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so much hax, like hax*9000

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Great chapter! :smileyhappy:
I liked Ragnarok's speech to the public. Pretty intense.
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writing the next chapter, about halfway done. it will be up tomorrow.

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Can't wait! :smileyhappy:
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 Chapter 12

(in the wake of) The Swollen Goat

 

 

“(in the wake of) The Swollen Goat”

 

*Up in the sky floats the one flagship of The Light Brigade, The Swollen Goat. Surrounding it are all one hundred Knightmares of the Blast Tyrants, radiating the dark wave of energy that had become infamous of the group. In the wake of the tyrants are the remaining members of the brigade, everyone but Ragnarok is on the battlefield*

 

Ragnarok: Well then, let’s play war.

 

Cornelia: I won’t allow this! Divert waves two and four to attack The Light Brigade, and fire that dam weapon at The Black Knights!

 

Dmitri and Guilford: Yes your Highness!

 

*The Holy Fires on all of the Britannian flagships begin to charge for another attack*

 

Ragnarok: Oh look, their flagships have special little guns on them! Well if we’re gonna play a game of who’s is bigger, I think their gonna be disappointed. Oh mighty Daedalus! Father from on high! Show them your light!

 

*In the clouds above, The Daedalus becomes visible and begins charging its large primary cannon*

 

Ragnarok: Let’s see, well I could shoot Cornelia’s flagship, but that one might actually have a decent defense field. And besides, what fun would it be killing her so quickly? Alright, we’ll shoot the peons.

 

Cornelia: ALL UNITS! DIVERT POWER TO YOUR DEFENSES!

 

Ragnarok: Fire

 

*The Daedalus fires its primary cannon, clipping the flight engines on flagships two and four*

 

Ragnarok: HAHAHA! Man can I aim or what?

 

Cornelia: DAM HIM! DAM HIM! DAM HIM! Flagships two and four, evacuate immediately! Dmitri, Forget The Black Knights, aim all the remaining Holy Fires at Ragnarok!

 

Ragnarok: Well this is going to be fun. Akesato, would you be a dear and lead the brigade into battle?

 

Akesato: Yes my lord, as your wish.

 

Ragnarok: Well, I guess it’s time for me to get ready.

 

*Back inside the military compound Kallen and her unit are preparing to engage with The Knights of the Round*

 

Kallen: Folka, what’s the word?

 

Folka: Their up here alright, not all of the Knights. But Suzaku, Gino, Zack, Salaand, Luciano and Bismark are right in front of me.

 

Kallen: I can settle for the big six.

 

Folka: There’s also a small group of soldiers with them, like six more, must be a rescue team or something.

 

Kallen: Can’t say I’m surprised, I guess this means we’re just gonna have to play to the plan perfectly. Is everyone ready to begin?

 

Group: Yeah

 

Kallen: Alright then Teinei, kill the sound.

 

Teinei: I’m on it

 

*Back on the battlefield, the battle between The Light Brigade/Black Knights and Britannia is beginning to peak*

 

Layla: Hey Asiko, I have an idea. Why don’t you and I take out that small pocket of Knightmares to the left?

 

Asiko: Sounds like a plan, you do see that there’s like a hundred of them right?

 

Layla: Yeah! That’s what makes it fun!

 

Asiko: I suppose, might as well show off a little.

 

*Back on the other side of the battlefield, the Britannians are frantically trying to come up with a new plan*

 

Marc: I think my ramboness is all worn out! What the hell are we gonna do?!?!

 

Matt: Fight, that’s all we can do. Fight and try not to die.

 

Marc: That’s it? There’s no grand strategy that you can come up with?

 

Valde: Sounded like a grand strategy to me. It’s all good Marc, just hide behind me and the Lucifer, you might actually learn what real fighting looks like.

 

Marc: Oh, thanks Valde. How are you holding up Alex?

 

Alex: I’ve been better, I think I should regroup with you guys.

 

Matt: Sounds good man, we all need to stick together.

 

Marc: Right! We’ll all get through this if we stick together!

 

*Six and Shiro are at the heart of the battle, trying to lead The Black Knights over Britannia’s forces*

 

Six: How the hell did we end up in charge here!

 

Shiro: I don’t know, but right now I think we have everything under control, as long we don’t let up I’m sure we can take this wave of enemies out.

 

Six: Right, and besides the Britannians are getting worn thin now that The Light Brigade is here. Two armies are better than one for more reasons than I would’ve thought.

 

Shiro: Yeah, the confusion and stress it must be causing Britannia alone is a huge advantage.

 

Six: Well speaking of The Light Brigade

 

*Ian Kenny and his unit are now coming to the aid of the Six and Shiro’s unit*

 

Ian: Hello gentlemen, it looked like you had a good fighting going here and I thought me and my men could join the fun.

 

Shiro: The more the merrier, what’s your name man?

 

Ian: Ian Kenny, Blast Tyrant #4

 

Six: Impressive, well I think you’re in the right place buddy. What do you say we teach these Britannians what real combat looks like.

 

Ian: Sounds good to me.

 

*Ian shoots down ten frames with his Roguefort*

 

Six: Holy crap! That was something else, you barely lifted a finger.

 

Ian: Oh yeah, you should see what I can do when I raise my entire hand.

 

*Issac and Akesato are giving orders from the edge of the battlefield, trying to maintain their advantage*

 

Akesato: Despite everything Ragnarok has done to give us the upper hand, we still are just clinging onto control.

