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I have a character elimination game running for this story, so check that out.

 

Also, if I don't see anyone else on here by then, Happy Thanksgiving everybody!

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Probably no chapter until after christmas. I'm working 15-18 hours a day so all i know how to do at home is sleep lol.

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And not even a full 24 hours later, I make myself a liar. The chap's not as long as I usually post, but there's still something to bridge the gap until I get another one up. Enjoy!

 

 

Chapter 22

 

 

 

Karasei Fuyukami sniffed the savannah air, remaining motionless under the acacia tree as a dry breeze brought him scents from the north. His lieutenant, a blonde-haired man named Banpaia Toku, sat with his back against a rock, picking blades of grass impatiently. He glanced over to his captain from time to time, but the Iota Squad leader just stood there sniffing like one of his dogs. Finally, Fuyukami exclaimed, “there's one more big storm coming.”

 

Banpaia glanced over to him skeptically, spitting out a blade of grass he had been chewing. “How can you tell? You've been facing north the whole time. A monsoon would be coming from the south.” he explained.

 

“The pack is uneasy. They don't like the rain...” Karasei stopped, standing rigid and Toku swore his ears perked up as if he heard something in the silent savannah. After some time, the captain added, “that is not all they are uneasy about, however; they sense some sort of trouble in the canyons.”

 

Banpaia got to his feet and strained his eyes trying to look at the steppes in the north. He managed to catch a figure moving towards them from the horizon and it took him awhile to realize that it was moving on all fours. “One of your pups approaches.” he announced.

 

“Spurn.” Fuyukami clarified, nodding at the brown wolf in the distance. “The news must be dire indeed that they sent the absolute fastest. Forge usually delivers over long distances since he has the most endurance.”

 

Karasei used his Flash Step to close the distance and when he reached the animal, the wolf collapsed in front of him, its breath coming ragged as its tongue lolled out. “Be easy, Spurn. Relax, boy. You did well.” he spoke, comforting the wolf by patting the nape of its neck. He poured some water from a canteen, juggling it between the crook in his elbow as he tried to cup his hands for Spurn.

 

As the wolf lapped weakly at the water, Banpaia arrived next to him, asking, “what's wrong?”

 

“I don't know yet. He's completely worn out. Spurn must have been running the entire way.” Fuyukami explained, a rare tone of worry presenting itself in his voice.

 

Banpaia hated that worry in his captain and he suddenly turned away angrily, kicking a rock through a tall patch of grass. Fuyukami never got like that when his squad members were harmed or in some sort of trouble. Just a few days ago, they had lost people to that hollow in the jungle and the captain processed the information like it didn't bother him, although Toku was sure Karasei would call it “being professional”. He was always like that with Iota Squad, distant, uninvolved in their lives and Banpaia felt that Karasei held himself above everyone else and seemed to care more about his damn dogs than he did his own subordinates. The lieutenant understood that Karasei had been with that particular pack of wolves for many years, even before their time in Emelt Handoon, but if his priorities weren't with the squad, he never should have become the captain.

 

The memory of that day, Fuyukami's coronation as Iota Squad Captain, stung him to this day although he would never admit it to anyone. What many seemed to easily forget about Iota Squad was that before Karasei took over as leader, it had been Toku at the head of the squad. The rule to a Captaincy Challenge was that the only viable candidate for such a challenge was the squad's lieutenant and he could only declare such a challenge with written recommendation from at least three captains. Somehow this rule got bent for Fuyukami, who was neither lieutenant nor accepted member of Iota Squad. The only reason he had been declared eligible to the challenge was because Fuyukami was a hero in Hanran and had gotten recommendations from every single captain. From there, Karasei had defeated Banpaia in sanctioned battle and was ushered in as captain of Iota Squad, something Toku had never forgotten. Banpaia was not stupid or stubborn, understanding that Karasei was obviously stronger in battle and therefore a better fit for captain, although he disagreed with the procedure to which he gained the role. Regardless of his feelings, Banpaia had served Fuyukami loyally, but over the years, he felt that the captain had become more and more disconnected from Iota Squad. Something was going to have to change for the squad to continue to thrive. That was why Banpaia had gone into solitary training, working on his physical abilties and battle strategies until he felt that his defense maneuvers, the strongest facet to his fighting, would be more than enough to handle Karasei's explosive offense actions. Someday soon, the challenge would be made again.

