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wow that was really good!
once again i enjoyed the exchange between Ragnarok and Suzaku.
putting that geass on Gino was awesome as well. can't wait to see how that turns out.

curious to see how the Black Knights choose to use their geass. can't imagine Zero giving them too much free reign though.

Six and Shiro's commpetition made me think of Lord of the Rings :smileyvery-happy: >_>

Layla and Akesato are silly lol. i'd kinda be scared to see what two crazy chicks like that would do if they fought over a guy XD
the action and fighting flowed really well. it was fast paced and fun to read.
there are a bunch of lines that i'd like to point out that i loved but we'd be here all night so i'll just go with this one,

Ragnarok: Ragnarok, Leader who’s about to give Akesato a piece of my mind for being a smart@$$.

murderous crazy guys are so fun :smileyvery-happy:

again, loved the comradery between Ragnarok and his "kids"
i'm guessing Cornelia is pretty pissed right now. she just can't catch a break.

good job Omega :smileyhappy:



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Finalllllllly got all caught up. I wish Ragnarok had just gone and killed Suzaku lol. Zero's been put in his place several times in the past few chapters. I wonder how hes going to be able to deal with defeat. Interesting to see who won the competition out of Shiro and Six haha.

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That was a great chapter, so many good and interesting thins happening.

Nice finish to the Ragnarok/Suzaku fight can't wait for the next one.

I wonder how well this second battle will go for BKs and LB.

Interesting back and forth with Valde and a few of the other Brits, can't wait for Lucifer to cut loose.

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Stage 10.83
Heaven Beside You
 
 
August 5th, 2028 (1 year and 8 months ago)
 
*the day has risen and birds are chirping as sunlight begins to creep into a white bedroom*
 
Neil *waking up*: Hmm, figures. Hey you, it's time to wake up.
 
Kallen *clinging onto Neil's arm*: No, I wanna sleep. We were up ridiculously late and I'm not used to your crazy rockstar sleep patterns.
 
Neil: Really? 5am is not that late.
 
Kallen: Neil, its 9:30. I want more sleep.
 
Neil: Fine, you get one more hour. I'm gonna go take a shower and get some food.
 
Kallen: You sure are making yourself comfy in my house.
 
Neil: Well its just you and me and if I recall correctly that's what you told me to do. Please just be up in an hour, I'll probably be somewhere writing.
 
Kallen: Ok, but you better have a reason for making me get up so early.
 
Neil: I do, I promise.
 
*At 11:30 Kallen came down to find Neil writing in her backyard*
 
Kallen: You know sometimes I do wonder why I chose a headcase like you.
 
Neil: Good, you'd be crazy if you didn't.
 
Kallen: Being you really doesn't ever bug you though does it?
 
Neil: No, its an ordeal I will admit, but I don't see how I could be any other way.
 
Kallen: Well you know I'm gonna stick my nose in whatever your writing.
 
Neil: You always do
 
*Neil puts his pen between the pages he was on and throws the notebook to Kallen*
 
Neil: While you read that, I can explain why I've woke you up at the ungodly hour of 11am.
 
Kallen: Hahaha, very funny.
 
Neil: Well apparently I'm supposed to be accepting some honor at the Icarus tonight, artist of the decade or some junk like that. I would normally let you skip such a pretentious load of @$$kissing, but apparently the liberation movement is going to be there and I thought it'd be nice to meet some of the people involved with it. So I thought maybe we could do lunch in kirihara andt then do that.
 
Kallen *reading Neil's notebook*: That does sound nice, should I dress up for it?
 
Neil: Seriously? It's the Icarus, I'm gonna dress nice and comfy.
 
Kallen: Why am I not surprise, you celebrities just think you can do whatever you want.
 
Neil: Come on babe, you know I hate being called a celebrity. I run away from the spotlight constantly.
 
Kallen: Ha, if people only knew how surreal you were, you'd be stalked at a whole new level. In no one else's journal will you find talk ranging from kissing under trees to the okkam's razor theory on the same page.
 
Neil: Are you sure, because I really think they connect rather nicely. Don't make me draw out the parallels.
 
Kallen: Haha, maybe over lunch. God, it drives me crazy when you write in a completely different script.
 
Neil: What's the big deal, you haven't learned runes yet?
 
Kallen: The only letters I know in it are the five going down the side of my stomach.
 
Neil *leaning in to kiss Kallen*: Most beautiful word in world to me
 
Kallen *blushing*: You only kissed me cause we're under a tree.
 
Neil: That's not true at all! I did it because I had the natural inclination to kiss you. I felt a physical attraction to the natural beauty I was surrounded by and wanted to take in-
 
Kallen: Stop making the parallels!
 
Neil: Dam(n), I thought I could pull it off. Oh well, lets go to lunch.
 
*Neil and Kallen went off to lunch, and later to the Icarus Pit, for Neil to accept his honor before a crowd of fans and members of the japanese resistance*
 
Neil: Hey, do you want a glass of wine? I feel like I should be drinking something elegant to make up for my lax appearance, and red wine kinda sounds nice right now.
 
Kallen: And you want me to be a part of your charade because?
 
Neil: I didn't want you to be part of my charade, I just was wondering if you wanted a glass of wine. Can't I just be normal with weird undertones?
 
Kallen: Oh, well I suppose. Sure, red sounds nice.
 
Neil: Here we go, well you enjoy while I go up before those people and make a fool out of myself.
 