 

Issac *shooting units from afar*: Perhaps, but you forget the biggest piece isn’t even on the board. Even with the absence of the Knights of the Round surely coming to an end, I

have extreme confidence that we won’t be challenged.

 

Akesato: You really think the Okkam can do that much? I’ve only heard rumors of what it’s capable of.

 

Isaac: Well no one has seen it in action, but it uses a completely foreign system to what anything else is running on. Consider it the one and only tenth generation Knightmare, and Rags has been salivating over it for a long time.

 

Akesato: Well let’s keep this fight going and see if we can hold onto victory until he gets here.

 

Issac: Yeah, let’s take Tyrant squad 4 and clear that primary wave.

 

*Back on the main Britannian Flagship, Cornelia is preparing to attack The Swollen Goat with the remaining Holy Fires*

 

Soldier: Princess Cornelia, it appears that The Swollen Goat is trying to establish communication with us.

 

Cornelia: AHH! That arrogant brat! PUT HIM ON!

 

Ragnarok: Ah, Princess Cornelia. It’s always a delight to see you.

 

Cornelia: Cut the small talk, what did you want to say?

 

Ragnarok: Oh right……..PLEASE DON’T SHOOT MY SHIP! I’m scared of you!

 

Cornelia: YOU’RE A DEADMAN! DO YOU HEAR ME! YOU AND YOUR MEN ARE ALL DEAD!

 

Ragnarok: Oh, well I don’t know about my men, but I’ve been dead for a long time. Seriously though, go ahead and take your shot, I’m getting all anxious to see that mad look on your face turn into murder.

 

Cornelia *steaming*: CUT OFF COMMUNICATIONS!

 

*Communication between The Swollen Goat and Britannia is cut*

 

Cornelia: FIRE THAT WEAPON NOW!

 

Ragnarok: All power to the Umbra Defense Wave, kill the engines too.

 

*The three remaining Holy Fires all take fire at The Swollen Goat, but its Umbra Defense Wave is able to absorb the full damage. However, it does leave most of The Swollen Goat’s systems temporarily disabled*

 

Ragnarok: Well that was interesting, I thought we were gonna die for sure. Good job everybody!

 

Cornelia: AHHHHH!!!!!!! Get me The Knights of the Round NOW!

 

 

“Juggernaut”

 

 

*Ragnarok is in the Knightmare hanger preparing the Okkam for launch*

 

Ragnarok: I’ve waited so long to take control of all this chaos, to end all the bullsh!t.

 

H.H.: You think you’ve waited long, try going an eternity.

 

Ragnarok: What the hell, why are you here right now?

 

H.H.: The same reason I ever show up, to make sure that my investment is safe and well prepared.

 

Ragnarok: So I’m your investment huh?

 

H.H.: Yes, I put what was left of my unending life into putting you into this situation. Everything you’ve accomplished is the realization of my dreams. And now you’re about to take another crucial step.

 

Ragnarok: I’m assuming that you’re here about my plans for the Okkam.

 

H.H.: I’ve always found it beautiful that you named it that. Your whole life has revolved around a belief in the truth. And now truth has lead you to the path of blood, how cruel.

 

Ragnarok: Not as cruel as the dam headache I get every time you talk to me, could you please hurry this up.

 

H.H.: I’m here because you’re about to kill a lot of people, you’re about to become the face of death and destruction. Are you telling me you’ve accepted that?

 

Ragnarok *pulling out a flask for a drink*: God, you really make my head kill. Yes, I’m perfectly aware of what I’m doing. I know just how selfish and evil I have chosen to become, accepting the role of the god I’ve opposed for so long. But you’re not here because you’re worried for me, you’re here because you feel guilty about the monster you’ve made. You dirty a kind soul in the name of your mission, and now you’re trapped in my head, suffocating inside your own creation. It must be a beautiful hell.

 

*Back inside the military compound, Kallen and her squad are about to make their move on The Knights of the Round*

 

Kallen: Sound is out, just hope everyone can stick to the plan without orders.

 

*Kallen goes up to the next floor, hits the floor to go prone, and pulls out a flashlight. The plan was to hit a set of mirrors with the flashlight, when it hits the mirror in front of Teinei she puts the sound back on*

 

Kallen: Ok, so Haya and Ginger are up front and Teinei is to the other side of me. Folka should be in position behind Suzaku. Let’s do this.

 

*Kallen turns on her flashlight, the beam makes it to Teinei, who then restores the sound*

 

Kallen: EVERYBODY NOW!

 

Folka *becoming visible, guns pointed at Suzaku and Zack*: Move and your brains go on the floor

 

Kallen *walking with the rest of her squad*: Hi Suzaku, knights, how’s every little thing?

 

Suzaku: Kallen! This is madness, whatever you’re trying to do it’s never going to work.

 

Kallen: I don’t know about that Suzaku, your friends could always attack us, but I don’t think taking such heavy losses is high on their agenda right now. The price you pay for having an arrogant sense of entitlement to life I suppose.

 

Zack: Kallen, this is all wrong! You can’t seriously tell me you’d kill us like this.

 

Kallen: I have orders from Zero to bring you in as prisoners

 

Luciano: AND HOW THE HELL WILL YOU DO THAT?!?! There are more of us then there are of you!