 

This thought seemed to calm Banpaia and he turned back to his captain, finding that he had his ear down by the wolf's mouth. Karasei glanced up to his lieutenant nervously and once the wolf was done having his say, Fuyukami jumped to his feet. “Captains Maethor and RanDreyl were attacked. The assailants kidnapped Lieutenant Sawamaru.”

 

“Do we go after them?” Banpaia questioned.

 

“No, the captains are searching for her. We need to alert General Shukimaro immediately.”

 

Toku did not argue the urgency in Karasei's tone and they both enacted their Flash Step, moving as quickly as they could back to Emelt Handoon. They arrived within minutes, sprinting the rest of the way through the streets of the city to Alpha Squad's barracks. Fortunately, Naota was where they thought he would be, bent over a field map that was spread over a large wooden table. Glancing up, he saw the worry in their eyes and the quickness to their breathes and the general asked, “what has happened?”

 

“The scouting party was attacked in the canyons. Lieutenant Sawamaru has been abducted.” Karasei told.

 

His brow furrowed deeply as Shukimaro asked, “are the captains hurt?”

 

“They are in pursuit of the assailants.” Toku explained.

 

“Hollows?” Naota continued his questioning as he moved past the Iota Squad members and out into the streets, moving towards Delta Squad.

 

“No, something else, something human. The wolves weren't sure what, but they possessed some sort of power to them.” Karasei declared.

 

“We shall send assistance then. I want to know who these interlopers are within day's end.” Shukimaro commanded.

 

“I will go.” Fuyukami elected.

 

“I should be there with you.” Toku argued.

 

“No, Banpaia. I need you to take command of Iota Squad while I am away. You are the only one who can run that squad in case something happens to me.” Karasei explained.

 

“You should not be going alone.” Banpaia declared. “It would be a fool's suicide mission.”

 

“I won't be alone. The pack will be there.”

 

“No, Lieutenant Toku is correct. Captain Taiyou will accompany you. She can track as well as you can, Fuyukami.” Naota decided.

 

“Very well.” Karasei sighed. “When do we leave?”

 

“Now.” Shukimaro concluded. “I have a suspicion I want quelled about who resides out in those canyons.”

 

 

 

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Tatsuya Yaiba walked alongside his master, the Uroboros, down the giant, winding staircase in the cavern known as the Delve, the central hub of the Dark Quincy's base. When they reached the floor that was under Yaiba's command as Häuptling Sechs, the Uroboros turned to him and asked, “your subordinates move along with an excitement and energy that I have not seen in quite some time. Do you not share in the exhilaration?”

 

“It may be the liveliest they have ever been.” Tatsuya admitted. “I choose to sublimate my emotions however.”

 

“Is it bothering you that you have not yet had any direct contact with either the Bounts or the shinigami?” the Uroboros questioned.

 

“I am eager to do battle with the shinigami, but I would never make a move without your command, if that's what you're asking.” Yaiba answered methodically.

 

“Not at all. I just ask after your patience with me.” the Uroboros clarified.

 

“It is endless, my lord. I was nothing but a worthless vagrant when you found me. The power that you have given me will make me never question your judgment.” Yaiba explained.

 

“Excellent. I want you to know that we will be making our move very soon, but I want our clan whole and together before we do.” the gray-skinned leader declared.

 

“Is there any way that I can expedite that matter?” Tatsuya asked, tucking his hands inside his black robes.

 

The Uroboros glanced up through the Delve to the earthen ceiling far above them. “Actually, there is.” he responded, looking back to Yaiba as if he had been distracted from something above. “I am going to make contact with Janoah and learn where she is. I know she makes her way through the Fel'anarock Mountains with great haste, but that region is so large that it is hard to pinpoint her. I want you to travel north and escort her the rest of the way here. We need no further delays in our plans.”

 

“Are you expecting trouble?” Yaiba wondered, trying to read his master's stoic expressions.

 

“Not from any man or beat. Our little Jan can handle anything like that.” the Quincy ruler paused, looking up to the ceiling once more. “A monsoon is coming and it is going to do quite a lot of damage to our land, but once it reaches Fel'anarock, it is going to turn into perhaps the worst blizzard that region has ever seen.”

 

“Janoah might get trapped in that, you mean.”

 

“And even if she beats it, travel in the monsoon will be perilous. I want you to take flight and get to her before the storm does.” the Uroboros declared. “Jan will be easy to find if she makes it to the Valley of the Dwellers, but if not, use our old roads through the mountains. I will instruct her to do the same.”

