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Code Geass: Ragnarok of the Revolution Fanfic

CODE GEASS: RAGNAROK OF THE REVOLUTION

 

A Code Geass Fanfic

 

This is thread for my first official fanfic, Code Geass: RAGNAROK OF THE REVOLUTION. This is based on the Code Geass Universe, but is not factual to the events in the series, consider it a re-imagining of the series, a completely different story. I will post the chapters in the CC-K format: Chapter, Character List and Commentary. Thank You to everybody who submitted a character (which goes to October 31st) and who leaves feedback. This is my first go at this, so I hope your all pleasantly surprised.

All The Same/Downfall Of Us All/King Of Arizona/Built For Sin/Fighting Tao


"angel, angel what have I done?
I've faced the quicks, the wind, the fire
I've conquered country, crown and throne
why can't I cross this river?
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Prologue

Impetus (Welcome to Area 11)

 

“Welcome to Area 11”

 

Britannian Officer: Hey, you’re the guy I’m here to see into Area 11 right?

Jacob Elysium: Of course, I am the future apprentice to Llyod Asplund. I believe I’m heading to the capital building.

Officer: Correct, we’ll take the rail system.

Jacob: Sounds good, so what’s been happening here to warrant me being summoned?

Officer: Well to be completely honest, a lot. I’m sure you’re aware that we’re at war.

Jacob: Yeah, but I understand that some very interesting things have been happening, don’t fully know the details though.

Officer: Well I suppose I should fill you in, in fact I can even show you a little on the way. It all started with The Black Knights, Zero and his army of elevens trying to reclaim their precious Japan.

Jacob: To my understanding, he’s been rather successful in his attempts. I believe the only reason I’m here is because he’s getting very close to achieving that goal.

Officer: Yeah, well there’s more to the story than just Zero kid. But first, I feel the need to point out a part of the story that many people miss. They all seem to forget that the first terrorist attack on Britannia occurred months before Zero and his army ever emerged. It was the figurehead bombing that let us know we were mortal.

Jacob: The Figurehead Bombing?

Officer: Look out the window below, see that blast mark? Well there used to be a government building there. The day it happened, a group of high ranking dukes, earls, knights and scientists were meeting for what apparently was a very under wraps conference. Out of the blue in broad daylight an explosion occurs at the top of the building and takes down the whole structure. A 69 story government building collapsed like a house of cards.

Jacob: Wait, wait, wait. How did an explosion at the top of the building create a blast mark at the bottom?

Officer: Damndest thing, the explosion traveled down. Pretty much drilled through the entire structure.

Jacob: Are you sure about that?

Officer: Yeah I’m sure, I was on this train when it happened!

Jacob: Ah, I see.

Officer: Good, well let me continue. The Black Knights were only the beginning, after pushing us to the brink turmoil, Zero disappeared, leaving his army vulnerable and in ruin. No one could quite make sense of it all and that’s when he showed up.

Jacob: By “he” I assume you are referring to this Ragnarok I’ve been hearing so much about.

Officer: Yes sir, hell at first we thought it was Zero with a new persona, but we soon realized we were dealing with a completely different monster.

Jacob: And how did you do that?

Officer: Well the fact that Zero came back helped.

Jacob: Ah, I suppose it would.

Officer: Yeah, well even before he did we knew this was a completely different guy. The manner of his attacks, the fact that he didn’t assimilated the Black Knights as his own, though some members did defect to his organization.

Jacob: Wait, Zero was gone, why didn’t he claim the Black Knights?

Officer: I honestly don’t know, but he wanted to distance himself from Zero’s organization, some say out of respect. Many believe he always expected Zero’s return.

Jacob: This is all very strange, how did Ragnarok make his appearance?

Officer: You remember the Figurehead Bombing, well now we know that was his first attack. I suppose he was setting up his grand debut and Zero stole his thunder, though no one really knows for sure.

Jacob: I see, well please continue.

Officer: Oh, well about two months before Zero returned there was a devastating attack on one of the largest Knightmare plants in the country. I swear I’ve never seen anything like it, out of the blue a man dressed to the nines wearing a facial reflex mask puts out his hand towards the building. Next thing we know a massive beam of light comes down from the sky and wipes out the place, gone like that.

Jacob: And out of this event you deduce that the weirdo with his hand extended caused it?

Officer: Of course not, let me finish! It was night when it happened, and outta nowhere 20 soldiers appeared around him. And I mean outta nowhere! They literally emerged from the dark, like shadows turning to light. And they were so bright!