 

Kallen: Good point. *Kallen pulls out a tranquilizer gun, knocking out everyone but Suzaku, Gino and Zack, Salaand and Luciano, who are all at gunpoint*

 

Kallen: A transport unit will be here soon.

 

*Back on the Primary Britannian Flagship, the chosen devicers are about to deliver the frames of The Knights*

 

Cornelia: Our only hope of winning this battle is get The Knights of the Round back, I don’t care what it takes, get these frames to them intact!

 

Soldiers: Yes your Highness!

 

*Back on the battlefield, Matt, Alex and Valde have been assigned to cover the frames of The Knights on their way to the compound*

 

Alex: Oh yeah, this is gonna be nice and safe. Don’t you just love suicide missions?

 

Valde: Almost as much as I love the sound of your whining.

 

Alex: Touché, Pr!ck.

 

Matt: Well here they come, let’s do this!

 

Alex: Oh hell, I’m really starting to get to get pissed!

 

Valde: Just keep fighting, their almost through.

 

Matt: Well one thing’s for sure, we aren’t gonna last much longer without the Knights.

 

*Back on The Swollen Goat, Ragnarok and H.H. are discussing things to come*

 

Ragnarok: You know everything, all my thoughts and ideas, every last plan and transgression. You must be so proud.

 

H.H.: Very, I guess I just wasn’t….

 

Ragnarok: Ready? Neither of us were, but now you’re in this with me and there’s no going back. I really don’t have any sympathy for the pain you find yourself in now. It’s the grave you dug, and you’re stuck in it until this is all over.

 

H.H.: Just tell me this and I’ll leave you be. Do you miss being normal? Do you hate me for what I’ve made you into, do you hate yourself?

 

Ragnarok: Yes to all three.

 

*Back at the compound, the custom frames are being delivered and the soldiers are coming in to save the Knights of the Round*

 

Soldier: Princess Cornelia, we have arrived at the compound, but we see enemy frames outside and believe there might be hostiles. We are preparing to engage.

 

Kallen: Ok, here’s how this is going to go down, you-

 

Ginger: Kallen, we have enemies coming in from the roof. Approximately 20 and their moving fast.

 

Kallen: Dam! Well I guess we just have to kill you boys here.

 

Soldiers: Freeze! Put your weapons down or we will open fire!

 

Kallen: Put your weapons down or you lose the Knights, this battle and the war!

 

Soldier: You can’t possibly think this will work. Give up you dam elevens!

 

Folka: That’s the difference between us and you, we aren’t afraid to die!

 

Kallen: Indeed, but we’ll cut you a deal. We let the Knights live and you let us escape, it’s simple really, we take our hostages to the door and then we’ll let them go. I’m sure you could land the shots if we cheated.

 

Soldier: You get twelve steps back and then I suggest you run.

 

Kallen: Fine, we can do that.

 

*Kallen and her squad make it to the door and run, while the rescue team secures the Knights and tries to get them in their frames*

 

Haya *running with everyone else*: Kallen, why did you let them escape?

 

Kallen: I didn’t, at the pace we’re moving they have two minutes to get out before I blow the place to hell. At the very least that rescue team just gave their lives for nothing.

 

Soldiers *waking up the knocked out Knights*: You guys need to get to the roof and now! Your frames are up there, don’t worry we have a transport unit coming for us.

 

Suzaku: Thank you all so much, make sure you get out of here alive.

 

Soldiers: We’ll get out, now hurry and go win us this battle.

 

*The Knights rush to their frames and leave the compound, as Kallen blows it away*

 

Kallen: Well I guess we were too late, oh well, I’ll settle for the peons.

 

*Kallen blows up the compound, leaving Suzaku and the rest of the knights to look on*

 

Suzaku: Dammit! We should’ve known it was coming, we should’ve been able to save them.

 

Zack: Well they gave their lives to get us out here, let’s do what we’re here to do!

 

Salannd: One thing is bugging me though. The Light Brigade is here, but where’s Ragnarok?

 

Ragnarok: Britannia, I’m coming for you, I’m coming for you and everything you hold dear. Piece by piece I’m going to take it all away, I will end the vicious cycle once and for all.

 

 

NEXT TIME

Chapter 13: Fear of the Sky

All The Same/Downfall Of Us All/King Of Arizona/Built For Sin/Fighting Tao


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Layla - cidthekittyisfun

Isaac Sadique - Noble10

Alexander Joeri - HeeroYuy135

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Asiko Kiyama - iloveyuyuhakusho

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Not much I have to say, if you have questions feel free to ask tho. Next chapter will be huge and probably feature everybody, its the last chapter of this battle.

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Ragnarok: Oh right……..PLEASE DON’T SHOOT MY SHIP! I’m scared of you! 

:smileyvery-happy:

 

the battle is shaping up nicely. can't wait to see what the Okkam has to bring to the table :smileyhappy:

nice job Omega.

 

 



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Very interesting chapter, nice continue of the battle.

The interactions between Alex, Matt, and Valde are very fun and interesting.

Well looks like the Knights were saved, should make the battle more interesting.

Should be really fun to see the Okkam come out, I wonder who will get to fight it.

Can't wait for next chapter.

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Holy s**t, that was epic.

 

I still don't trust the dynamic between the BK and LB. When Ian offered to help... I dunno, that just seemed eerie to me. I bet either Zero or Ragnarok have backstabbing on their to-do list. :smileytongue:

 

I can see those "conversations" with H.H. are a way to see what Ragnarok is thinking and feeling without using too many monologues. Nice job with that.