 

“Are you going to be able to contact her with all the interference this storm may be causing?” Tatsuya asked.

 

“Without a doubt. Her Contact Crystal will not fail her.”

 

 

 

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As the city of Emelt Handoon bustled along with preparations for the coming storm, a balding, portly man walked through the streets with only one task on his mind and it had nothing to do with storm preparation. Fiso Lin was too old for trivial and lowly work and would not dirty his hands with such tasks. He worked his way through the crowds, ignoring calls of help as he made for the Dojo, Delta's Squad's equivalent of a barracks. He cared little for the Dojo, instead spending the majority of his time as lieutenant of the squad within the offices and away from the hustle and bustle of the squad's training facility. His captain, however, spent nearly very waking moment in the Dojo, endlessly fine-tuning her body's abilities alongside her subordinates. Captain Taiyou sought no comforts in either her life or her position, always preferring to take on the brunt of her squad's duties instead of delegating responsibilities to the lesser members in their hierarchy. It was a trait of hers that Fiso found quite irritating, but at the same time, he managed to shrug off as much work as he could on her, so it found some equilibrium with him. It was the only reason he had not challenged her for captaincy even though their roles had been reversed in ancient history.

 

He opened the doors to the Dojo, finding it nearly vacant for once. Delta Squad must have been given their orders to batten down against the monsoon as well, he reasoned. Tsuki Taiyou sat in her usual spot on the floor, cross-legged as she meditated deeply, another thing Fiso found useless and annoying. “Cap, I got a message for you.” he barked out and the deeply tanned woman opened her gold eyes, gazing up to her lieutenant serenely, as if he had not interrupted her in the middle of one of her trances.

 

“What is it, Lieutenant Lin?” she questioned.

 

“Captain Fuyukami could not find you where he thought you should have been, so I took his message since he seemed to be in a rush. On command of General Shukimaro, you are to meet Fuyukami at High Bluff's Ridge in the north. Apparently there has been trouble in the canyons.” he reported.

 

“Very well. Was there anything else for me?” she asked and he bit his tongue, hating this now common response of hers, for it meant that she knew that he liked to keep details from her.

 

“That was all, Cap. Fuyukami was in no mood for idle chatter, so I pursued none.” Fiso declared. She smiled, which infuriated him even more, since he had so smoothly insulted her. The woman was never fazed by anything he said or did and he wondered what it would take to get a reaction out of her.

 

“That's Karasei for you.” Tsuki replied. “He gets in his brooding moods.”

 

“Either way, since the news is urgent, you will have to cut your rest short to report to him.” Lin exclaimed.

 

“Not a problem. I will leave within the hour.”

 

“I will command the squad while you are away, Cap.” Fiso declared, turning to leave the Dojo.

 

“There is no need for that, Lieutenant. Delta has been given their orders to assist Eta Squad in barricading the city against the monsoon. I would appreciate it if you lend Captain Masmune a hand.” Taiyou explained.

 

Fiso gritted his teeth at the mention of that name. He disliked Kumai Masmune even more than he disliked Tsuki, especially since the two had a budding relationship between each other, something neither would admit even though it was apparent to anyone with half a wit. He could not see how either could stand the other since she was so complacent and he so pompous, but Fiso was never one to waste his time on foolish notions of dawdling love. Calming himself, he turned back to his captain and mentioned, “so, he expects me then?”

 

Her telling smile told him all he needed to know.

 

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User-Submitted Characters

 

Karasei Fuyukami: Blue_Rose_Devil

Banpaia Toku: Zonbaru-Bonbaru

The Uroboros: Blue_Rose_Devil

Tatsuya Yaiba: Zonbaru-Bonbaru

Tsuki Taiyou: Bad_Witch

 

When I was writing this, I had no idea that BRD and Zonbaru's characters would both be interacting with each other haha.

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That was a very interesting chapter, it was a good read.

That was a very Sith like master apprentice thing there with Uroboros and Tatsuya

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I thought you'd like that. How did Banpaia turn out?

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He turned out good too. All the characters are looking good which makes me look forward to the rest of the story.

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Phew, cool, I really wanted to get the interactions down between Banpaia and his captain. Pretty soon, I'm going to showcase a lot more of his past as the captain.