Jacob: This all sounds quite extravagant, unbelievable to a point.

Officer: Yeah, well it happened. Ever since then, Ragnarok and his “Light Brigade” have been strategically and maliciously slaughtering as many soldiers and government figure as humanly possible. And he’s not above a civilian attack either.

Jacob: Sounds like quite the gruesome character.

Officer: Haha, you think that’s bad? Well let me tell you something, in man to man battle, Ragnarok instructs his men to cut out the tongues of their enemies and leave a mouth guard in there. The darn things a compact explosive, blows up if you remove it.

Jacob: That’s quite bizarre, why does he want them to remove the tongue? Is it his twisted take on scalping?

Officer: That’s what we think, but no one knows why. For almost a year now we’ve been in constant battle with both Ragnarok and Zero, for the first time in our history we’re actually losing a war. Ah, well it looks like we’re here. God, its days like this that make me wonder how we got here.

Jacob: I bet

 

“Dream of the Impetus”

 

Boy: God, it’s so beautiful isn’t it love? The calm of the ocean in the warmth of the sun, I miss feeling this way.

Girl: It is wonderful, I must admit, I might love it as much as the sound of your voice.

Boy: Haha, well I don’t know if it’s that great. You know how much I hate it when you butter me up like that. Why isn’t this enough for people, to feel the warmth of the sun? The jealousy and spite that leaves such glorious sights of beauty scorned by the tide of war, it’s just not right.

Girl: You can’t change people, all you can do is hope that they will relinquish the worthless pride that only causes pain.

Boy: Pain to who? To themselves? No, it get deflected to the weak and the innocent. How disgusting to make one suffer for another’s sins. I can never forgive them for what they took from us, as hard as I try I can’t put it behind me.

Girl: Stop it! I miss him too, but he would’ve wanted me to be happy. He liked you a lot, he trusted you.

Boy: Yeah, I’m sure he liked his sister going with a guy like me. He was a good friend though.

Girl: We have to move on, I have to move on. I can’t do that without.

Boy: I will always be here, I promise myself to you. I love you, now and forever.

Girl: I love you too

*as their lips meet for a kiss*: hot flash of paradise, these are the wounds of your demise.

Neil:  AHH! dammit!

Neil: Father, forgive me. What have I become? Despite myself, I cannot, I will not relent. This impetus that will not stop until it’s right again. Father, forgive me.

 

 NEXT TIME

STAGE 1: Summers Lost

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I've conquered country, crown and throne
why can't I cross this river?
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So this is the prologue to the story, setting the scene for the events to come. The next three chapters will actually cover the past events that lead to present situation, really excited to get this thing out. However, I can't start the chapters until I get all the submitted characters, so don't expect stage one until the beginning of november. Hope you all like it so far!

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I've faced the quicks, the wind, the fire
I've conquered country, crown and throne
why can't I cross this river?
RR;


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Interesting start to this thing, should be fun to see were this goes.

I like the format you are using, different then most of the fic I am reading right now. 

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Interesting intro. I can't wait to see how it goes.

Just wondering something: Will there be more actions in later chapters, because I'm more comfortable knowing my setting and what the characters are doing.

 

Also, here are some OPs/EDs from Sony I think would be good in Code Geass. In alphabetical order by artist:

 

"progressive" by Kalafina (ignore the conversation at the end: if chosen, a version that isn't ripped from the radio will be posted when one is found on the net)

"Kimagure Princess" by Morning Musume

"CHANGE UP!" by TiaraGirl

"Kanashimi wa Kitto" by UVERword

 

And here's some Victor Entertainment candidates:

 

"Smile Again" by 9Nine (this is just a preview: if chosen, a full video will be found when one exists)

"Hatsukoi" by Dear Loving (another preview: if chosen, a full video will be found when one exists)

"Book" by Hana Shonen Baddies (yet another preview if chosen, a full video will be found when one exists)

"LONELY NIGHT" by High Speed Boyz

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The chapters to come will have more action, this was just how I chose to set the scene. Also I'm not doing OPs/EDs, every chapter will be named after a song that I will post (hyperlinked into the title). Speaking of which, here is Impetus.

 

 

All The Same/Downfall Of Us All/King Of Arizona/Built For Sin/Fighting Tao


"angel, angel what have I done?
I've faced the quicks, the wind, the fire
I've conquered country, crown and throne
why can't I cross this river?
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Interesting start. It's good to see where everything is at before the start of the story.