 

Overall, another great chapter. Keep 'em coming.

 

Oh, one more thing... "Oh mighty Daedalus! Father from on high! Show them your light!" Did Ragnarok ever work as a priest? :smileyvery-happy:

"I watch the world. The sun shines. Stars twinkle. Plants grow. Animals feel. And humans have souls. I watch the soul. The soul can hear the voice of God. Taste its sweet fragrance. Savor its words. Touch its outstretched fingertips. I watch the world. I watch the soul. I realize that the light guides my footsteps."


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Thanks guys, the comments are appreciated.

 

sorry, ragnarok wasn't a priest.....I think he finds them amusing tho.

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Awesome chapter. I'm excited to see how this battle is going to wrap up.

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That was a great chapter. Nice character interactions.
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Thanks everyone, due to the size and complexity of the next chapter (it might be my biggest undertaking to date) I doubt it will be up until the weekend. But I think it will really be worth it, also that poem I told you guys about is coming in the chapter after this next one.

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I've conquered country, crown and throne
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writing the new chapter, up tomorrow probably. it's hard stuff tho because of how much detail I'm trying to put in to make the experience sink in, I wish I had animators!

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I've faced the quicks, the wind, the fire
I've conquered country, crown and throne
why can't I cross this river?
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I am sure you will be able to make everything stick with everyone. Can't wait for the next chapter, after this week I could use some distractions.
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writing the new chapter, up tomorrow probably. it's hard stuff tho because of how much detail I'm trying to put in to make the experience sink in, I wish I had animators!

that'd be awesome :smileyvery-happy:

i'm sure it'll be great either way 



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 Chapter 13

Fear of the Sky

 

“Fear of the Sky”

 

*Aboard the Swollen Goat, Rangarok is preparing to launch the Okkam*


Ragnarok: So this what my life has become, silencing the voices of simple lives. The sound of serenity dies with the monster I have become, the monster I have embraced.


Computer: Preparing Okkam for launch, core system stabilized, speed boosters ready, weaponry online. Okkam ready for launch.


Ragnarok *on com with Akesato*: Akesato, order all units to clear sectors seven through nine. I’m about to launch.


Akesato: Yes my lord, but why do they need to clear such a large area?


Ragnarok: Because I’m going to be shooting at it. Launching Okkam now


*The Okkam launches out of the Swollen Goat’s Knightmare hanger at a bullet like speed. On Akesato’s order all Light Brigade (and in suit Black Knight) frames pull away from Ragnarok’s target area*


Ragnarok: WEATHERMAKER!


*The Okkam launches a large prism like object and unleashes an attack similar to the Shinkiro’s “Zero Beam”, hitting several enemy Knightmares*


Ragnarok: Well then, I’m here Britannia.


*Off in the distance, The Knights of the Round watch as Ragnarok and the Okkam make their debut*


Suzaku: So he’s chosen to fight, he’s chosen to embrace his murderous ways. I can’t let him hurt all these people, I won’t let him.


Luciano: Cut the crap Suzaku, Ragnarok is MINE!


*Luciano and his Percival charge toward the Okkam, ready to attack*


Luciano: RAGNAROK!


Ragnarok: Ahh, Luciano Bradley. What a pleasure it will be to kill you today.


Luciano: You worthless eleven, I’M THE ONE WHO’S GOING TO TAKE YOUR LIFE!


*Ragnarok and Luciano begin to do battle, exchanging fierce blows, though Luciano isn’t landing many*


Luciano: Dam you! Stop dodging me and submit to your master!


Ragnarok: You pathetic waste of life, I’LL KILL YOU RIGHT NOW!


*Ragnarok uses Okkam’s Razor to cut off the Percival’s right and left arms, then grabs it by the face*


Ragnarok *seething*: That’s right, HOW DOES IT FEEL TO KNOW YOU’RE ABOUT TO DIE!


Luciano: DAM YOU! YOU WORTHLESS ELEVEN!


Ragnarok: I told you I’d enjoy this, Umbra….QUERITOR (shadow grip)


*a powerful energy wave emitted from the Okkam’s grip obliterates the Percival with a black fire*


Ragnarok *looking down at the Lancelot*: I’ve only just begun.


*in another part of the battlefield, Matt, Alex and Valde are fighting as they see Ragnarok and Luciano’s battle in the distance*


Alex: I don’t believe it, I don’t f*cking believe it! That bastard killed Luciano, the f*cking Knight of Ten!


Valde: He certainly did, that Knightmare certainly is worthy of his legacy, I think I might go fight it.


Matt: Uh, please don’t. We need you here, not dead.


Valde: Thanks for the vote of confidence Matt, I appreciate it.


Matt: You know I didn’t mean it like that, just don’t go get yourself killed. We really need you here.


Alex: Yeah, I think there’s a sufficient amount of danger coming right for us!


*It was The Black Knights being lead by Six, Shiro and Ian Kenny (and his small group of Light Brigade)*


Ian: Hello Gentemen, I bare a message on behalf of the Black Knights and Light Brigade, you better f*cking run!


*an all out battle breaks between the main Britannian Fleet and the group of Black Knights and Light Brigade*


Valde: So your name is Ian? Allow me to introduce myself attacking Ian and the Roguefort* I am Valde Crudelis!