 

In related news, I've somehow gotten a lot of writing down despite working almost 80 hours this past week, so hopefully I'll have Chapter 23 up within the week.

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Sorry about the long wait between chapters. The holiday season was hectic to say the least, but I should have the next chapter up within the week. The Character Elimination Game is still stubbornly going on lol, so if you wanna have some vote with the characters in this story, throw a vote in over there from time to time. Also, if you're looking for a change of pace, my side project, Alone With the Revenant, will be also premiering sometime this week. It's a zombie apocalypse fic that will end up having a very different feel once the ball gets rolling.

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This is a pretty dark chapter, even for what I'm used to writing. I hope you will see how this near-tragedy will be the turning point in the early stages of things.

 

Chapter 23

 

 

 

Kio blinked her eyes, her vision swimming as she tried to adjust to her surroundings. The only thing she could tell was that she was being taken on a bumpy ride, as if she was riding a horse. That can't be right, she thought, no horse could endure these rocky canyons. When her vision finally cleared, she found that she indeed been mistaken; she had been slung over the back of the big brute that had distracted the captains while the other waylaid her from behind. The sharp pain in her back told her that she was being bent at a bad angle and the burning in her wrists and ankles meant that she was bound as well. Do they have me hog-tied like the spoils of a hunt?, she wondered.

 

A wave of panic flooded over her, but Kio fought it off, knowing it wasn't going to help her situation. She instead concentrated on figuring out a way to escape from the bandits. Kio didn't want to alert them to her current consciousness, so she only stole momentary glances of her surroundings. She noticed that the big one was lumbering along a path on the cliff, not struggling with the extra load on his shoulders in the least. The smaller one was scouting ahead along the edge of the cliff, gazing down into the canyon intently as they walked.

 

After a time, the shorter one stopped and pointed down to an overhanging precipice below them. “What do you think?” he asked.

 

“Looks good enough to me.” her carrier replied. He turned to the side and she lost sight of the other one as the big man shifted his hold on her body, transferring her from his shoulders to his arms. Panic shot into her system as he dropped her off the cliff and she screamed, but her fall was cut short no more than a dozen feet later when she landed in Dresden's arms, although he struggled with the catch considerably more than Knaak.

 

“So you are awake, girly.” he stated, dropping her roughly on the shelf of the cliff.

 

She gasped in pain, but he only laughed, signaling for Knaak to join him on their resting place out of the sun. “Why are you doing this to me?” she groaned as the big man landed with a thud.

 

Knaak chuckled, saying, “you're our meal ticket, darling.”

 

“What are you going to do, you big oaf, eat me?” she spat out in a rare moment of bravery.

 

“No, you bitch, we're going to kill you.” Dresden shot back. “We just need the boss to see that we're worth more than the lowly foot soldiers he's made us out to be.”

 

Knaak pulled a canteen from his pocket, taking a long gulp. “We sure gave your captains the shake. They didn't know what hit them!” he exclaimed with a guffaw of laughter.

 

“You know they will come and find me and when they do...”

 

“Oh hush, girly. We're not in the savannah anymore. Your people don't know these canyons like we do. You're as good as dead to them.” Dresden explained.

 

This possibility hit Kio harder than she thought it would and she started to cry, which gave the Bounts even greater reason to laugh. “What a baby.” Knaak remarked.

 

Dresden knelt down and grabbed Kio by the chin, forcing her to look up at him. “You are quite the little cutie, aren't you? I might have to have some fun with you before I turn you in to the boss.” he said.

 

“Not before I do.” Knaak declared.

 

“Shut up, Knaak. You'd crush her, you horse. She can't be more than eighty pounds.” Dresden retorted. He put a hand through her fiery red hair before stroking her soft cheeks. As he rubbed his thumb over her smooth lips, he said, “I wonder if you've even been spoiled yet. It could make for quite the afternoon.”

 

Kio trembled in revulsion at his touch and her sobs came when he slipped a hand in her robe and began fondling one of her breasts. “Young and perky. Just the way I like them.” Dresden mentioned with a grin.

 

She closed her eyes to try to block out what was happening, but an even more unpleasant memory came to her then.

 

Kio was back in the Old Soul Society, at the training grounds of Squad Eleven. She lay face-down in the dirt, scratches covering her face and bruises blotching her arms. The vicious scars on her wrists had not yet been made, but it wouldn't be long from this occurrence that she would experience that tragedy.

