should still have my old file when I’m still a student in the old day, just keep mine the same. The other two should be to Cecilia and Renya Lamperouge. Renya file should be similar to mine since we posing at twin. At for C.C. file well… (Turn to look at C.C.)

                C.C.: I don’t really care; you can put whatever you like in there.

                Lelouch: well, that’s that, the ages should all be 17.

                Rivalz: I don’t know if Milly still have your file, Lelouch. After you become the Emperor, all the files regard of you at Lelouch Lamperouge have been destroyed.

                Lelouch: don’t worries, knowing the Prez, I bet she secretly keeping some of the files somewhere, just ask her for it.

                Rivalz: Alright, I’ll tell her about it. But you should go and talk to her directly on the next school day.

                Lelouch: I will. Well now, I need to get back soon, I’m worry that something may happen to Renya.

                Rivalz: I wish we can chat for a little more, but guess we can do it some other time. I’m just glad that you are still alive, Lelouch.

                                Lelouch start to walk out of Rivalz’s office, then he notices that C.C. still stands there without moving.

                Lelouch: you coming, C.C.?

                C.C.: Can you wait for a mins? (Start to walk toward Rivalz)

                C.C.: Can you do me a favor?

                Rivalz: If I can, I’ll try my best.

                C.C. (whisper): I need you to this… and this… alright?

                Rivalz (look confuse): uhh, but aren’t he your ….

                                Before Rivalz could finish his question, C.C. already drags Lelouch out of the office and start head back to Renya.

                Renya (eating a slice of pizza): Welcome back! What took you guy so long?

                Lelouch (seat beside C.C.): oh, we just go talked to an old friend whom I haven’t seemed for so long.

                Lelouch (watch Renya): Renya, do you remember when we talked about school?

                Renya: You mean the place where lots of kids come to study and make friends?

                Lelouch: Yea, I remember you said that you always want to go there.

                Renya: Yes, I did. It sounds fun.

                Lelouch: Well, we are going to go there starting next Monday.

                Renya: Real… Really, WOW.

                Lelouch (laugh): I’m glad that you like it.

 

                                Next Monday morning, Renya were still sleeping holding his favorite stuff animal “Mr. Cheese”, suddenly the door slam open, then C.C. coming to the room.

                C.C. (in school uniform): Renya, time to get up honey.

                Renya: Moth… Mother, what are you wearing?

                C.C.: This is the uniform of the school we go to! Did you forget about it?

                Renya: Oh yea, father did said something about this before, we going now?

                C.C.: We still have time. (Hand Renya a bag with a uniform in it) Hurry up and change, we’ll be leaving soon.

                Renya: Ok.

                                Down at the dining room.

                Lelouch (To C.C. who just come down): So how Renya?

                C.C.: Oh, he fine, but you should be prepare.

                Lelouch (confuse): Prepare for what?

                C.C.: You’ll see in a minute. (Start giggling)

 

                                Several minutes later.

                Renya (run down to the dining room): MOTHER! What the heck is this?

                                Both Lelouch and C.C. turn to look at Renya. Then C.C. began giggling again while Lelouch is shock out of his mind.

                Renya: Why is my uniform having a skirt? It look exactly like your!

                C.C. (still giggling): I’m sorry, Renya. They much have delivered the wrong uniform, it happen all the time.

                Lelouch: (“Yea right, like that ever happen, you did this on purpose. So that the thing you discuss with Rivalz back then huh”)

                Renya: What do I do, I don’t want to wear this to school!

                C.C.: we don’t have a choice Renya, you can’t miss your first day of school, it’ll give a bad impression of who you are.

                Lelouch: (“I think it give even worse impression if he go to school in that!”)

                C.C.: well, anyway it’ll be fine, you look cute in it.

                Renya: that even worse, I don’t want to look cute in “this”.

                C.C.: if anyone asks, we just tell them the true that, some clumsy delivery guy mess up and give you the wrong uniform. No one will laugh at you.

                                She then drags both Lelouch and Renya outside.

                C.C.: Come on you two, you don’t want to be late for your first day now, do you?

                Renya (complaining to self): this is not fair!

                Lelouch (sigh): I wonder if this gonna be alright.