The format is quite interesting, script-like similar to NM except almost completely dialogue driven.

I'm eager to see where all of this will go. 

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Wow, I can already tell this is gonna be an interesting story.

 

But holy s**t, they cut out the tongues and leave explosives inside!? :smileysurprised: That's... that's quite creative. :smileyvery-happy:

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Noble10 wrote:

Wow, I can already tell this is gonna be an interesting story.

 

But holy s**t, they cut out the tongues and leave explosives inside!? :smileysurprised: That's... that's quite creative. :smileyvery-happy:


Agreed. Not even modern-day Iraqi insurgents/al-Qaeda terrorists would think of doing that. I have to think that this new "insurgency group" is going more ruthless than modern-day insurgents/terrorists.

I just wonder how both Britannia and the BKs are going to handle this...

This is going to be one hell of a story.

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cutting out thier tounges and putting in explosives? im liking this light brigade already! lol ah aweosme start im sure itl be an awesome stry! and this time im trying harder not to fall so behind on stories. cant wait to see more :smileyhappy:


also thats kind of a cool song you linked to the title of the chap.


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Yeah, I know the tongues sound weird, but there's a reason for it that I will explain later in the series. Right now I've already planned out the next three chapters, these chapters will cover the backstory before the war took full form. The first chapter will be out the first week of November, until then I hope to see a lot of character submissions, right now I think we have about twelve, my goal is in the 30s.

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I've faced the quicks, the wind, the fire
I've conquered country, crown and throne
why can't I cross this river?
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So I've started writing for the next chapter, I'm thinking I'll do the next two chapters without the submittied characters and then when november starts I should be to stage three.

All The Same/Downfall Of Us All/King Of Arizona/Built For Sin/Fighting Tao


"angel, angel what have I done?
I've faced the quicks, the wind, the fire
I've conquered country, crown and throne
why can't I cross this river?
RR;


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Well, you have your way, I have mine. I'll accept your disuse of the OP/ED format, but from my perspective, I'll use it. My choices for this reading:

 

OP: "Book" by Hana Shonen Baddies

ED: "Kanashimi wa Kitto" by UVERworld

 

On the other hand, Impetus sounds good.

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That was a very good opening. I'm hooked! :smileytongue:
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Omega3030150 wrote:
So I've started writing for the next chapter, I'm thinking I'll do the next two chapters without the submittied characters and then when november starts I should be to stage three.

I think you can get away with doing a few submitted characters...just ask before you do