 

Fourth Seat Zeisan Kira stood over her, a furious expression on his face. “Get up, you weakling! I tire of this pathetic display of inability.” he demanded.

 

“I am not weak!” Kio cried out, stabbing her sword into the ground and using it to help her get to her feet. “I am a warrior!”

 

Kira scoffed. “You are no more a warrior than a sheep in the field is a wolf.” He let her attack him, but as she swung her sword, Zeisan batted it away with a bare hand, lowering his shoulder and hitting her in the chest, driving her into the ground. Kio fell with a pitiful cry, but Zeisan wasn't done, roaring as he kicked her in the stomach, sending her tumbling away.

 

Kio coughed up blood, crying, “Fourth Seat, Kira, you are going to kill me!”

 

“You don't even to deserve to die at my hand. I don't care what Captain Muguruma says; you are nothing to me.” he spat. “You will not survive Squad Eleven.”

 

With a herculean effort, she once more got to her feet, exclaiming, “I will prove to you that I am worthy.”

 

She moved to attack, but he flashed forward, grabbing her sword arm and snapping it downward, pulling her arm out of socket and causing her to drop her sword. Before Kio could scream in agony, Zeisan body-slammed her to the ground and landed atop her. Speaking into her ear so that only she could hear, he said, “there will be a day very soon when I will be captain of this squad. If you do not transfer out of this squad, I will kill you myself.”

 

A sudden flash of anger welled up inside Kio, a rage that she was not used to having, different from the bottled anger she normally got, something alien to her. This new emotion surged through her body, overwhelming her good senses to the point that she felt she had lost complete control over her mind. Then, everything went black.

 

“Bankai!” she roared with a voice that did not belong to her. “Chosenteki Seishukawa, flood these fools with drunkenness!”

 

A wind whipped around Kip and Dresden jumped backwards, unsure of how she had called a bankai without being in battle. The wind picked the lieutenant up and set her on her feet. When it disappeared, the Bounts found that there were now iron clasps around her wrists and ankles with chains hanging down from them and a large gray horn had sprouted on the right side of her head. Sawamaru leaned her head awkwardly to the side where the horn was and staggered towards them like a ghoul from the grave.

 

Dresden laughed at this display. “You didn't have to get yourself drunk for it!” he exclaimed. A monstrous nodachi appeared in her hand, towering at least two feet over the girl, but she wielded it as if it weighed no more than a pound. “Oh, so you want to fight? Bring it on!” he called. Half of Dresden's body began to darken, but Kio flashed up to him before he could blink, swinging her nodachi at him and cutting the Bount from one side of his waist all the way to the opposite collarbone. He screamed and fell backwards as his blood splashed up into the air. She prepared to finish him off, but Knaak interrupted , charging forward and punching out at her. She stabbed her sword into the ground and used it to back-vault out of the way.

 

“Bitch!” he yelled and ran after her, but she swung her blade out and a wave of a clear liquid blasted out at Knaak. He blocked with a huge arm, but when the liquid hit him, it began to sear his flesh. He roared and raked at his arm, trying to rid himself of the burning liquid. The more he pawed at his arm, the more the liquid spread, soaking into his fingers and instantly sending a cloudiness to his head. Panicked by what was happening to him, Knaak began to stumble around the ledge, trying to keep the lieutenant at bay. Am I....drunk?, he thought, doing his best to keep his balance, was that burning hot sake?

 

Kio staggered towards him, her deadly nodachi swinging from side to side. Knaak used the rest of his fast fading composure to slam a meaty fist into the ground, causing the ledge to crack. The possessed shinigami kept coming for him, but the whole ledge crumbled and gave way and the three plummeted to the ground in a landslide of rock.

 

As the dust began to clear from the fall a boulder shifted and Knaak pushed himself out from under it. He held a hand to his dizzied head, stumbling around the mess as he dug for his fellow Bount. He found Dresden nearby, unconscious from either the slash wound or the fall. Knaak threw the lifeless Bount over his shoulder swaying as he tried to get away from the landslide as quickly as he could, hoping that the fall had killed the shinigami. Whatever she had transformed into was not human and he wanted no part of it.

