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Reply to fool_on_the_hill - Message ID#: 62867706

Don't worry, I kind of half expected the Ahab archetype from someone. :smileyhappy:
I completely redid him, hopefully he'll fit in somewhat better.
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Reply to Jingai - Message ID#: 62870988

Thanks for being accommodating. He'll definitely fit into the story now (I was hoping someone would make a priest soon).

@ Hikki: Thanks for all the great submissions.

I have a lot of places to go with this story now, guys. But, don't be afraid to submit any more should y'all have ideas. This thing can still grow.
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Reply to fool_on_the_hill - Message ID#: 62875936

would it be ok if i made a ghost char? i kinda wanted to make one but i didnt wanna be greedy or anything but i noticed no one made a ghost char. >_>

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Reply to cidthekittyisfun - Message ID#: 62900846

Sure, you can make a ghost. Let me PM you some info, first.
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DeaconPhenix
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Reply to fool_on_the_hill - Message ID#: 62901932

Did everything look good with Murmur?

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Reply to DeaconPhenix - Message ID#: 62913910

Well, I did some research on to see if there's an actual demon named 'Murmur' and there actually is; the only problem is the name doesn't really fit the character's personality. I do like the character's personality a lot - and pretty much every other attribute - so would it be cool with you if I just used another name? Or made 'Murmur' an alias? I've figured out a place for him in the story, I just would like an additional name for him.
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Alright, here's my first attempt at a character. Hope he fits.

Name: Acelan
Sex: Male
Age: Ancient, appears mid-30s
Classification: Divinity

Physical attributes:
-Height: 6'1"
-Weight: ~175 pounds.
Appearance: Black sleeked back hair with brown eyes in his human form. When using his abilities his hair fades to white and his eyes shine gold. Tends to dress sort of formally; blazers, business suits, and the like.

Occupation: Peacekeeper of sorts. He seeks to ensure the "unnatural" sides of this world remain unknown to the general populace.

Family: Up to you, divinity are often all related to one another in some manner.

Personality: Overly cheerful, Acelan is friendly and respectful to just about everyone he meets. Speaks in a formal, yet grandiose, manner. He has an intense fascination with the mortal races, especially humans. His inability to think the way they do often leads to him wanting to imitate their actions - from simply following a business man on a bus to jumping off a bridge after seeing someone commit suicide. Usually he'll manage to find enjoyment in everything, though his reasoning for enjoyment is rarely inline with his subject's.

On the job he remains as cheerful as ever, however his usually friendly tone changes to one of subtle deridement. He believes all beings are lucky in some way, and those that would squander their gifts by revealing their nature - or conversely ruin the blissful ignorance of others - are fools that must be dealt with. Doesn't care (or understand) about morality or cause, he just takes a very "do as you like, but don't ruin it for the rest of them" stance on it all.

History: It's been made clear to Acelan that throughout time whenever humanity encounters the supernatural, all parties involved eventually end up suffering in one way or another. Acelan has taken it upon himself to prevent such events from being a widespread occurrence. To do this he intends to purge all that would seek to disrupt (or have already disrupted) the current status quo, no matter what manner of being they are.


I have a few ideas for another character or two, but I'm curious on how a few things work in this universe. Can werwolves reproduce(specifically with humans)? Can they control themselves in their beastial form? Do they display any animal traits as a human - increased senses, altered physical appearance, changed mental state, etc. etc.

For vampires, do they have souls and maintain their general personality or do they lose them and become kind of twisted?

Does the government have any knowledge of supernatural beings, sort of like the Initiative in Buffy?

Finally, pie or cake?
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Reply to Blah_canbespanish - Message ID#: 62929070

"Can werewolves reproduce(specifically with humans)?"

If you mean produce new werewolves via intercourse, then my answer would be no. A scratch or a bite is the only way to make one a werewolf.

"Can they control themselves in their beastial form?"

No.