 

 

                                At Ashford Academy, Lelouch and his family just walk into the principal office. They all saw a beautiful blond woman seating on the principal’s chair, looking at the files spread out on the desk.

                Unknown (Look up): So it true, I have some doubt when Rivalz told me that you are still alive, Lelouch.

                Lelouch (Smile): Yet, you don’t look surprise like I though you would be. Same old Prez, you can take on anything so easy.

                Milly: Hah, like anyone not surprise when their friend comes back from the death. I just prepare for it, that all.

                                Milly then start to study Lelouch, then C.C. then onto Renya.

                Milly: But it still amazing how you still look almost the same at I remember. The two behind you must be your wife and kid, eh. But Rivalz told me you have a son, but now you bring a daughter instead, do I need to change her file?

                Lelouch (smiling): No need for that, (now walk behind and hold on to Renya shoulder) at you see this here is my son, Renya.

                Milly (confuse): But why is he wearing a girl uniform? Is it a hobby?

                Renya (embarrass): N… No way! I hate to dress like this the most!

                C.C. (giggle): ah this is just a delivery mix up, no need to worry Mrs. Principal.

                Milly (laugh): if you said so. (Look at Lelouch) But Lelouch, If you up to something again, please do it somewhere else, I don’t want any trouble involve this school. I have responsible for this place, you known.

                Lelouch: I’ll try my best.

                Milly (sigh): You better. Now do you need someone to show you to class?

                Lelouch: No need to. This place haven’t change at all, I should be able to find my way around.

                                Then the bell ring.

                Lelouch: Well then if you excuse us Prez, it a pleasure to be able to chat with you again, but it look like homeroom about to start. (Start walking outside with C.C. and Renya)

                Milly: Yes, I am really glad that you still alive Lelouch. But remember what I said, don’t you dare cause me trouble like before.

                                Lelouch just give her a smile and begin to walk toward his class.

 

                                At the start of homeroom, the teacher announces about the transfer students, and asks them to introduce themselves.

                Lelouch: Hey, my name Lelouch Lamperouge, my families just move here from the country, so there lots of thing I don’t know, I hope that you all can help me, I’ll be in your care from now on.

                Student #1: Le… Lelouch? Didn’t you just say Lelouch? Isn’t that the same name at the…

                Lelouch (laugh): I get that reaction a lot. Alright! Before anyone else ask,  I just happen to have the same name the Demon Emperor, it just a coincidence, we not relate to each other whatsoever.

                Lelouch (changing subject): (grasp C.C. shoulder) This is Cecilia Lamperouge, she my long distance cousin, but you guy better not lay hand on her, she also my fiancée.

                C.C. (bow) : please take care of me.

                Student #2: Is that allowed?

                Lelouch: it is where I come from. Anyway (now grasp Renya) this is Renya Lamperouge, my twin brother. Before anyone ask, Yes, he my BROTHER, not my sister, so the guys better not go around flirting with him.

                Student #3: um… why he wearing a skirt?

                Lelouch (look away): there a circumstance where he have to, I can’t tell you more than that.

                Student #4: Then if he your brother, how come he have the same hair color at your fiancée? Is it natural?

                Lelouch: yes, it natural, Renya hair is inherit from my mother, who is a cousin to Cecilia’s mother. Anymore question?

                Teacher: Alright, I think that quite enough for introduction. Let see… we need to find you three a seat.

                                Just then someone from the back spoke up.

                Unknown: Teacher, there are seats available here.

                                Renya then immediate recognize the voice.

                Renya: Ah, you are… from the restaurant.

                Teacher: Oh, so you guy know each other? If so then you three can go seats at the empty seat. Rae, would you please help them out?

                Rae: Glad to.

                                Renya go and sit at the empty seat beside Rae, while Lelouch and C.C. settle down beside him.

                Rae: Wow, what a coincidence that we meet again in the same school, even in the same class. I didn’t know it you at first, since you wearing girl uniform, I though I was mistaken till your brother introduce you.

                Renya (embarrass): Ye… Yea. (glance at the giggling C.C.)

                Rae: this is too much of a coincidence, this is what they call…. Call…

                Unknown: Fate?  Destiny?

                                Both Rae blush and turn toward the voice.

                Rae: Lilly don… don’t suddenly said something like that.