 

 

 

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Lexi swore under her breath as her fear had been confirmed that Roy and Eva had indeed lost track of the shinigami captains. “I work with imbeciles.” she said to herself as she clarified once more that there was no one else in her vicinity before she stepped out into the path to reveal herself to the other Dark Quincy. Des kept his usual sarcastic grin when he saw her, but Eva's expression portrayed worry, something Lexi enjoyed. She had noticed that Eva had been looking over her shoulder the past few months, worried that Lexi would rise over her as the Fourth Häuptling someday. Where Rose had remained passive in her rank, Lexi had moved from the bottom where Roy now occupied up to the fifth spot, behind only Tsuntaki, Janoah, Angeline, and for now, Eva. Perhaps this war would be what catapulted Lexi to her next rank.

 

“Häuptling Funf.” Eva greeted Lexi, a subtle reminder of who was the senior officer.

 

“How do you lose the captains in a damn corridor?! This isn't like at home where we have sand mirages for miles.” Lexi remarked.

 

“We didn't lose the captains, Lexi. They had counter spies watching us. We had to retreat.” Roy shot back.

 

“Even wore, you damn fool! You've muddled such a simple task.” Pryant retorted.

 

“There was no way of knowing that would have happened.” Eva cut in as calmly as she could, even though Lexi could see her facial expressions darkening. Yes, Lexi thought, let your other half out, Eva. Your dark half. She's the only reason you've survived as long as you have.

 

“Wrong again, Lunatic Girl. You scout your target's surroundings first before the actual target.” Lexi exclaimed. This time, Eva's face twitched, but she was still somehow able to calm herself again before Violet could take over her body. “Since you two could not accomplish what a half-wit could, you are to return back home and await further instructions.”

 

“This better have come straight from the Uroboros.” Roy declared.

 

“Why don't you go back and find out, you whelp.” Pryant replied.

 

“You two-tone wench.” he stated, stepping past her as he started the trek back to the desert.

 

Lexi began to move past Eva, but the girl stopped her and from the look in her eyes, Häuptling Funf could tell that Violet had managed to by-pass Eva's mind block after all. “This rank is mine, bitch.” Violet spat out. “The only way you're taking it is over my dead body.”

 

Pryant smirked. “From the looks of it today, I won't have to kill you. Your sheep sister will get you killed all on her own.”

 

 

 

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Praenuntius knew the Grayworm was dead even before his clairvoyance in Hueco Mundo saw it as truth. There was a void of spiritual pressure where there should have been great amounts and because he had become so attuned with the Hollow World, he could tell immediately that his harbinger was no more. The visoreds were proving to be an even greater annoyance than he thought. Grayworms were hard to find and the loss of one was a heavy loss to his war schematics. He knew that the intruders were on the Dry Roads and he contemplated sending a horde of Gillian after them, but as a whole, he didn't think he could muster would greatly affect them. No Gillian could compare to a Grayworm and the adjuchas and vastolordes were too hard to control. He thought of letting them return to their home and defeat them himself in open battle, but then a brilliant idea popped into his head. He smiled as he thought over this idea and realized that it had great potential, but he knew any further ponderings would have to wait as there was other business to attend to first.

 

He withdrew from the hollow's mind and returned his consciousness to his body. Ater stepped out of his room, gesturing for a servant to come to him. He noticed the usual nervous flow of spiritual pressure from the servants, who all feared him for his innate ability to “see” everything around him, even though his eyes had stopped working years ago. They had learned when a couple of fools had favored themselves as jokers and made faces at him when he gave commands. In the blink of an eye, one had been disemboweled and the other was grasping weakly at a sword that was embedded in his throat.

 

“Send Avel and Jolyne to the War Room.” Ater decreed and he started making his way there as well. As he walked, the Bount leader mused some more over his idea, wondering which of the visoreds to target with this budding plan. The strongest of the bunch was out of the question; he would foil the plan the second he noticed it. If he could target one of the weaker ones, there was a chance that he could spiral that whole group into chaos.

 

As Praenuntius came upon the War Room, he could tell that the younger Bounts he had called were already on the way and when they arrived, he bid them entry, opening the door into a well-lit room with a massive stone table in the center. He sat at the head of the table and Avel and Jolyne took their respective seats as well, eagerly awaiting his word.

 

“The storm approaches.” he began. “The shinigami will be battening down the hatches and preparing to wait out Mother Nature, but I say it's the perfect time to make our move.”

 

His subordinates grinned mischievously and Nakata said, “finally. It's time to spill some shinigami blood.”

 

“Not yet, Avel. I speak not of a battle mission, but of infiltration.” Ater told.