"Do they display any animal traits as a human - increased senses...

It depends on the cycle of the moon. The closer it is to a full moon, the more heightened the senses.

"...altered physical appearance...

No.

"...changed mental state..."

Varies from werewolf to werewolf. Think how you would feel if you discovered you became an uncontrollable monster one night a month. It's different for each werewolf.

"For vampires, do they have souls and maintain their general personality or do they lose them and become kind of twisted?"

Vampires retain their humanity somewhat, but most give in to their vampiric natures. Those that cling to their humanity however will struggle not to give in to what they have become.

"Does the government have any knowledge of supernatural beings, sort of like the Initiative in Buffy?"

No, the government does not know to that degree; only a select few are aware of the supernatural. Like I said in regards to the vampires in an earlier post, it's akin to the muggles' knowledge of the wizard population in Harry Potter.



I hope that answers your questions. Thanks for the submission, man. I have an inkling of how he could fit into this thing (I'm still very much in the brainstorming stage).

Oh, and pake. /as-if-I-could-choose
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Reply to fool_on_the_hill - Message ID#: 62923954

 

No problem.

 

Jezebeth is a demon of falsehood and lies, so that would match up with his personality, but I think that is the name of a female demon.

 

Pyro is the prince of falsehood and lies, but his name sounds more like fire than deceit.

 

Pruflas is a demon that provokes war and quarrels, so that might work, but my research says that he has the head of an owl, which is kinda bleh to me.

 

Shax is a demon of deceit and thievery, but his appearance is again weird, he appears as a stork.

 

Sonneillon is a demon of hatred.

 

Vetis is a demon of corruption.

 

Zagan is a demon king of deceit.

 

 

 

Whichever one you think works I'm fine with. Pyro would probably be the closest fit, but I think everyone will associate it with Pyrotechnics or pyromania. Sonneillon sounds the coolest to me, but I really don't mind any of them. I like Murmur as an alias though so if there's any way you can work that in, that'd be cool.

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here ya go fool ~

Name Walter Helmick
Sex Male
Age 20 (age at death)
Classification Ghost
Physical appearance
- well technically he has no weight because hes a ghost but he appears to look around 5ft8 and 130lbs. Thin build, not much muscle.
He has short medium brown hair and green eyes. He usually is seen wearing a t-shirt and jeans, pretty casual nothing fancy.

Occupation - hmm... do ghosts even have jobs? he likes helping people out. so if he does have a job i suppose something like that lol.

Family - well he has a mom and a dad and a little sister (shes 22 now but she was 12 when he died), all of which are still alive.

Personality - Well when he was alive he was useless and clumsy. He wanted to help people and make something of his life, but everything kept screwing up for him. the saying what could go wrong does really applied to him. In the end he got depressed and commited suicide.

After he died - when he died and became a ghost, instead of moping about how much his life **beast** he saw this as another change to really do something with is uhh unlife? well either way he got a new outlook on life? erm...unlife? anyways hes cheerful and optomistic and is happy that he finally gets to be of some use and help people out! he's much happier being a ghost then when he was alive.

He can also see ghosts and other paranormal stuff which really helps the humans alot.


History - erm well like i said he was pretty useless out of luck sort of guy when he was alive. His parents kind of abandoned him too or didnt care for him, because they were frustrated how he couldnt make much of his life. His little sister liked him though, she was the only one to adore him.

Anyways, hes been dead for about 10 years if it wasnt for the fact that he occassionaly saw his little sister grow up thorughout the years he wouldnt realize 10 mins has passed let alone 10 years.



anyways sorry if this isnt a very well described char, but if you have any questions or anything lemme know and ill try and figure more out for him, also the idea for a helpful ghost goes to Jingy that gave me the suggestion when i wanted to make a ghost char but not sure what to do with it lol.


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Reply to DeaconPhenix - Message ID#: 62935106

Thanks for all the potential new names; you saved me some of the leg work. I'll try to keep in his original name in there in some way if possible.