                Lilly: What? What wrong with that? If you don’t call it fate, what do you call it?

                Rae: I… I don’t know, but it none of your business. (Changing subject) An… Anyway Renya, this is Lilly Cardemonde, she the Students Council President.

                Lilly (smile): Nice to meet ya. By the way, you seem really close with Rae so I will give you an advice. Beware of her fan club’s members.

                Renya: fan club’s members?

                Lilly: They are….

                                Before Lilly can finish the bell ring.

                Lilly: Well, you’ll see them later, just try not to get intro any trouble with them.

 

 

                                After school, Renya were stop by Rae and Lilly.

                Lilly: Renya, do you plan to join any club in the future?

                Renya: Club? Uh, I don’t know, I never join any of those before.

                Lilly: Well if you can, do you want to join the Students Council? Rae also in it. And since I just kick out my useless brother, the Vice President seat still open.

                Renya: I don’t know, it sound important, are you sure you should give it to a newbie?

                Lilly: Don’t worry, It not that hard. We’ll help you out, and normally I actually do most of the work anyway.

                Rae: Yea, it fun. Everyone from the Students Council is very nice.

                Renya: Err, Well may I have sometime to think about it?

                Lilly: Take your time, I won’t forge you. Just remember to think about it.

 

Rae and Lilly left to go home, while Renya run to meet up with Lelouch and C.C.

                Lelouch:  Students Council’s Vice President?

                Renya: Yea, is it ok if I join?

                Lelouch (smile): Sure why not, I’m sure it gonna be fun! Actually I use to be the VP of this school before.

                Renya: Really?

                Lelouch: Yea, so I could help you out with the work.

                Renya: Thank, father!

                C.C.: I just hope you don’t teach him too much of the job, or else it’ll become a Déjà vu again.

                Lelouch (laugh):  haha, I won’t, I promise the Prez after all. Now let go home, I’m hungry.

                C.C.: Immortal can’t get hungry you know.

                Lelouch: So you said you don’t want to eat pizza ever again?

                C.C.: When hell freeze over!

Episode End.

 

The Action is in Episode 3 which at my rate, gonna be a lttile while.

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I love it!!!!!!!!!!!

is it going to be a book ?

       or a movie?

cause either way I'm going to a copy

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sorry about the long wait folk, i been busy with school work and part-time job, i'll try to write episode 3 on this weekend. And at a sorry, i'll add a bonus chapter for you guy :smileyhappy:
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thanks  

 

by the way I want to to know something

 

is this gonna be from the new series or gonna be from a new book?

 

cause either way I'm buying it!

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The good new is i'm free for a while so ima start writing again. The bad new is i have to gather some idea from friends and myself for the outcome of the next 2 episode. The terrible new is, my 'sister' keep using my computer to play game. But the wonderful new is that we come to an agreement, so i can start episode 2 soon. Sorry to all who happen to like my story thus far >.<, and i also apologize because im **pickle** at english and spelling so i may make lot of mistake, plz forgive me and try to understand at best at u can, thx you (T.T)
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ChaosMasamune wrote:
The good new is i'm free for a while so ima start writing again. The bad new is i have to gather some idea from friends and myself for the outcome of the next 2 episode. The terrible new is, my 'sister' keep using my computer to play game. But the wonderful new is that we come to an agreement, so i can start episode 2 soon. Sorry to all who happen to like my story thus far >.<, and i also apologize because im **pickle** at english and spelling so i may make lot of mistake, plz forgive me and try to understand at best at u can, thx you (T.T)

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No it not gonna be a book, it just what i wrote for fun. I don't think it good enough to be a book anyway >.<, sorry. But because im busy lately i couldn't write more, and very sorry about that.
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its ok I liked it alot

it seemed to be following a new story 

that got me very interested in 

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Ok, i'll try harder this weekend to write episode 3, even if it kill me :smileyhappy:
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Ok new rule. Everything I put in the * * is the action the characters make, inside the ““is what they think. Easier this way. NOTE: cause it really, really weird for ME to write mother and father so I just write mom and dad when Renya talk about his parent. And although i said this lot of time, but pardon my grammar and spelling, too lazy to fix them.

                                                                 
                                    

Bonus Episode: Hidden Power

 

                                Early morning, two day after the Lamperouge family enrolls in Ashford Academy, Renya is exploring the school.