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Stage 1
 
 
Neil: *dressing* dammit, my head hurts like crazy. Sh!t
Neil: *puts mask on and grabs a clear glass bottle* Not quite numb enough, let the bitter warmth of summers lost rest on my tongue.
*drinks and then throws the bottle, but someone catches it out of nowhere*
Ragnarok: Huh? God, don't you ever knock?
Layla: Sorry, but I really don't believe in common courtesy. Besides, I have very good news, the catch of the day is here.
Ragnarok: Really now? That was quick, you and Isaac must have been up early.
Layla: Not really, generals don't have very extensive security details. Just about 30 second rate lackeys, we were in and out in 10 minutes.
Ragnarok: Well isn't that something, I'm guessing you've made him feel at home?
Layla: If you'd call Shinjuku a home. I don't come barging in to disturb you for no reason, you made it perfectly clear he was an important target.
Ragnarok: Yes, he's the last one outside the Royal Family and their ranks connected to that attack. We have some personal things to catch up on.
Layla: Well I guess that means we're not gonna get to watch, no fair! Oh well, just leave us the aftermath will ya. We love seeing your works of art.
Ragnarok: No problem, I'll make sure to put together something worth the adulation.
Layla: *eyes gleaming* You always do!
Ragnarok: One more thing Layla, would you please stop undressing me with your eyes. Its not very professional.
Layla: Didn't I just say that I don't believe in common courtesy? Well to show you I'm sorry I'll go put this bottle in the fridge for you.
Ragnarok: Whatever.
Ragnarok: *heading down to the holding cells* I've waited quite awhile for this, finally I can avenge you.
Isaac: Your Majesty!
Ragnarok: Oh, hello Isaac, I must say I'm impressed with the efficiency you and Layla showed in getting our guest here.
Isaac: Thank you my lord, but to be completely honest, that was nothing. Wait til you see the gift I gave him *opens door to holding cell*
Ragnarok: Oh my, very lovely my friend, your craftsmanship is getting better and better.
Isaac: You've always been excellent inspiration my lord, I tried burning steel this time, it really adds quite the flare.
Ragnarok: Indeed, well I'm glad you had your fun. But now me and the general are going to have a private discussion, you don't have problem with that do you?
Isaac: Of....Of course not my lord, go ahead.
Ragnarok: *enters the holding cell and closes the door, deactivates the cameras* Hello Dalton
Dalton: Go to hell!
Ragnarok: Oh come now, the legendary General Dalton can't come up with anything better to say.
Dalton: How about your a worth piece of sh!t idiot who will be dead very soon.
Ragnarok: Better. Tell me, do you like your souvenir *points to his forehead*
Dalton: *sarcastic* Very much! You are the kind of man who would have his goons brand me with your symbol before you killed me.
Ragnarok: Brand? Don't be ridiculous, he dug into your flesh with a burning dagger. Much prettier, but enough of these plesantries, we have some personal matters to discuss.
Ragnarok: *takes off mask* Its been a long time General
Dalton: Fallon! But your...your!
Neil: Dead? Well I suppose thats true in a sense. But the question is why aren't you? That ball invitation with the Royal Family certainly did save your pathetic life.
Dalton: But why, why are you of all people doing this. You were making such groudbreaking contributions to our military technology, becoming the man your father never was.
Neil: How dare you mention my father! The man who you and your men slaughtered in that mercilous blood bath called Shinjuku.
Dalton: So everything since that day was a lie, every detail right down to your death.
Neil: Of course, you don't truly believe that I bought into repenting through enslavement crap, do you?
Dalton: You would have been much better off, you could've surpassed Kururugi!
Neil: I have surpassed Kururugi! To even compare me to that that masochistic, ideologic fool.
Dalton: So its been you all along, even the figurehead bombing, but how?
Neil: You said it yourself Dalton, I am quite the brilliant engineer. A lifeless autonamaton, such an easy con, inflicting such remarkable damage.
Dalton: HAHAHAHA! Your a fool Fallon, do you really believe you can topple Britania? Or is this just blind revenge until your pathetic life is taken?
Neil: Your mistaken Dalton, all a man needs to do to change the world is conquer it. And all a man need to conquer is more power than his enemy. I am stronger than any of you.
Neil: But enough conversation, I have an obligation to kill you and I don't feel like putting it off any longer. Don't be fooled though, I will enjoy this immensely!
Neil: *puts on two shinning gauntlets* You should be honored Dalton, you will be the first of your kind to feel the hands of the Ragnarok take your worthless life away.
Dalton: Do you expect me to beg Fallon?
Neil: *puts on mask* No Dalton, I expect you to scream!
Dalton: AHHHHH!
Ragnarok: *walks out of the holding cell* Well you two, I tried to leave you something worth starring at.
Isaac: Oh my god, its, its....
Layla: Beautiful
*Dalton's body was mutilated beyond imagination, seered flesh bruised and butchered*
Ragnarok: Good, now our latest shipment of Knightmare Frames will be arriving today, its our largest to date.
Isaac: How many?
Ragnarok: 25,000
Layla: Awesome, the customs and everything?
Ragnarok: Yes, now if you'll excuse me I have something to attend to.
Isaac and Layla: Yes Your Majesty!
Ragnarok: *thinking to himself* Killing Dalton, it felt....good. I've never felt that way taking a person's life, I need to see the doctor.
Ragnarok: *enters a bright white room in the palace* Hello doctor, you and me need to have talk.
Dr. Keenan: Of course, I'm the only person you can talk to here. Sense this is my only real function here and you can wipe my memory at will without consequence.
Ragnarok: *takes off mask* Yeah, that sounds about right. So I should start from the beginning right?
Dr. Keenan: Isn't that how we always start? Mind you that is sort of a question sense I don't remember.
Neil: Well then, my name is Neil Fallon. Age 18, son of the late Maynard and Judith Fallon. I was raised to be both a great engineer and artist, and my parents were both very wonderful. When I was eight I fell in love for the first time, the last time. Her name was Kallen, I loved her very much. Her older brother died fighting in the resistence when she was twelve, he was a very good man. I picked up music when ten, I was very good and I became a professional musician in a band I started when I was 16. I wrote music to escape the depression that was going on in the world, to vent in an honest light. I played a huge stadium on my 17 birthday, everyone was their but my father, who was working in Shinjuku that night. We had lunch before the show and talked about ideas, it was a very nice talk. That was probably the best night of my life, everything in my world was complete. The next morning I woke to hear that my father died in the attack on Shinjuku, he had been there all night and didn't get out in time. He died in combat in one of the Knightmare prototype's he had made. My mother soon after became the victim of a crippling anuerism, she spent her final days praying to god to save her, the same god that took her husband and had left her broken and paralyzed. The only person I truly loved was Kallen, she helped me believe in kindness. The only warmth I feel is in the memory of songs I wrote for her years ago. Summers lost and never to be found again. So after all the previous mention events I did the only logic thing a man as volitale as me could. I broke up with Kallen and became of a part of the Britannian Army and Engineering Divisions. I spent two months setting up the stage for my final moments on this earth as Neil Fallon, and when my time was done I faked my own death and became the most egregious murderer this nation has ever seen. And that's pretty much all the big stuff up to now.
Dr. Keenan: Anything else you'd like to add?
Neil: I long for summers lost.
 