@ Cid: Aw, I really like your ghost dude. You gave me enough to get a feel for him, but left out enough so I can take him places.
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fool_on_the_hill wrote:
Thanks for all the potential new names; you saved me some of the leg work. I'll try to keep in his original name in there in some way if possible.

@ Cid: Aw, I really like your ghost dude. You gave me enough to get a feel for him, but left out enough so I can take him places.

Cool, glad I could help.

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Name: Gabriella Haden


Sex: Female


Age: 21, 19 when turned


Classification: Vampire


Physical appearance: Slim, 5'3, 105 pounds. Shoulder-length blonde bob, blue eyes. Here's a picture.


Occupation: None


Family: Mother Anna and father Jason are both 59, and are a housewife and lawyer. Two older sisters, Christina (24) and Michelle (22) are a kindergarten teacher and a med student, and little brother Sam is 19 and about to start college. They have no idea where she is.


Personality: Quiet, nervous, jumpy. Prefers to be alone, especially since she still has trouble controlling her bloodlust.


History: Gabriella had a normal childhood in Missouri. Sure, she fought with her siblings and occasionally got into trouble, but she was a good kid for the most part. Average grades, average friends, average life. At the age of 18 she decided to strike out on her own and headed off for Penn State University, where her father had gone. Things went well for the first couple months; her grades were nothing spectacular but she was doing alright. On a cold night in February of her freshman year, she was out with a few friends at a bar and found herself talking to an attractive man about her age. Within the hour she was walking out the door with the expectation of continuing their "conversation" at his apartment. They never made it there. 19-year old Gabriella was slaughtered in an abandoned apartment building only a few blocks away. For whatever reason, the mysterious man had decided to turn her instead of just draining her. She finished her transformation alone in that building and was unable to stop herself from ripping the throat out of the curious homeless man who happened to be the first one to come across her. She snapped back to her senses after drinking him dry and was horrified at what she'd become. She made the decision to cut off all ties with her family and friends and began a new life as a reluctant monster, withdrawing from society and feeding only on unlucky hobos and other vagrants. She's tried drinking from dogs and other animals, but always returns to humans since they taste so much better. She's recently began hearing rumors of drained bodies coming up in Boston, and has decided to clean herself up and head that way in the hopes of finding others like her, someone who can just prove to her that she's not a monster.


Misc: She is, at the moment, unconnected to the vampire crime family. The one who turned her wasn't involved with them and was just a random vampire who needed a meal.

I don't know what's real from the noise, the noise.
I can't hear a thing for the noise, the noise.
I wouldn't do anything, the thunder that throws me away.
I wouldn't do anything, there's something that keeps me away.
I wouldn't do anything, something that begs me to stay.
I wouldn't do anything, something that throws me away.
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Name: Jake "Dom" Mercer

 

Sex: Male

 

Age: 19 turning 20 (if possible if not then 20)

 

Classification: Human (Psychic)

 

Physical appearance along the lines of this but obviously a bit younger http://playstationlifestyle.net/wp-content/uploads/2010/06/featur
e-Alan-Wake.jpg

 

height: 6'0"

 

weight 188 lbs.

 

hair black but in the style of the charcater in the pic. 

 

eye color: Brown

 

Occupation: Engineer (a bit of everything like Mechanical, Electrical & Civil) & Former Trainee SERE Instructor For the U.S. Army

 

Family: Both parents are dead Except his 2 Sisters One older (23) and another younger (19)

 

Personality: At times a calm, collected young adult, but for a moment's hesitation can let his emotions get the best of him. Thinks with his fists rather than his brain. Willing to do the right thing, regardless of the consuquences. Is oblivious when it comes to the opposite sex so is often hesitant to be alone with females.