                Renya: (“geez, how long do I have to wear this girl uniform? Is this some kind of harassment from mom?”) (Sigh T.T)

                Unknown:  Hey, Heyyyy!!! Renya, Renya stop for a minute please. *huff* *huff*

                Renya *turn around*: Yes, how may I help you?

                Unknown: Hi, I’m in the same class at you, the name Hatashi, I’m the president of the photography club.

                Renya: Well then Hatashi, what can I do for you?

                Hatashi: umm, see my friends and I very much would like to welcome you to this school. Although it little late now but some of my friends want to meet you. Can you come with me?

                Renya: (hesitate) Sure, why not!  “Guess I waste time till Mom and Dad done with the Principal”

                               

Renya follow Hatashi to the backyard of the school. There he see a group of students gathering, all of them are male students that wear a red headband but too far for Renya to see clearly.

                MaleStudent1: ah, Hatashi here! Hatashi is that who I think he is?

                Hatashi: Yea, this is Renya Lamperouge, one of three transfer students that just transfer to our class.

                               

Up close  Renya see that the headband have a bold black word that written “ Rae ♥”

            Renya (“Rae? Why their headband have Rae name on it?”)

                MaleStudent1: *whisper to self* so you the guy who try to get all cozy with our idol.

                MaleStudent1 *stare at Renya*: So you Renya, let me introduce myself and the purpose why we call you here.

                Renya: (“purpose of calling me? So they not really welcoming me after all. Hmm… let just wait and see what they want”)

                MaleStudent1: The name Jade, and I am the president of this club, the “Rae’s Fans club”. And we demand that you stop hang around with Ms. Rae.

                Renya: (“Rae’s Fans club?”) Wait, what did you just said?

                Malestudent2: We want you to stop hang around with Ms. Rae.

                Malestudent3: Yea, try to remember that.

                Fansclub: Yea.

                Jade: At you can see, we want you to stop hang around Ms. Rae like a monkey. Ms. Rae is far too perfect to be friend with some country pumpkin like you.

                Fansclub: YEAH!

                Renya: Hold it; I don’t understand why I can’t befriend with Rae? We are classmate and around the same age, right?

                Jade: (sigh) seem like you still don’t understand the standard between you and her. Ms. Rae is one of the top beauties in this school, she rank third on the beauty contest last year, on top of that her grade are top class. She is someone who has the grace of a high class lady, her beauty and intelligence is far too great for some heap from the country side.

                Renya: but… but still I don’t see any problem for me to befriend with her, and Rae is the first person have ever to become my friend. I’m sorry, but I can’t accept your demand.

                Jade: I see, I was hoping we can do this the easy way, but if you insist, we can do the hard way too. *smile*

                Renya: The hard way?

                Jade: geez, you really is a country pumpkin. It mean, we pound you till you said you stop being close to Ms. Rae, how that? Even you must understand what that mean, right?

                Renya: (“so it coming to this after all. This could get ugly, and I promise dad I won’t do anything that cause trouble. Guess I got no choice.”)

                Jade: alright guys, there a kid who need a little lesson. Let teach him what he need to learn.

                               

But before they can do anything, they see someone come out of the main building.

                Unknown: STOP!

                Jade *shudder*: Ms… Ms. Rae….

                               

Rae and Lilly coming out to the yard where the boys gather,

                Rae: what do you guys think you doing?

                Lilly: you do know that school hour already over right?

                Jade: well… we just, we just… for… for you… Ms. Rae…

                Rae: Stop right there, I don’t know what happen but I don’t think what you do have anything to do with me.

                Jade: This… this is...

                Rae: please… please just get out of here. Is this how you treat a new transfer student?

                Jade: Ms. Rae… we just… just…

                Lily: you better get out of here before you make Rae madder than she already is.

                Jade: Al… alright. Everyone let go.

                               

After Jade and his club leave,

                Rae: Honestly, I don’t know why they do this to you, it horrible.

                Lilly: *small voice* you really dense aren’t you, Rae.

                Rae: What?

                Lilly: no, nothing! Anyway, are you ok Renya?

                Renya: thank to you guy. (“phew, I didn’t break promise with dad after all”)

                               

Renya, Rae and Lilly walk to the student council’s room.

