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[Gaynor79]

The balls...Tatsuki kicks them somtimes.

[HardcoreHunter]

This is like holding hands for Tatsuki.

[elfie]

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HardcoreHunter wrote:

This is like holding hands for Tatsuki.

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This is how she greets her parents in the morning.

[HardcoreHunter]

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elfie wrote:

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HardcoreHunter wrote:

This is like holding hands for Tatsuki.

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This is how she greets her parents in the morning.

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Then she would get along great with Isshin.

[elfie]

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HardcoreHunter wrote:

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elfie wrote:

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HardcoreHunter wrote:

This is like holding hands for Tatsuki.

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This is how she greets her parents in the morning.

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Then she would get along great with Isshin.

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Tatsuki: "HI, FUTURE FATHER-IN-LAW!"

Isshin: "Tomboy said what??"

Tatsuki: "NOTHING!"

[Gaynor79]

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elfie wrote:

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HardcoreHunter wrote:

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elfie wrote:

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HardcoreHunter wrote:

This is like holding hands for Tatsuki.

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This is how she greets her parents in the morning.

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Then she would get along great with Isshin.

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Tatsuki: "HI, FUTURE FATHER-IN-LAW!"

Isshin: "Tomboy said what??"

Tatsuki: "NOTHING!"

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Oh I can see the awkwardness and embarrassment now.

[elfie]

The cover and PDF for Chapter 4 are on DA.

[Gaynor79]

Excellent!

[elfie]

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[Gaynor79]

A tense situation,

Tempers flaring,

Everyone just aching for a fight to break out...


Orihime!!!

[elfie]

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[HardcoreHunter]

The popular comment on this page is everyone saying that loly is a b!tch

Looks like loly is channeling her inner hummingbird yet not being as hot about it.

[Foley_is_Good_149]

That's because Loly's leaving being hot to Nel and Harribel. They are better suited to it.

I haven't swung by this thread in a month or so, and you and elfie have cranked out so much. Also, since I've finally signed up with DA, I can actually see Loly's vulgar and abusive rant. I guess I should go back and see the other mature filtered things I couldn't see previously.

elfie: Mmmmm, Unohana.

[elfie]

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Foley_is_Good_149 wrote:
That's because Loly's leaving being hot to Nel and Harribel. They are better suited to it.

I haven't swung by this thread in a month or so, and you and elfie have cranked out so much. Also, since I've finally signed up with DA, I can actually see Loly's vulgar and abusive rant. I guess I should go back and see the other mature filtered things I couldn't see previously.

elfie: Mmmmm, Unohana.

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Thanks for coming back.  NOt only are Mature Tags on DA necessary, it also gets more people to sign up so they can actually see the images.

[elfie]

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[Gaynor79]

Very Kubo-esque. Super Kami Kubo is pleased.

[HardcoreHunter]

That is Super Kami Kubo-Sama to you!

[elfie]

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[Gaynor79]

More backstory. Not bad, could use more naked Nel.

[HardcoreHunter]

Everything could use more naked nel.

[Foley_is_Good_149]

Indeed. Also, I get the feeling that Loly's confusion will be addressed. Is that correct?

elfie: Nel getting ready to fire her Cero looked really close to when she fired a cero doble in chapter 291 during her fight against Nnoitora. Good work.

[HardcoreHunter]

She was using her double cero in that. Except it was a lot more since she caught all those hallows ceros and launched them back.

[HardcoreHunter]

I was half surprised that the cero blast wasn't animated

[Foley_is_Good_149]

Read the pages again, and I don't know why I called Apache Loly earlier. Just being failsome, I guess.

[elfie]

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