 

History: Jake always wondered what his parents were talking about when they spoke of "Shadows" and "Entities" but it was all too complicated for him. He had these wierd "feelings" often but as he got older. He could tell which ones were "feelings" towrds the sisters. And which ones were for things that weren't around or could be seen. as the only boy in the family he often watched over both sisters. He remebers his father always telling him that he would soon understand about the shadows and that he would have to protect his sisters from them. *On the night of his 14th birthday. A knock came at the door, it was a young women, the parents and the women talked for a bit. They came back and told Jake to make sure he did everything he could to protect his sisters. They left with that women that night and never came back. Since the older sister took over as the parent figure to cope with the loss of our parents. Jake did everything he could to provide for his sisters. Studying various branches of Engineering that intruged him. But he wanted to be able to protect them, not just provide for them. So he enlisted in the Army. Worked through blood and sweat, mostly blood to become a Trainee SERE Instructor. Having been exposed to the nature of the military, the "feelings" he had were nothing more than childs play and straight up bull*$#@. With 3 days left before becoming a full fledged, certified Instructor.  Jake noticed a woman that seemed very familiar. the figure was no so much of a young women, but of a matured and filled out figure. The face was the same as the night of his 14th birthday. He cautiosly approached the womwne and asked for her name under the guise that she looked familiar. "Caroline" she said, "Do you have business with me" she said sternly. Afraid to ask anymore we apologized and said is was a mistake. That night Jake was running a bit late. But jake ran home to make sure his sisters wouldnt worry. When he got there that "feeling" he always had seemed to be gone from the house. His sisters werent around. But he couldn't "feel" them at all. Whether they were at school or at work. There was always a link but it seemed to just dissapper. Just like his parents they were gone, on the verge of panicking *click* his training kicks in. Observing the house and all the doors and windows to see if there was any signs of a struggle or if they made an escape. But nothing, it was as if they willingly left. The next day Jake made his ultimate decision, to find out what happened to his family. He left the SERE Insrtuctor School and dropped all of his clasess. "This is where it starts". He went on his Older Sisters computer and saw that the first thing on the screen was "Black Friday". All the things that he was told were nothing but fantasy and made up crap was right there in front of him. In that instance he felt that "link" come back....but it was different. He could tell it was his sisters but the "feeling" it gave of was different. As if it was influnced by an outer source. The next night he packed up what he could in a small back-pack, locked the house and left to find the women named Caroline. It was his only lead and she was the only person who gave off a different kind of "link" as well.*

 

*The Caroline bit if that doesnt work i can totally change that if you dont like it.

 

I'll admit this isn't very thought out like most of my characters but it's the best i can come up with after working 2 1/2 weeks straight 24/7. Sleep Deprivation kind svcks ya know? Especially when it's part of your job heh.

 

Chacrter wise if its something to similar to yours im willing to just change the whole freking thing. No worries, been looking for something like this similar to Supernatural. nice job FOTH

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Thanks for the submissions ang and JQuest. I've already got ideas for where they'll fit into things. And, neither of you need to worry about your characters conflicting with preexisting ones.
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Thought I'd make an announcement: Character submissions for Black Fridays will be open until February 14, 2012. So, if you have any plans to submit a character, be sure to post in here by then at the latest.

If you miss the deadline and have a great idea for a character that you really wish to show me, you can PM me afterwards, but this does not fully guarantee you that I will use that character. Remember, everyone, you can submit up to four characters, so if you've already made one, don't be afraid to submit more.
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Hopefully that's until the end of tomorrow and not in...uh, thirty seconds ago.

Thanks for the answers to the question. For fertility I was thinking whether or not they could have children at all, werewolf or otherwise.

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Name: Zaquiel (Goes by Zack)

Sex: Male

Age: ? (Looks to be in his mid to late 20s)

Classification: Divinity

Physical Appearance: Blonde hair, slightly shorter than shoulder length, combed back. Blue eyes. 6'0" and around 160lbs.

Occupation: A tester of faith. Formerly in God, solely, now he tests a person's faith in his or her lover, family, and humanity as a whole.