                Lilly: this probably won’t be the last time they bother you. They must have a grudge again you after what happen. What you plan to do, Renya?

                Rae: why would they keep on bothering him?

                Lilly: you are dense.

                Renya: so what do I have to do to stop them from bothering me?

                Lilly: hmm, let me think for little.

                Renya: Thank Lilly.

                               

After a while,

                Lilly: *took a look closer at Renya, then grin* I GOT IT!

                Renya: you got a way to stop them?

                Lilly: no, but I got a way to stop them from harass you though.

                Renya: huh?

 

                                Lilly drag Renya to a storage behind the theater room,

                Renya: what are we doing here?

                Lilly: hold on sec, I remember it was here somewhere last time I saw it.

                Rae: what is “it”?

                Lilly: something fun *grin*

                Rae: I have a bad feeling about this... you better prepare for the worse, Renya.

                Renya: *gulp*

                Lilly: ah, found it.

                               

                                Lilly show Renya and Rae a dress that she just found in the old card box.

                Lilly: this room is the storage that store all the costume and dress for the theater club. Last year festival there a cosplay café, so I reckon they still have those dress in here somewhere.

                Renya: c-cosplay? What cosplay costumes have to do with my situation?

                Lilly: oh you’ll see *grin*, now change into this.

                Renya: WHAT! No, no way I can do that.

                Rae: w-well, you… you should listen to her, s-she seem to have a plan *blush*

                Lilly: there you have it, either you do it on your own, or we do it the hard way *grin*

                Renya: (“again with the “hard way””) still, I can’t just do that…

                Lilly: why not?

                Renya: isn’t that a girl dress?

                Lilly: and your point is?

                Renya: well I don’t like the “girl” part of the dress.

                Lilly: oh, I see. Well, if you said so… RAE! GRAB HIM.

                Rae: S-sorry Renya this is for your own good. *get behind Renya*

                Renya: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

 

                                This part is too intense and has been block by ME, deal with it.

                                Moment later after the intense part has pass.

                Lilly: then apply this here and here… And we done!

                Rae: *blush* oh my, this… this is… don’t you think this is…

                Lilly: it perfect if I have to said so myself. Now all you have to do is follow Master Lilly instruction and those guys won’t ever harass you again.

                Renya: but… but, this is too embarrassing…

                Lilly: nothing venture, nothing gain, I said. It a give and take thing, you know…

                Renya: but… but…

                Lilly: no but, now just copy what I do, and said what I tell you too, and everything will be fine.

                Renya: (“I can’t win, can i…”) alright, you win.

 

                                Moment later after Master Lilly training session,

                Lilly: now you are ready, go and show them what you got, young Renya.

                Renya: I-I’ll try my best… *sigh*

                Rae: (“Lilly seem to be having fun… sorry Renya”)

               

                                Renya wandering back to the backyard, depress.

                Renya: (“I hope those guys gone home already, this is too embarrassing”)

                Unknown: dam it! Now Ms. Rae gonna… gonna… dam it.

                Renya: (“that Jade. Great, my luck just getting worse and worse.”)

                Renya: um… guys… can I have a moment of your time… please…

                Jade: *look at Renya* who… who are… you *blush*. Wait, that voice… you… you are… Renya Lamperouge?

                Renya: yes… yes I-I am (“gahhh, what she means by talking shyly …”)

                Jade: w-what… what are you wearing… *look at Renya new outfit.* (Renya new outfit consist of maid uniform, maid headband, cat ear and tail, and a mini skirt which he have to hold it down with his hand)

                Renya: you… see, umm… I want to… to apologies for… for what happen before…

                Jade: well…

                Renya: *put his hand together, hold it in front of his chest*, you… you see, this is the first time I ever… ever been out of my house and meet people... and when I first got here, Rae the first person who wanna become friend with me… s-so… so I’m sorry but I can’t accept your demand. *look at Jade with teary eye*

                Jade: M-m-m-m-m-m-m-m-m-m-MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! *feel down bleeding*

                                Meanwhile, Rae and Lilly back at the storage,

                Rae: don’t you think that a little bit too much…?

                Lilly: nah, it’ll be fine, I’m sure it works out… somehow…

                Rae: are you sure we shouldn’t follow him to make sure he alright?