Ian *blocking Valde’s attack*: Oh, how unfortunate. You assume I care who you are!


*Valde and his Lucifer strike the Roguefort, piercing into its chest*


Valde: Well maybe you should.


Ian: Haha, I like your confidence, but skill can’t be imitated!


Valde: Well than allow me to show you my skill.


*As the battle between Valde and Ian rages on, Alex and Matt are taking on Six and Shiro*


Alex: Dam, this battle is really starting to make me mad!


Shiro *attacking Alex*: Quick temper eh? I don’t think that’s going to serve you well.


Matt: Maybe not, but I will!


Six: Come on now, don’t tell me you guys forgot about me!


Alex: Ahh! Shut up, I’m trying to kill your friend!


Shiro: Hey, it’s not our fault that you’re stupid.


*As the firefight between Britannia and The Black Knights & Light Brigade continues, Ragnarok and Suzaku find themselves face to face for the first time in combat*


Suzaku: It ends here Ragnarok, I can’t let you keep killing all these people for nothing, I’ve accepted the role of being…..your executioner.


Ragnarok: Have you now? I’m so proud, finally taking a little responsibility and not being bound by fear, what a big step for you Suzaku. But I’m afraid there’s just no way I can let you kill me. There’s something bigger than us that I need to see through, I can’t let you stop me.


Suzaku: Whatever you’re planning, I’M NOT LETTING YOU KILL ANYMORE PEOPLE!


Ragnarok: Ok then, try to stop me.


*Suzaku and the Lancelot attack the Okkam with a flurry of strikes from his maser blades, but they’re all blocked by Okkam’s Razor(s)*


Ragnarok: Come on Suzaku! You’re gonna have do a lot better than that to beat me.


Suzaku: You, someone with so much strength and devotion, you should be fighting to stop this war!


Ragnarok: THERE IS NO STOPPING THIS WAR! People are fighting for their beliefs and their desires, they’ve chosen this path because war is the only way we know to resolve such issues. So I will teach the world to learn to relate to its suffering masses. I will create a war so bitter and painful you will all cling to the love you left dying by the wayside. This is it Suzaku, THIS IS HUMANITY’S FINAL WAR!


Suzaku: You’re insane


Ragnarok: Maybe, but I’m also right. Just you watch, nothing brings the world together like a tragedy. So I will teach the world what tragedy looks like when it hits everyone. The rich and the poor, the young and the old, the privileged and the destitute, they’re all going to suffer.


Suzaku: I WON’T LET THAT HAPPEN! I’M GOING TO STOP YOU!


Ragnarok: No, you’re not. Berserker.


*Ragnarok and the Okkam charges at the Lancelot Conquista at a frightening speed, cutting into it deep with Okkam’s Razor*


Suzaku: Dam! That Knightmare, it’s stronger than my Lancelot, and I can’t out fight him either.


Ragnarok: Accept it Suzaku, even you can’t stop what I’ve put in motion. It’s with great sorrow that I tell you that this is the only solution. Of that I have no doubt.


Suzaku: You’re wrong


Ragnarok: Soon you will understand my friend, but until then, Perspicuus Pugnus (shinning fist).


*Ragnarok sends the Lancelot flying with a heavy energy wave blast from its fist*


Lancelot: Blaze Luminous offline, Yggdrasil drive damaged, energy filler depleting.


Suzaku: Dammit!


Ragnarok: How unfortunate Suzaku, but it appears that you’re in no position to fight and the rest of the Knights are tied up at the moment. The last hope Britannia had of winning this battle has failed. Layla, Akesato, grab him.


*Layla and Akesato each grab Suzaku by an arm to restrain him from moving*


Suzaku: AHH! LET ME GO!


Ragnarok: Uhhhh…….no. I have something you need to see Suzaku, something the whole world needs to see. Akesato, do you remember what I told you about war and chess? Well see to it that Isaac and the other’s clear out quads 6 and 7, they aren’t going to be there much longer, any of it.


Akesato *stunned*: Y-Yes my Lord, right away.


Ragnarok: Good. Now Suzaku, I’m not a religious man per se, but I’d like to whisper prayer to the world right now. Do you know what it is?


*The Okkam begins creating a large orb of energy consisting of light and shadows between its claw and fist*


Ragnarok: I want them to remember the day they learned to fear the sky.


*Back on the ground, Derril and Jamie are leading the Light Brigade’s units on the ground when they receive orders from Isaac*


Derril: Holy hell! This whole area! Well then I guess we better get outta here. We’ll give the order right away. Ha, I think I’ll enjoy my front row seat of this.


Derril and Jamie *speaking to the Light Brigade in quads 6 and 7 respectively*: Attention all units, we need to get the hell out of here! Retreat heading south of the compound and bring as many Black Knights with you as possible. We don’t want any ally blood spilled.


*On command, The Light Brigade and Black Knights retreat from the area, leading Britannia to believe it’s winning its battle on the ground*


Marc *in the air*: No way! Their pulling back guys! We need to keep fighting, we can win this thing!


Ashtyn: But it doesn’t make any sense, it almost looked like they were winning. Maybe something scarred them away.


Marc: Yeah, the heart and strength of Britannia!


*Back in the air, Akesato and Layla are having a private conversation while restraining Suzaku*


Layla: So Akesato, do you have any idea what Ragnarok is about to do?