Family: I'll give you free reign with this, as I'm unsure of the logistics in this type of thing.

Personality: Skeptical until a person has proven themselves, though still courteous and very formal. After a successful trial, he loosens up quite a bit and becomes informal, even speaking with a slight Southern accent.

History: He has been a tester of faith since the beginning of time. First towards angels, then humanity after they had been created. He himself has begun to lose faith in humanity, as they have begun to lose faith in themselves. As such, he now tests humanity, not solely in a higher power, but in themselves. Though a very large majority of them fail, the few who pass stop him from giving up on humanity completely.

 

 

Erm, I hope that's good enough. And I hope Blah was right in saying that you meant later today.

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Name: Alasdair Ackart
Sex: Male
Age: 24
Classification: Psychic/Magi
Physical appearance: 5'8, ~150 pounds, small build. Works out a bit, but not anywhere as good in shape as his brother.
Hair: Black
Eye color: Grey, wears pince-nez glasses. Keeps a spare set on him at all times.
Occupation: Counselor, works at brother's clinic.
Family: The "prestigous" Ackart family of magi is quite large, with many branches. Alasdair has no real connection with most of the family, they tend to stay away from him and he accepts that. Only keeps in contact with his mother, Marissa Ackart. He and his father, Arthur Ackhart, have an extremely formal/surface only relationship due to Arthur's fear of him.

This fear is because of Alasdair possessing the same eyes as his grandfather, Arthur Sr. Arthur Sr. passed several years before Alasdair was born, but he's spent most of his life hearing various horror stories. He's also, using his ability on his dad, seen the memories first-hand. This is a secret he's kept from everyone, even Ken, and it's the main reason he's accepted the distance between he and his father.

Extremely close with his brother Ken.

Personality: Despite being very friendly and polite, he tends to be bit of an introvert. He has severe trust issues, keeping most at arms length with a facade of smiles and sunshine.

His true emotions tend to emerge when he is trying to help others. This tends to happen a lot, much to his brother's chagrin. It's very difficult for him to leave people who need help alone, sometimes leading him to disregard his own limitations and getting overly involved. Both emotionally and physically.

History: Great things are expected of those born into the Ackart family, Alasdair was no exception. Even as a child his inherent magic ability was a cause for celebration amongst the family. His entire life was to be planned from there. The best schools, a position of suitable power, and even a marriage to another established family were arranged.

Unfortunately, this was all for naught as once he began to reach puberty he developed a "special trait". While this was not uncommon for the family, the nature of this specific ability was. His eyes had the power to see into a person's soul. Their thoughts, their past, their future. In an instant his life was changed.

This was not the first time these eyes had appeared in the Ackart family. Alasdair's grandfather, Arthur Sr., possessed them as well. Using them he brought the Ackart family great power and wealth. With that power though, Arthur became increasingly paranoid. He could only focus on the worst aspects of people.

Things became even worse when his eyes developed further, he could no longer just "see" a soul he could affect it. Make people feel emotions, thoughts, or just expand on what was already there. He began to rule the Ackart family with fear, destroying his competitors ruthlessly and treating everyone as toys. As he grew increasingly mad, he also became very depressed. No longer being able to discern whether anyone around him was "real" or just a subconscious projection of his own, he took his own life.

The Ackart family recovered quickly, finally free of Arthur's reign. So when Alasdair showed the same eyes, they felt a natural fear that one day those days could return. They began to ostracize him from the family, no one willing to get close to him.

Alasdair, for his part, had no idea what was happening. Everyone he thought were his friends abandoned him, he was withdrawn from school and restricted to the estate, and even there his family avoided him. Worse yet, using his eyes, he could see the hatred and scorn. Even his own father feared him now, and he couldn't even understand why.

Upon finding out his ability only worked with naked sight, he was forced to wear glasses at all times. It didn't amount to much though, as he was devoid of most human contact aside from an occasional visit from his brother returning home.