                Lilly: geez, you worry too much. If you follow him, something might happen.

                Rae: something wrong with Renya?

                Lilly: no something might happen to you *grin*, I saw what you stare back there.

                Rae: w-w-w-what do you….

                Unknown: RAEEEEE, Lilllllly!!! HELPPPPPPP!

                Rae: that Renya’s voice, does something happen?

                Renya: Lilly… *huff*… s-something wrong *huff* w-wrong with Jade and his club members *huff*.

                Lilly: calm down Renya. Let hurry and have a look.

 

                                Rae and Lilly follow Renya to the backyard. They witness a horrified scene of Jade and his friends all lies down on the ground, all bloody.

                Lilly: R-Renya, what happened here? Why they all bleeding?

                Rae: this is horrible, did someone did this?

                Renya: I… I don’t know, I… I just do what Lilly tell me to, and the next thing I know, they all lying there bleeding.

                Lilly: *thinking*

                Rae: t-this is very strange, what do we do now? L-let me go call the ambulance!

                Lilly: hold it! It alright! Renya, is there anything else that you notice here? Anything strange at all?

                Renya: I-I don’t know… oh, wait, I did hear something clicking after I finish talking to Jade, that when Jade and his friend all fall down.

                Lilly: hmm, I see. Rae, you and Renya should go home for now. I’ll take care of everything here.

                Rae: but… Lilly, what you going to do? Should I help?

                Lilly: no, no it fine, you and Renya just go home. You two only make thing more complicate if you stay here.

                Rae: If…If you said so, please be careful Lilly. Renya, let go!

                Renya: but… but…

                Rae: it fine, Lilly said she take care of it. I’m sure she can think of something.

                Renya: al-alright… *hesitate, then following Rae to the student council’s room*

                Lilly: *small voice* hmm, I know that Renya gonna do some damage in that outfit, but this is beyond my expectation. School gonna be fun from now on. *laugh*

 

                                The next morning, the Lamperouge family is going to their class,

                Renya: is it just me or there a lots of people staring at us?

                C.C: it not you hon, peoples do staring at us for some reason.

                Lelouch: maybe cause we new transfer students?

                Lilly: no no no, you guys got it all wrong. They are looking at you Renya, not us.

                Renya: Lilly? Me? Why me?

                Lilly: Well, why don’t you look over there and see?

 

                                Lilly point to the hall where there lots of students gathering,

                Lelouch: why everyone gathering there for?

                Lilly: why don’t we go and see? *grin*

               

The four of them walk over to the crowd when Renya notice the poster behind the people gathering,

                Renya: w-w-w-w-what is that? *point to the huge poster of him the day before doing cosplay*

                Lilly: it a poster of you at a girl.

                Renya: I can see that, but h-h-how…

                Jade: allow me to explain! You see, yesterday your wonderful cosplaying were so shocking that it knock me out, literally. But I am the president of idol fan club, my experience have enable me to capture your wonderful figure before everything around me turn dark. Ah, it a wonderful feeling I tell ya!

                Renya: uh….. Umm….. Aren’t you like bleeding on the ground yesterday? (“This guy is weird”)

                Jade: oh it alright, you don’t need to worry about that Mr. Renya, it happens from time to time.

                Renya: c-can you… um… take that poster down? It kind of bothering me.

                Jade: it a lovely poster, and I already have your family permission.

                Renya: who permission?

                Jade: her! *point to C.C. who stand over the desk with lots of Renya mini picture*

                C.C. *to the guy behind the desk*: I’ll trade you a picture of Renya napping for three of those.

                Renya: mo… I mean Cecilia, w-w-what are you doing…?

                Jade *walk over to C.C.*: ohh, that a good picture, it a deal!

                Renya *look at Lelouch*: Brother, can you do something?

                Lelouch: hmm, I’ll see if I can. *walk over to C.C.*

 

                                Lelouch and C.C. is having a heated conversation, then C.C. hand Lelouch an object, after that she get back to her trading while Lelouch walk back to Renya,

                Renya: so you were able to stop them, right?

                Lelouch: *show Renya a card* sorry kiddo, look like I’m your fan club’s member number 27…

                Renya: you got to be kidding, what to do now… ah Lilly, where Rae? She could do something about them like yesterday!