Akesato: He said to clear quads 6 and 7, so they must be the target of that attack he’s readying.


Layla: Yeah, but what are quads 6 and 7?


Akesato: Imagine the battlefield like a chess board, the board has 64 spots in 8x8 rows. A quad is four of those spots making a square. Now the board has 16 spots, going in ascending order from west to east and south to north, Ragnarok is shooting at spots 6 and 7, middle two in the second row. Right now they have the highest concentration too.


Layla: No way! He’s gonna whip that whole area out?!??!


Akesato: I don’t know, but I wouldn’t be surprised if he did.


Ragnarok: Alright ladies, you can let him go.


Layla: What? Why?


Ragnarok: Because he can’t get in my way now, he’s powerless to do anything. Let me explain to everybody. This attack starts out at a fairly moderate size, as you see it’s only about a third the size of my frame. But as it hurdles towards its target it becomes exponentially larger. So if Suzaku wanted to stop me from killing all those people, all he’d have to do is give is life. But you can’t do that, can you Suzaku? No, you have to live.


Suzaku *shocked*: How did you know about-!


Ragnarok: The Geass Zero placed on you? Well let me just say that certain people who are close to you aren’t what they appear. But right now, that doesn’t matter, all that matters is that I’m about to kill a lot of people and the most righteous man in the world isn’t going to stop me because he can’t.


Suzaku: Please…..DON’T DO THIS!


Ragnarok: I’m sorry, I have too, Ragnarok (destruction of the gods)


*the Okkam releases a powerful energy sphere that exponentially becomes bigger and bigger for exactly 21 seconds, whipping out its entire target area with an enormous explosion*


Ragnarok: I love it when things go better than planned, if I didn’t have the time to fully charge the attack it would’ve only been able to destroy a few Knightmares.


Isaac *witnessing the explosion*: The Okkam, it’s unbelievable.


Suzaku: You, YOU DISGUSTING MONSTER!


Ragnarok: I’m afraid your hate and disdain don’t faze me, I plan on doing a lot worse than this. And yes, heaven have mercy on my soul.



“Binge and Purge”


*from a remote location on the outskirts of the battlefield, Roger Ayles is watching on from his sniper post as the massive ragnarok from the Okkam impacts the battle*


Roger: Good god, what do we do know?


*Back on the Britannian Flagship, Princess Cornelia is trying decide her next move*


Guilford: Princess Cornelia, we need to make a decision as to how to proceed in this battle. We’ve already lost over half of the entire fleet and the Knight’s show no signs of turning this fight around. Princess Cornelia, Princess Cornelia!


Cornelia: How many have we lost? I want an exact number.


Guilford: 42,368 and counting, 5,791 just from Ragnarok’s attack.


Cornelia: Tell all ships to send any remaining soldiers out into battle.


Guilford: But Princess, we can’t-


Cornelia: THAT’S AN ORDER GUILFORD!


Guilford: Yes, your Highness.


Cornelia: So this is what it feels like to lose, it feels like dying in the dark and dingy corner with no light to be found. This disgrace, it rests square on my shoulders.


*Back on the battlefield, the fight is reaching its bittersweet end*


Iyumi: Zero, come in Zero:


Zero *in an empty tone*: Yes Iyumi, what is it?


Iyumi: We’ve won the fight on the ground! The remaining enemies are being devastated by our numbers, I can’t believe it, we’ve won this battle decisively.


Zero *still void of expression*: Good, this fight will be over soon.


*Zero cuts communication with Iyumi*


Kareko: So Iyumi, what did Zero say?


Iyumi: Nothing, he didn’t seem to even care, like there was something bigger than this that was upsetting him.


Zero: Ragnarok, is trusting you my only option? Even in victory over Britannia, all I’m doing is losing to you as you slowly take control. This indifference between us, do you truly believe it can last? because I don’t, I can’t give it all away, I can’t give it all to you.


*Kallen soon goes to join Zero on the outskirts of the battlefield*


Kallen: Britannia is sending in more forces, but it’s not going to work. Even with everything they have left here, it doesn’t even match our numbers. I’m going to go back into battle and see the rest of this thing through.


Zero: Very well. Kallen, what do you plan to do now that Ragnarok is out fighting? Out fighting our enemies no less, will you try to kill him?


Kallen: I don’t know, I still can’t put the past behind me, but right now the future is more important. I do know one thing, one day he will answer to me for what happened to Neil, one day he will answer for all of it.


Zero: I understand, good luck Kallen.


*Back in the skies, The Knights are fighting for their lives for a chance to get to Ragnarok before the battle ends*


Salaand: Hey Zack, how are you holding up?

 

Zack: I’m ok, just swarmed by a couple dozen Knightmares, you?


Salaand: Ha, the same. But I’m not leaving here until I get my hands on Ragnarok, I don’t care what orders we get.


Zack: I here you man, what do you say the two of us take him in together?


Salaand: I like the sound of that, meet you when we finish of these guys?


Zack: Yeah, sounds like a plan.


*Ragnarok stands before Suzaku, as their battle appears to be at its end*


Ragnarok: So Suzaku, do you have anything left? Or do I need to kill some more people before you get up and fight!


Suzaku: you, you, YOU HAVE TO BE STOPPED!