Instead, Alasdair focused on his magical studies. He hoped that if he could prove himself to be a talented mage, one worthy of the family, they would take him back. But this moment never came, and in fact the more successful he was the more of a danger others thought him to be.

He, like his grandfather, began to become depressed over his predicament. He began looking to non-humans for companionship, practicing summoning and spending a lot of time with conversing with his familiars. Still he always felt empty.

A demon he had summoned eventually took advantage of this. Tired of being bound by humans, especially such a young one for a frivolous reason, the demon began to try and push Alasdair further into despair. He spoke to him of the terrible things he had seen humans do, of how insufferable this world can be, and generally tried his hardest to make Alasdair give up.

On Alasdair's 18th birthday, seeing no one who had come for him - not even his brother who has promised him so - the demon convinced Alasdair there was more freedom in death. Alasdair had a poison brewed and drank it that night.

But things didn't go as planned. He awoke much later on in the backseat of a car. In the driver's seat was his brother, with a wrapped box sitting in the next seat. His brother said nothing for awhile, but eventually asked if he'd like to join him for a Red Sox game. Alasdair didn't need to take his glasses off to understand, and from that point on he no longer had to stay with the "main" family.

Alasdair spent the next few years at school in Boston, living with his brother. He never heard the particulars of the arrangement, but the family had agreed to let Kenneth "watch" over him as long as Alasdair remained out of the family business and didn't draw unnecessary attention to them.

Alasdair truly feels like he owes his life to Kenneth, and his goal is to help others who have went through trauma due to "supernatural" circumstances. It was his idea to open the clinic, and he is responsible for the counseling of visitors.

Misc: Is well versed in magic relating to charms, enchantments, and general conjuration. Due to the nature of the clinic, it's difficult to keep a regular administrative/clerical staff on board. Instead Alasdair usually has familiars work things, making sure to properly "read" them before "employment".

While his eyes are no where near as strong as Arthur's, they have developed over the years as he has gotten older. Particularly he has begun to feel particularly strong emotions/thoughts from those near him - even with his glasses on.

Delving too far into a person's soul has a lot of adverse effects, particularly headaches and (if going too far) loss of consciousness with temporary blindness following. Trying to see a person's death is particularly dangerous for him. Supernatural souls tend to have different side-effects depending on the nature of the beast in question. A particularly old and powerful undead might make him feel ill for example.

At Kenneth's insistence, he sometimes "gambles" for money with his ability. Games like poker are kind of easy for someone who can read minds.

Name: Dr. Kenneth (Ken) Ackart
Sex: Male
Age: 28
Classification: Psychic/Magi
Physical appearance: 6'1, 170 pounds, in excellent shape.
Hair: Black
Eye color: Green
Occupation: Doctor running his own clinic.
Family: Same as Alasdair, except instead of a neutral relationship with his father he is openly hostile and antagonistic. He blames Arthur for everything that happened to Alasdair, and likewise hates most of the family for how things went down.

Very close and protective of Alasdair, although this is a source of embarrassment for him.

Personality: Rash, aggressive, and pretty frank, doesn't like to sugar coat things and tends to provoke those that #### him off. Can be very petty and vindictive, never letting things go. Physical altercations are not uncommon with him.

Despite his abrasive personality, he always finds himself helping others. Especially those Alasdair has gotten himself involved with. He's the type of guy who would catch you when you fall, while simultaneously berating you for being so clumsy in the first place. Male tsundere I guess.

History: His early life was similar to Alasdair's, being groomed to be the next heir. He never really liked this, always trying to test how much he could get away with, but in the end he always accepted things and went with the flow.

Like Alasdair, he came into his own special eyes. Instead of seeing into a person's soul however, he could see into a person's body. He could see ailments before people actually came down with anything, and best yet could actually "fix" or otherwise alter things. He learned early on however that recklessly messing with the human body could have severe consequences, even "cures" could end up having a terrible chain reaction.