                Lilly: oh, if you looking for her. Look over there. *point to where C.C. is*

                Rae: Cecilia would you trade me some of Renya picture at well?

                Renya: y-y-you got to be kidding! Y-y-your all so mean! TRAITOR!

                Lelouch: Ki-kiddo? *look at Renya, but he already went to class*

 

After note:

                                Lelouch try to cheer Renya up, but the crying baby won’t listen to him, and keep on crying…

                Renya: Who you call a crying baby you crappy writer, it your fault that this happen!

                Me: not my fault you look like a girl… Oh wait, yes it is…

                Renya: see, and if that not enough, you even write this bonus thing when you should concentrate on writing the next chapter.

                Me: I do what I like, sue me >.>

                Renya: oh yea, how about I tell them all of the bad thing you did, you…

                Me: FIN!!!!!!!!

                Renya: don’t interrupt me you…

                Me: THE END!!!!!!!!!!!!!

                Renya: stop that!

                Me: IT THE END NOTHING TO SEE HERE, BLAH BLAH BLAH…

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            I'm sorry to announce that the original writer of this post have die (in my heart that is >.>, he too busy to bother writting the story anymore). So i am now will be new writer (i will write when i have no work from school). WARNING: I'm **beast** at grammar, spelling and the like. So try to understand to the best you can. HERE ARE SOME SYMBOL: ("") is when someone thinking (narrate the story, mostly Renya); ** is action, sometime is like emotion like surprise or shock. i forgot what "" for so i'll tell you when i know or bother to remember. LAST WORD: try to understand the best you can please.

Chapter 3: Peace End.

 

                                3 months after Lelouch’s family attended school. Thursday 5:46 p.m. In Student Council’s (SC) room.

 

Unknown voice: Gah, I’m so bored and there is nothing good on TV.

Lily: Takashi! This is the student council room, not your personal hang out. If you don’t have anything to do here, then get out.

Takashi: Oh come on, sis. I’m here to help Renya doing his job; it is a favor from our father after all.

Lily: Renya is doing fine, you only going to distract him. And please, like I don’t know that father promise to increase your allowance if you help him.

Takashi: Well… that it true, but part of me want to help out my new buddy, right Renya? .... Renya?

Renya: oh w-what? Oh yea, sure.  (“Takashi is the former vice-president and Lily twin brother. It appears he got kick out of the student council a few days before I came.”)

Unknown Voice: Don’t listen to him, Renya. If you do, then you only looking for trouble.

 Takashi: oh come on Yamamoto, since when have I ever got us in SERIOUS trouble?

Renya: (“Yamamoto Tohdoh, the discipline squat’s leader, son of the leader of the former and new Holy swords. Father has great respect for Yamamoto’s father great skill at knightmare pilot.)

Yamamoto:  *glance at Takashi* you have got me and Kentaro into big trouble so many times that I lost count.

Renya:  (“Kentaro Tamaki, son of one of the leader of the current Black Knight. I remember father mention Shiniciro Tamaki as a useless, reckless good for nothing, but he is one of the most loyalties to Zero than anyone else.”)

Yamamoto: If it not for Lady Kururugi, I will not put up with these undisciplined behaviors of your.

Takashi: give me a break. You, I and Kentaro are childhood friend ever since we met at the Black Night HQ. Shouldn’t we share joy and sadness with each other?

Yamamoto: No!

Takashi: oh come on buddy, don’t be like that. Help me out here, Marian. *Look at the SC’s Treasurer*

Marian: *Giggle* don’t be too hard on him Todoh.

 Yamamoto: As you wish, Pri-.

Marian: I told you to stop speaking in formal like that. In school, I am just another student.

Yamamoto: Yes, I understand Lady Kururugi.

Marian: no, not “Lady Kururugi” either, just Marian is fine.

Yamamoto: but, but tha-. *Marian glare at him*. Ye-Yes, understood, M-Marian.

Marian: Good.

Renya: (“Marian Kururugi, SC’s Treasurer. But her real name is Marian vi Britanian, daughter of Nunnally Vi Britanian (Queen of the Britania Empire) and Zero (Leader of the Black Knights), Royal princess of the Britania Empire. It appears she go to school to learn about commoner life, she use her father last name so no one can disturb her study. It appears everyone in the SC knew of this fact. She is supposedly my 1st cousin on father side. But father have already know about this before I even join the SC.