*Suzaku charges at Ragnarok with the Lancelot, and their blades quickly lock with one another*


Ragnarok: That’s it Suzaku, fight me with everything you’ve got! I don’t want you to hold back, I want you to…I WANT YOU TO KILL ME!


Suzaku: What!?!?


Ragnarok: You heard me, I told you from the very beginning Suzaku, I want to believe in your methods. The problem is I can’t, because they’ve always failed. But if you can kill me, maybe you can save this world. However *overpowering the Lancelot with Okkam* I HAVE VERY LITTLE FAITH IN YOU!


*The Okkam sends the Lancelot flying in the air*


Ragnarok: You truly are the savior Suzaku, the faultless pariah of this earth. But the funny thing about saviors is that they never quite measure up to the truth!


*The Okkam sends a flurry of blows at the Lancelot, bringing it to the brink of breaking*


Ragnarok: Don’t you do it, don’t you dare……DON’T YOU DARE TURN YOUR CHEEK TO ME! Self inflicting masochist, humble and holy, you are truly a saint. So why can’t you do it, WHY CAN’T YOU SAVE!?!?!


Suzaku: I-I don’t


Ragnarok: I keep looking for reasons to let you live. I want to believe so f*cking bad, but all you do is disappoint. I’m done playing games with you.


Falio *in a flight system charging for Ragnarok*: YOU SON OF A B!TCH!


*Falio makes contact with the Okkam, pushing it away from Suzaku*


Falio: YOU! Do you know how many good men you killed? Men with families and lovers, do you know how many you’ve killed?!?!


Ragnarok: Yes, I absolutely do. Did you expect me to show remorse, my only regret is that I couldn’t kill more. Now answer my question, how many has Britannia killed?.......No answer? Oh my, isn’t hypocrisy a beautiful thing. Men who kill should always be willing to be killed, because chances are they probably will be. There is no right and wrong in the world your country has created, there’s only the solution that will stop the bloodshed. And the right of making that decision has landed squarely on my lap.


Falio *sending blows towards the Okkam*: And that’s how you justify being a murderer playing god?


Ragnarok *grapping Falio’s Knightmare*: Who said I was justifying anything? *Shinning fist*


*The Okkam strikes Falio’s Arfau and sends it plummeting to the ground*


Falio *ejecting*: Dam him!


Ragnarok: Who’s next?


*Zack and Salaand ascend above Ragnarok, ready to attack him*


Zack: That would be us.


*As Zack and Salaand swoop down towards Ragnarok, Layla and Akesato come to his defense*


Akesato: Not so fast boys, we’ve been waiting for a decent fight all day!


*Akesato and Layla begin fighting Zack and Salaand, leading them away from Ragnarok*


Ragnarok: Well that should be interesting, now where were-. Where’s Suzaku?


*Suzaku is being dragged away by Anya and her Mordred*


Suzaku: Dammit Anya! Why are you doing this? You need to let me go!


Anya: No, I’ve been order to bring you back in. The fight is over Suzaku, we lost this time.


*Back on the Britannian Flagship, an unexpected visitor is arriving*


Cornelia: Dammit Guilford, I told you that we weren’t going to retreat! Who gave you the order to do this?


Schneizel: I did, hello sister.


Cornelia: Schneizel, what are you doing here?


Schneizel: I oversee Area 11 now, and despite the likely embarrassment it will cause I can’t allow this fight to proceed. We are far from finished sister, but now we have to accept our short comings and prepare for another day.


Cornelia *reluctantly*: Yes brother, as you wish.


*Dmitri and Llyod are in the Knightmare hanger, watching the battle come to an end*


Dmitri: That Knightmare, we have to build a frame that can take it on. What hopes do we have of winning battles if we can’t?


Llyod: Not a very good one I’d say, I think you and the R&D department need to have a meeting. Cecile and I will start drawing some things up also.


Dmitri: The designs for the Albion, I’m not even sure they could take on that thing.


Llyod: Well then, we’ll just have to do better.


*Kallen joins Haya, Folka, Teinei and Ginger as they watch the Britannians begin to retreat*


Folka: So, this means we won?


Ginger: Of course it does, what else could it mean?


Haya: For now, for now we’ve won and can be proud. But this war isn’t going to end anytime soon, we still have a lot more fighting ahead.


Teinei: Another fight for another day, now we’re going home.


Kallen *to herself*: Fighting, it’s all fighting now. I wish so much that you were here, you’d know what to do to make it all stop. You’d know.


Ragnarok: The Britannians are retreating! We have claimed victory once again! Help the downed and wounded and reassemble on the Swollen Goat. Today, we have made our mark.


*Isaac is with Asiko, Gillis and Sorrow, seeing that everyone is making it back safely*


Asiko: I never thought, I never imagined it would be so devastating. What a dark day for the world.


Gillis: This is what we signed up for, this is what we’re fighting for, right and wrong are dead and gone. All we have to fight for is ending this war.


Sorrow: And how many more hearts are we going to step on? How many more are we going to kill without remorse?


Isaac: As many as it takes, until what divides us falls to the wayside.