This is why he decided to focus on medicine/alchemy rather than the more arcane arts, as he wanted a full understanding of what he was capable of. His family was overjoyed about this, believing he'd find some miracle cure and bring further fame/fortune to them.

Kenneth transferred away and studied under an old alchemist friend of the family. This man is one of the few Kenneth respects, even if their relationship was often rather rough on the surface.

Kenneth wouldn't find out about what happened to Alasdair for a few years after the fact, and when he did he was extremely pissed. Not just about how Alasdair was treated or how alone he was, but for being lied to about everything.

This was a big turning point for Kenneth, as he became to despise his family after finally seeing their "true" face. He no longer had any intention of succeeding the family, but decided to use them for as long as he could as he worked toward his true goal. A way to "cure" Alasdair of his sight.

During this time he would often try, and be denied access to, Alasdair. The few times they did meet Alasdair would always act happy, but Kenneth new it was all a lie. He threw himself further into his studies determined to help him.

On Alasdair's 18th birthday he returned to the family, this time to take him away from the family for good. Arthur however refused this proposal and the two got into a lengthy argument over how Kenneth was "throwing away his life" for a lost cause, with Arthur eventually referring to Alasdair as a monster. Kenneth lost it and struck his father, storming out daring anyone to get in his way.

When he came to finally see Alasdair he found him unconscious on the floor, dying. Kenneth used his eyes to discern the cause and treated him, but took what happened as proof that Alasdair needed out of here. He went back and, for the first time ever, bowed to his father begging him to let them go.

Eventually they came to a shaky agreement, Kenneth would take Alasdair under the condition that Kenneth would keep a "leash" on the potential threat.

Kenneth moved to Boston and, with family funding, opened up his own clinic. Along with his and Alasdair's freedom, Kenneth signed a number of contracts relating to his work. He must agree to care for any patient the family should ever send to him, as well as sign over the rights to any medicinal work he should accomplish.

He continues his research in removing supernatural "mutations" like the Ackart family eyes. Alasdair no longer needs such a cure, but Kenneth is convinced other should have the option. He believes things like lycanthropy, psychic ability, and even stuff like vampirism is something that can be cured.

Misc: As a child, while on a business trip to America, his father took Kenneth to a Red Sox game. Kenneth has been an obsessive fan ever since. It's actually part of the reason he chose Boston for the site of his clinic.

His clinic has a reputation for doing things off the books, and attracts both criminals and the supernatural. While Alasdair takes care of the magic defense mechanisms for the clinic, Ken takes care of the physical. He's always up for a fight, and a shotgun under the front desk never hurt anyone. Unfortunately having someone on hand who could instantly know whether someone is hostile tends to prevent the need for most of this...

He's a heavy smoker, as well as a frequent drinker. Keeps a spare set of glasses on him for Alasdair's sake, though Alasdair doesn't know of them.

If it wasn't clear, Kenneth has much more control over his eyes. Can turn the power off at will, focus on a single person rather than seeing everything near him, etc.
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Reply to Blah_canbespanish - Message ID#: 63709317

Thanks for the submissions. No, it wasn't too late; I fully intended to keep it open all of the 14th and close submissions after midnight.

I've got quite the cast of characters to work with now. I can't say when I'll start having actual chapters for everyone to read (I've still got to work out things a bit), but I imagine it shouldn't be too long of a wait. I'll let everyone know when things are ready (and you'll see a respective thread, of course).

I'm looking forward to writing this thing. :smileyhappy:

Edit: Oh, and werewolves can have children, the lycanthropy just doesn't pass onto the offspring via conception.
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Because I want you to see this, Blah, what country of origin are the Ackharts originally from? You mentioned in Ken's profile he and his father visiting America on a business trip and I'm curious to know where from?
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Seems like an important part for me to overlook. >_>

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Still relatively new to this site. Is this session closed?

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