 

“Infiltration?” Jolyne questioned. “How can we sneak into Emelt Handoon?”

 

“The monsoon will be your cover. When the whole of the city becomes too involved with protecting themselves from flooding, you will walk right in the front door.” Ater stated.

 

“That won't be possible no matter how distracted they are by the storm. They will notice two Bounts in their city sooner or later.” Jolyne debated.

 

“No, they won't. They will give refuge to two children whose house was washed away in the flood.” the Legatus explained.

 

“Oh, please, I have to pretend I'm a child?” Avel asked.

 

“You already act like one, so that shouldn't be a hard transition.” Jolyne joked.

 

“Speak for yourself!” he shot back. “You look barely four years older than me.”

 

“Which is why this plan will work perfectly. I will contact the Dark Quincy and have them provide a bail distraction in case you need it.” Praenuntius spoke.

 

“When do we leave?” Jolyne asked.

 

“When the ground soaks with two full days of rain. Emelt Handoon will be poisoned as if acid was falling from the skies.”

 

 

 

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Two blips in existence flashed through the canyons at a breakneck speed. The first was followed by a fiery red tail as it cannonaded up from the top of the cliffs down to the ravines like a meteor on a rampage. The second blip appeared as a blue orb and although it seemed more studious in its journey through the canyons, stopping for several seconds at a time, it also seemed more frantic, disappearing from one place and appearing somewhere entirely different in the blink of an eye. To a well-trained eye knowledgeable in spiritual pressure, this display appeared as a fireworks show, but to a commoner, it was nothing more than a gust of wind.

 

The two blips met on an over-passing rock bridge and extinguished, revealing themselves to be Alagos and Lynna. “Where did those bastards take her?!” Alagos yelled, kicking a rock off the bridge.

 

“Kio can't handle something like this. She's barely recovered from her last incident.” Lynna declared, a distraught tone in her voice. “We have to find her soon!”

 

“I know, I know.” he stated angrily. Alagos hated that tone in her voice and it made him want to kill anyone that made Lynna worry like she did. He couldn't help but feel that this was his fault for letting himself get duped so easily. I'll make it up to you, love, he thought, we'll find Kio and kill the bastards that kidnapped her.

 

“What were they? Those were no ordinary bandits.” Lynna questioned.

 

“Bounts. There were a few small tribes of them, but I haven't seen them in years. There must still be a couple out here.” he explained.

 

“I don't know the term.”

 

“They dabble in dark magic created by their shamans. I fought them back in Fel'Anarock.” he replied.

 

“Why would they kidnap Kio?” she asked.

 

“Ransom for food I would imagine. They're all a bunch of vagrant clods.” he responded.

 

“They wouldn't hurt her, would they?” she asked, a pleading note in her voice.

 

“We'd better get moving.” he replied, answering her by not answering her. He made to enact his Flash Step, but stopped short, peering down into the ravine. “There's someone down there.”

 

She jumped down into the ravine immediately, not glancing back as Alagos called, “Lynna, stop!”. She hurried forward and when she noticed the telling red hair, she shouted, “it's....it's Kio!”

 

Maethor jumped down, running after his love, but when he was able to catch up to her, she was already at her lieutenant's side, holding the girl by the shoulders and inquiring as to her health. Kio seemed unable to formulate an answer to all of Lynna's worried questions, a dazed expression on her face Alagos grimaced at the sight of the girl, who was covered in scratches and bruises. There was a bloody gash on her forehead, more than likely the reason why she was stunned.

 

“Give her some room, dear.” he called, pulling a resistant Lynna back from the lieutenant. “Are you feeling well, Kio? Are you sick or just hurt?”

 

“I....I think....I'll be fine. I just need to rest.” the girl struggled to say.

 

“What about the bandits? Where are they?” Lynna implored.

 

“I think...I think they're dead.” Kio answered.

 

Maethor puzzled over her response for a moment before asking, “what happened, Kio? How did you get away from them?”

 

“I don't know.”

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User-Submitted Characters

 

Kio Sawamaru: WavemasterRyx

Eva Rose: SenseAcct

Roy Des: SenseAcct

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Jolyne: cidthekittyisfun

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So the motherboard in my computer took a swan dive and died a horrible tragic death (I'm logged on to a friend's comp for now). I don't think I can get it  fixed so it appears as if I'm up the creek here for a little while. I'm really sorry for the inconvenience.