NEXT TIME
Chapter 14: Brena

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Character List

 

Layla - cidthekittyisfun

Iyumi Aogo - Poke_Nirvash

Kareko Gohsawa - Poke_Nirvash

Derril and Jamie Nickoveski - stewie_castro

Isaac Sadique - Noble10

Ashtyn Melangell - mgangel1124

Alexander Joeri - HeeroYuy135

Matthew Donnelly - HeeroYuy135

Marc D'Arcy - DangerHikky

Gillis - DangerHikky

Asiko Kiyama - iloveyuyuhakusho

Folka Endo - PenguinBoss

Salaand du Marsaal - WavemasterRyx

Teinei Kyū - WavemasterRyx

Dmitri Kasparkova - _Boxers_

Zack Masters - CC-Kallen

Valde Crudelis - Zonbaru-Bonbaru

Taren Lynch - DeaconPhenix

Ginger Snapple - AS_anime_watcher

Akesato Konata - alikatt_25

Roger Ayles - Jingai

Yn Tybio Falio - Crau

Ryu "Shiro" Marquez -JQuest15

Haya Kobayashi - Bad_Witch

Sorrow - Bad_Witch

Ian Kenny - Omega3030150

Neil Fallon - Omega3030150

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this fight is over, next chapter will be more about the actual characters and personal interactions and issues. once again I hope you guys enjoy this one.

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Very nice chapter there, poor Luciano always dies so early.

Matt seems to underestimate the Lucifer, would have been fun to see how the fight between Valde and Ian ended.

Though it does seem that some of the Knightmares have been downgraded a bit, some of the special traits for some haven't even been seen.

Poor Suzaku, his gift/curse is always making him do things he doesn't want to do.

Should be interesting to see how things go with Schneizel in the picture.

 

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that was kinda sad. >_< Ragnarok truly is brutal.

i loved it though. the battle between Matt, Alex and Valde and Six, Shiro and Ian was fun to read.

it provided a little break to all the seriousness and tension from the big fight, as did the bits with Zack and Salaand.

the big fight being Suzaku and Ragnarok, which was awesome.    

Cornelia was a little blood thirsty. i understand that she was upset but sending more troops into a losing battle *shakes head* silly woman.

good thing big brother showed up to intervene,

great chapter Omega. i eagerly await the next one :smileyhappy:

 

oh and interesting little tidbit, when i spell check my posts it wants to replace "Ragnarok" with "Arrogant" :smileyvery-happy: that was funny to me.



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So the Okkam finally makes it's debut...

 

I liked the parallel you drew between Luciano's death in the series and his death in this fanfic (both times dying right after the premiere of a superior Knightmare). Nice job with that.

 

How does one attack destroy 5, 791 Knightmares!? :smileysurprised: Although, I liked how Akesato used chess to explain it.

 

I was worried for a second that Ragnarok might have used the Okkam to destroy Isaac and the other Mute Assassins as well... with his insanity growing like it is, I wouldn't be surprised if he eventually did.

 

Speaking of insanity, Ragnarok's dialogue with Suzaku seemed almost schizophrenic: I'M GONNA MAKE EVERYONE SUFFER!!! BUT I WANT YOU TO KILL ME!!! BUT I HAVE LITTLE FAITH IN YOUR ABILITY TO DO SO!!! SO NOW I'M BACK TO THE "MAKE EVERYONE SUFFER" THING!!! :smileyvery-happy:

 

With Schneizel in command, I have a feeling the next battle won't be so one-sided... great job on the chapter btw.

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Commenting on some things....

 

Zonbaru - The Knightmares in CG are so hard to do justice, but I plan to work in their strengths gradually. Also, I think I actually gave Luciano more face time than CG did, but maybe I'm just being arrogant!

 

Alikatt - Yes, that is HILARIOUS! As for the fight between Ragnarok and Suzaku, it was due time that I established the apocalyptic tone a little bit and lived up to all the hype I was raising in previous chapters. From here out there's gonna be a lot of serious moments, this was the one I wanted to show the transition with.

 

Noble - The "Ragnarok" attack is essential a charging of the energy the Guren uses in it's claw attack and making it a heavy projectile. I wanted it to be strong, but I wanted there to be feel of it could probably never happen at that level again because you normally just couldn't get that much time to charge it. Expect it to be used in smaller doses in the future. As for Ragnarok going crazy.....Well, this is complicated. Ragnarok at this time believes everything he said to Suzaku, he feels obliged to dole out the punishment that will lead people to start unifying, but he also really want Suzaku to be right so he can be free of the burden. He wishes Suzaku was strong enough to kill him because it means he wouldn't have to go through with any of this, it would mean Suzaku could actually change and make good on his promise to "save japan" but Ragnarok doubt he is capable of saving anyone but himself.

 

Glad everyone is enjoying this one, like I said writing battles it hard stuff, especially big ones like this that incorporate everybody. The next chapter is character driven and deals with the personal issues of some characters. It will probably be up tomorrow or sunday because I've already written a hugh chunk of it (it features the infamous poem I wrote a month ago).

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I've conquered country, crown and throne
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The amount of time you gave Luciano wasn't bad, about the same they gave him in the show.

 

Working in the Knightmares strengths sounds good, though it seemed like the Okkam used all of its toys. Of course being selfish, I can't wait to see the other toys beyond Lucifers normal attacks, it doesn't seem like it has it energy wing (archangel) system on it yet but with Albion on the way I think that isn't to far off.

"Death and pain are just a small price to pay for the enjoyment of battle!" - Kenpachi
"If you require an opponent, I will fight you. If you want to taste the ground, feel free to attack me." - Kenshin Himura
"If there is a god in this world, I'd like to ask one wish. Devine retribution to all those who take freedom away." - Spike Spiegel