NEXT TIME
Stage 2: Today

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I've conquered country, crown and throne
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Re: Code Geass: Ragnarok of the Revolution Fanfic

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Character List:

 

Layla - cidthekittyisfun

Isaac Sadique - Noble10

Neil Fallon - Omega3030150

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Re: Code Geass: Ragnarok of the Revolution Fanfic

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A few notes:

 

1. I know these chapters are a little short, but its the best I can do until I get a full set of characters to work with and a lot of them aren't ready to be intro'd yet.

2. The next two chapters are full out flashbacks, they cover the death of Neil's father and Neil's faked death in that order.

3. Dr Keenan is made up character, he's an homage to Maynard James Keenan of the band Tool (similarly to how Neil's name is an homage to Neil Fallon of Clutch). Notice Neil's father's name is Maynard and his mother's name is Judith (which was a song Maynard wrote about about his mother)

 

Let me know what you guys think!

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I've faced the quicks, the wind, the fire
I've conquered country, crown and throne
why can't I cross this river?
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Re: Code Geass: Ragnarok of the Revolution Fanfic

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Reply to Omega3030150 - Message ID#: 51856746

poor Dalton heh, i was lamenting how he never catches a break just earlier today

 

oddly enough, i read Stage 1 in exactly the amount of time it took to listen to Summers Lost - it ended literally right as i got to "NEXT TIME" - talk about strange coincidences heh

 

it's looking interesting so far, hopefully you'll get some more character submissions soon

(i'm still working on a second one, but i just haven't been able to focus on it)

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Re: Code Geass: Ragnarok of the Revolution Fanfic

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That was a pretty cool way for Dalton to meet his end.
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Re: Code Geass: Ragnarok of the Revolution Fanfic

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Interesting developments with Neil, should be a interesting character.

Can't wait to see how things play out.

I hope you can get the number of characters you need soon.

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Re: Code Geass: Ragnarok of the Revolution Fanfic

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right now we're sitting at 15 characters, my hope is that we hit the 30s by early november. once I get past stage 3 I plan to start busting out more characters then I am now, until then I will be working with the ones that have already been submitted.

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I've faced the quicks, the wind, the fire
I've conquered country, crown and throne
why can't I cross this river?
RR;


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Re: Code Geass: Ragnarok of the Revolution Fanfic

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oh kewl my char made it in alreayd awesome! and i bet that was beautiful the way he died.. kinda cool >______> anyways nice start! this neil guy seems like someone i wouldnt wanan mess with and im curious about the way his dad died and if it was some sort of conspiracy or what. and wow 25k mechas? thats alot! goodness! im looking forward to the flashback chaps. and dont worry about it being short it was great i cant wait to read more! :smileyhappy:


oh ya! nice title song! i almost forgot that you name your titles after songs (lol i like doing the same thing its fun huh?) then im like oh ya and looked up to see wat song it was you chose. its fitting.


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Re: Code Geass: Ragnarok of the Revolution Fanfic

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thanks for the feedback guys, new chapter will be sometime before next weekend.

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I've faced the quicks, the wind, the fire
I've conquered country, crown and throne
why can't I cross this river?
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Re: Code Geass: Ragnarok of the Revolution Fanfic

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Looks good so far Omega. Neil/Ragnarok seems to be quite malicious. I cant wait to see how things will turn out.

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