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So sorry for such a long hiatus. Im really trying to find the time to get something down on paper, but its been difficult lately.

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3-4 months is soon right? Okay, so I got to the chapter soonish.

 

Chapter 18

 

Those poor villagers :smileysad: So, this is what Kira does to mark his return. Never really liked him anyway.

That was uncalled for Masato. Ren seems to be the most honorable of these three, and he still gave the most honor to the man Masato slayed. I like Ren...Masato not so much.

Yay! The captains seem to be thrilled to go camping. Can't wait to find out what they discover and see how they interact more.

Wow Aeryk! Way to be a d!ck. Couldn't you tell Deacon was taking it hard.

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Things are starting to get interesting between the half-brothers, aren't they?

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Yes, it is. On to chapter 19.

 

Chapter 19

 

Naky I hate you. Really, really hate you. Paraniod old bastard.

Kabashi better be careful, or he's might find himself on the wrong side of Naky. Know what, scratch that. Naky needs all the enemies he can get.

I feel bad for Tsubaki. She'll be traveling with a bunch of jerks.

Poor Aiber :smileysad: I've missed this group so much. I love you Cho.

 

Chapter 20

 

Nice bit with the visords here and I like the explaination of how they came to be and where they are.

Ater doesn't trust anyone. Very flimsy bond between the bounts and quincy.

Those poor visords.

Giant worm time!

Shun and Janar...don't ever change.

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There will be plenty of Aiber/Cho and Kuroda/Janar interactions for ya Witch. Maybe someday we'll even do something about that old bastard Naky.

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Yay! I love their interactions! And...we better do something with old Naky, or I'll strangle that bastard myself :smileyvery-happy:

 

Chapter 21

 

This chapter begins to set things up nicely. Bounts and Quincys really don't trust each other at all :smileyvery-happy: I'm looking forward tohow these pairings work out.

I like Roy and Eva, and Violet should be fun.

Kio kidnapped!

 

Chapter 22

 

Wolves! Who doesn't like wolves?!

I like the interaction between Benpaia and Karasei. Enough back story to tell what's happened and how they interact, while keeping the pace going foward.

I really liked that little bit with the dark quincy. Lately, I was thinking that it doesn't even matter if the bounts and quincys don't like each other...they can barely stand the company of their own. It was a nice change to see two comrades actually acting like comrades.

OMG! I love my character...I mean Tsuki. I probably laughed way too much at the interaction with her lieutenant :smileyvery-happy:

 

Chapter 23

 

I rather enjoyed the first part, and the change of tone. Of course, it would have been nice if they died, but now I wonder what will happen when/if Kio meets them again...or the captains for that matter.

Yep...still don't like Kira.

That was a nice little bit with the Dark Quincys. I rooting for the moment when Violet breaks free.

That's a crafty little plan for the Bounts.

Not knowing how something happened is never good.

 

I...I...I can't believe it. I finally got caught up!

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Yay! Hey, did you ever get my christmas present Witch?

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No, I didn't. Real life got complicated for a bit and I've just returned to the boards after over two months. I kinda abandoned that thread...I think you mean the secret santa thread...without actually meaning too. Did you leave it there?

 

Edit: Nevermind...I found it. OMG! I love you! Such a fitting end for the old bastard.

*stomps Naky again, and again, and again*

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Hey Deacon. Sorry I havent replied in a while. A lot of personal reasons involved. I will catch up when I can. I miss reading your work. hope all is well, catch ya later.

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Bad_Witch wrote:

No, I didn't. Real life got complicated for a bit and I've just returned to the boards after over two months. I kinda abandoned that thread...I think you mean the secret santa thread...without actually meaning too. Did you leave it there?

 

Edit: Nevermind...I found it. OMG! I love you! Such a fitting end for the old bastard.

*stomps Naky again, and again, and again*


:smileyvery-happy: Glad you liked it.

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Sorry to hear things are crazy for ya, bro. Hope things turn up. Take it easy man.

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Unfortunately, I think I'm putting this story in the attic for now. There is a lot of re-evaluating that I have to do before I can even continue to write this and by doing all of that right now, I'm afraid I would lose all interest in it and scrap the idea. I'm slowly working on putting together an idea that I've had in mind (I even wrote a pretty in-depth outline for it) for even longer than this project. I'm sorry that I have to let this one go for now, but to be able to write this story, I would have to tear most of it down and start over from scratch.

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dang man. Why is it so messed up?