Renya: (“This school is full of children of the Black Knight attended; now I understand why father did what he did.”)

Flashback to 3 month ago, two day after Renya attend school. At the Lamperouge’s house.

 

 Renya: Father! You used your power at school, did you?

Lelouch: Yes, I did. I surprise that you notice. Your power has improved a little I see.

Renya:  That not important right now. Why? Who did you use it on?

Lelouch: On all the students except for the Cardemonde’s family, of course.

Renya *shock*: O-On all the students? Why?

Lelouch: Why? Simple, it the easiest way to hide any suspicions on us. You may not know this Renya, but most of the students at Ashford are children of the Black Knights. While most of the Black Knights do not know the name “Lamperouge”, but they all know of the name “Lelouch” and if that name passes around, sooner or later one of my former comrade and classmate will surely recognize it.

Renya: I don’t understand, then why you use the same name?

Lelouch: Because I like my name. *smile*

Renya: But didn’t you said before it’ll be fine since no one would think that you still alive and haven’t age?

Lelouch: Most will think that, but there are people within the Black Knights that have some knowledge of geass, it’ll be troublesome if they start to investigate the matter.

Renya:  There other people who know about geass other than us?

Lelouch: yes, but not all it secret. You know your new friend? What her name, Rae?

Renya: What about Rae?

Lelouch: She is the daughter of Kallen Kuzuki, my former Ace Pilot and now a commander of the Black Knights.

                After he mentioned Kallen’s name, Lelouch started to look down with a depress expression.

 

                                Renya though then were interrupt by a loud noise from the TV.

 

Renya: What happen?

Takashi: The TV, they were filming the arrival of the member of the Alliance. Then I think there a terrorist attack.

Marian *shock*: M-M-Mother!

                                Rae come over and holds the shocked Marian to close to her.

Yamamoto: Do not worry My Lady. Lord Zero won’t let anything happen to the Queen. Plus the Royal Guard, Commander Kallen and the Knight of One are present for them.

                                Although Yamamoto tries to reassure Marian, he himself is concern over the crisis.

   

Reporter: We interrupt you to bring the new of the terrorist attack on the Alliance Head Quarter. The Black Knights had been dispatches to stop the rebels. It appear the Royal Guard themselves have mobile against the terrorist.

                                The TV show two squadron of Knightmare mobile and form a line in front of the Head Quarter. But what happen next stun everyone on their feet.

Reporter: This-this is unreal. What just happened here? Somehow both the Black Knights and the Royal Guard were defeat in an instant. We are trying to get a visual of what just happen.

Takashi: The entire Black Knights and the Royal Guard were defeat so easy!? The enemies must have an army of new type of Knightmare to be able to do such a thing.

                                The motor show a sight of Knightmares got cut in half and lie on the ground.

 Reporter: We still can’t grasp what just happen here folk. Keitarou-san, could you replay the battle again on a slow motion please.

                                The TV once again shows the battle that just happen few minutes ago in a slow motion. When it gets to the point when the Knightmares got cut in half, the reporter gives a signal for stop the vid.

Reporter:  Stop please. There can anyone see that? There a shiny thing that goes through the Knighmare before they were all cut in half.  Is this a new kind of weapon?

Lily: What going on? I can’t see what attacking them. It looks like they fighting against an invisible enemies.

Reporter: Ladies and Gentlemen of the audience, it looks like our camera-man has caught sight of the terrorist. It-It can’t be….

Yamamoto: That is not possible! *stand up and slam his hand on the table* are you telling me that an entire squadron of Black Knights and elite Royal Guard were defeat so easily b-by a single Knightmare? The peace that were work so hard on to obtain for these 18 years were destroyed by a single Knightmare!?

                                On the TV is the visual of a lone yellow Knightmare that float over the battlefield of destroyed Knightmares.

 

TO BE CONTINUING……

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I once again apologies to anyone who happen to find this story interest. I"M **beast** AT WRITING, just wanna continue what my idiot bro abandoned, so please don't be too hard on me. I'm not good at writing idea like him.
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