Reply to DeaconPhenix - Message ID#: 50177610
06-22-2009 12:17 AM
**BLEEP**, these chapters are long...
MORE PLEASE!
GO! NPFOS FTW!
"This kind of character makes me want to molest them..." Tsuyuri from Doujin Work
Reply to DeaconPhenix - Message ID#: 45212365
06-22-2009 01:22 AM
I read the first chapter. My, that's a lot of reading and text and everything. Very complex - just like Bleach! Are you Tite Kubo? ![]()
I look forward to reading all the other chapters. Unfortunately, it's 1:30 in the morning, and my attention wanes. ![]()
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06-22-2009 01:26 AM
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06-22-2009 01:48 AM
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Reply to DeaconPhenix - Message ID#: 50177610
06-22-2009 05:13 AM
Dang Deacon...I think this week, you just might have stolen McDavey's crown on writing fights.
So go fight it out...LOL!
I do hope Aeorekka is going to be okay and Sanya too. It's also to bad that Deacon killed someone during the battle. Still, our trio of ryoka really pwned that stealth squad. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Reply to DeaconPhenix - Message ID#: 50177496
06-22-2009 06:35 PM
Read chapter 21. I am very intrigued to see what Aiber and cho are up to and how Deacon and Aeryk plan on recuing the girl. I forgot her name at the moment, sorry.
Reply to Delta_Eko_Foxtrot - Message ID#: 50192135
06-23-2009 12:15 AM
Delta_Eko_Foxtrot wrote:I read the first chapter. My, that's a lot of reading and text and everything. Very complex - just like Bleach! Are you Tite Kubo?
I look forward to reading all the other chapters. Unfortunately, it's 1:30 in the morning, and my attention wanes.
Bleach isnt complex, the guy just doesnt explain anything he does in it![]()
Deacon on the other hand is much better then him and has great stroy
Reply to DeaconPhenix - Message ID#: 50177561
06-23-2009 07:17 AM
well that is cool te fighting has started again. I do wonder how much having their sister injured is going to set the back. They still have someone to save also. I also wonder what the heck Ryushin is doing during this time.
Reply to DeaconPhenix - Message ID#: 50177610
06-24-2009 03:04 AM
Chapter 21
Ryushin has some troubling memories, poor guy. Regret is the hardest thing to get over. Glad he found the ryoka and gave some help. It will be interesting to see which side Cho and Fujiwara end up. I'm still curious about Mika's dreams and where they will eventually led her.
Chapter 22
Wow. Just wow. That was one nice fight. Deacon unfortunately got his first kill, even if he didn't want it. I hope Aeorekka makes a quick recovery, but with wounds like that...
Reply to DeaconPhenix - Message ID#: 50192704
06-25-2009 01:54 AM
I've read the first 12 chapters and WOW! IT's excellent IMHO!
But I'm 10 chapters behind ![]()
Love it so far DeaconPhenix, hope to read more this weekend. ![]()
Reply to DeaconPhenix - Message ID#: 49516256
06-25-2009 02:15 AM
Sorry it's been so long since I reviewed your story, I'll try to finish a few chapters tonight.
Chapter 15:
I'm surprised Keisan actually backed down when faced with a possible confrontation of the other captain. Usually people who lust for battle don't care whether their opponent has beaten them before or not. Though perhaps he still has some sense left as well.
Also, I'm curious as to what side Janar will end up on.
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06-25-2009 03:34 PM
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06-25-2009 03:36 PM
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Reply to forgingaheart - Message ID#: 49608486
06-25-2009 10:49 PM
I wonder if Cho will end up helping the brothers out, perhaps out of some feeling for the man that he knows was betrayed. It seems like several people know that truth about what happened with Jaxon, yet no one ever spoke up about it. 'Tis the nature of a system I guess; any threat to the way things work could disrupt the entire thing.
Reply to DeaconPhenix - Message ID#: 49712326
06-26-2009 01:55 AM
Chapter 17:
In response to what Asuka says at the end of the chapter... well, now. Isn't that cute? The biggest "female dog" in the story calling one of the protagonists a dog? Hee. Hee. Hee.
The attack was unexpected. At the very least, I'd have thought they attacked her because they found out she was working with Deacon and such, but it seems strange to me that they would just attack her out of thin air like that. Though it seems like each of them wouldn't have a problem doing so I don't really understand it. Could you clarify their reasons for me?
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06-26-2009 01:59 AM
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Reply to DeaconPhenix - Message ID#: 50252388
06-26-2009 02:02 AM
Ah, I see. I didn't remember that, since I hadn't read the story for quite some time.
It's ironic though, I think, that it wasn't the attack that made her look like a traitor but her "backup". I hope Malvae gets some WD40 for his rusty skills though, because pointy knives won't be enough to kill Deacon.
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06-26-2009 02:06 AM
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06-26-2009 02:10 AM
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06-26-2009 02:32 AM
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06-26-2009 03:49 AM
Well, now, it seems that "law" works as well in the Soul Society as it does in the human world. Except Nakashima somehow finds a way to make even the most a-hole judge look like a Red Cross volunteer in comparison.
It seems to me that was less a criminal trial and more of an attempted "morale booster" showing that "traitors will not be tolerated" or something to that effect.
Nakashima seems to represent the very oldest way of thinking there is, especially the way he wants the brothers dead for no more reason than because they're Jaxon's sons....bestard.
Reply to DeaconPhenix - Message ID#: 49973371
06-26-2009 04:07 AM
(chapter 20)
I don't think walking-dead girl will be able to kill either of the brothers. Though I wonder if she'll attack them sometime during the story only to discover that the "black wolf" that she dreamed about was Deacon... perhaps she'll get attacked by the "dastardly duo" only to be saved, for whatever reason, by him.
Oh well, guess I'll find out.
Reply to DeaconPhenix - Message ID#: 50082555
06-27-2009 03:07 AM
Chatper 21:
Good. For a minute I thought you were going to be a jerk and have the other people leave. But since they've joined up now....let us party! *begins dancing for no reason*
Oh, um, *ahem*, that is.... I'm glad they met up. And I wonder what the two captains could find out in the area surrounding the soul society. I can't think of any evidence they could find, but then again, if I could the story wouldn't be as interesting now would it? ha.
Reply to Blue_Rose_Devil - Message ID#: 50252605
06-28-2009 07:57 PM
I really love that line, BRD.
Blue_Rose_Devil wrote:
Yep. "Silly drow, mid-story deaths are for minor characters!"
Reply to forgingaheart - Message ID#: 50285700
06-28-2009 08:59 PM
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