Kallen: And to think I skip these things.
 
Owner of the Club: Please welcome to the stage the guest of honor, Japan's artist of the decade, Mr. Neil Fallon.
 
Neil: Well this is a numbing experience, ususally when your accepting something like this you either couldn't care less or your humbled beyond belief and really don't know what to say. Needless to say this is the latter and then some, you people are the ones who have allowed me to express my insanity. You've valued my ideas and opened yourselves to my point of view, and that is truly humbling. The art I have emerged myself in, and the extreme fortune of having the ability to express it means the world to me. The world has given me a gift greater than any honor I could ever have bestowed upon me, and that is the abilitiy to know nothing and ponder everything. The world might be in a dark place, but I can feel the sun bring light to darkness in all our minds. This feeling of heaven beside me, my companion in insanity. I know the fall has only begun, but I know I'm not facing it alone. Thank you all for coming out and supporting me.
 
*After accepting applause and signing some autographs, Neil and Kallen meet with the Liberation Movement*
 
Neil: Ladies and Gentlemen thank you for coming out. Sorry it took me so long to introduce myself to you folks, the owner of this fine establishment is on the brink of losing this place to some Britannian snob.I just wanted to give him my support and wish him the best.
 
Ohgi: It's no problem, it's nice for us to meet you. My name is Ohgi.
 
Neil: Ohgi huh? I think I have someone you know here.
 
Kallen *walking in*: Ohgi!
 
Ohgi *running up to hug Kallen*: Kallen! It's so good to see you! God, you've grown up so much. How do you know Neil, is he your?
 
Kallen: Boyfriend? Guilty. God, I haven't seen any of you in years. I've missed you guys a lot.
 
Tamaki: It's good to see you Kallen! Haha, I remember when you wanted to join us in the good fight.
 
Kallen: Yeah, I guess life just took me in a different direction. I wish we hadn't drifted apart though.
 
Neil: I can't speak for Kallen, but I could see myself serving in duty one day. I mean, the issues are getting harder to ignore and we all owe it to ourselves to fight for freedom for our brothers, not just the fortunate few.
 
Kallen: Neil! You never told me you were interested in serving?
 
Neil: You never asked, does this shock you?
 
Kallen: A little I guess, I suppose I've just gotten spoiled by the peace we've been able to have in our lives. But if you choose to serve then I will as well, it'd certainly feel like coming home.
 
Ohgi: Well it would be a real pleasure to have you both.
 
Neil: Well I can't promise anything, but allow me to offer you some help right now. *Neil pulls out a business card* This is my father's business card, I'm certain you've heard of him, Maynard Thomas Fallon.
 
Ohgi: Of course, he's an infamous Knightmare engineer for the resistance. Do you think he'd work with us?
 
Neil: Absolutely, infact I guarantee he'd be honored to offer his assistance. Please do get a hold of him.
 
Ohgi: Ok, I will make sure to contact him. Do you think you'd mind meeting some of the other soldiers who have come out? Maybe give out a couple autographs.
 
Neil: Certainly
 
*Neil begins to sign autographs while Kallen mingles with some of the soldiers*
 
Neil: So who can I make this out to?
 
Shiro: Shiro, thanks a lot man
 
Iyumi: Iyumi, thank you so much, I love your music
 
Ian: My names Ian, God, your like my favorite artist. You inspired me to write my own stuff.
 
Neil: Thanks, it's nice to know I'm impacting people.
 
Taren: Can you make it out Taren, thanks a ton man.
 
Akesato: Hi, my name's Akesato. It's so cool to meet you
 
Akesato *in the present*: Ragnarok, are you ok?
 
Ragnarok: Huh? Oh, I guess I dozed off. I apologize, feeling kind of strange.
 
Ian: Well we won't be back at the ship for another hour, go ahead and take it easy boss. The day isn't gonna get any easier from here.
 
Ragnarok: Yeah
 
*Back in the past*
 
Haya: Hi, my name is Haya. It's a real honor to meet you Ms. Kozuki.
 
Kallen: Ha, please call me Kallen.
 
Haya: Oh, nice to meet you Kallen.
 
Haya *knocking on Kallen's door*: Kallen! We have to go, Zero has ordered us to engage the Britannians. Kallen!
 
Kallen *tossing a notebook up in the air*: I'll be out in a minute.
 
Ragnarok *to himself*: Heaven beside me, and so far away. Heavan beside me, hell within.

All The Same/Downfall Of Us All/King Of Arizona/Built For Sin/Fighting Tao


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I've conquered country, crown and throne
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well now isn't that interesting.

everyone chilling with Neil before Ragnarok was born.



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That's a great intermission chapter.

 

I liked the seamless transitions between past and present you had going on.

 


Omega3030150 wrote: 
 
Ragnarok *to himself*: Heaven beside me, and so far away. Heavan beside me, hell within.

My favorite part. Very beautiful.

 

...also, you misspelled heaven the second time. :smileytongue:

"I watch the world. The sun shines. Stars twinkle. Plants grow. Animals feel. And humans have souls. I watch the soul. The soul can hear the voice of God. Taste its sweet fragrance. Savor its words. Touch its outstretched fingertips. I watch the world. I watch the soul. I realize that the light guides my footsteps."


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yeah, about that.

 

when I started writing the chapter I knew the title was a song by alice in chains, but I didn't remember how the chorus went. so I wrote everything but the second half of that last line, went and listened to the song, and put that part of the chorus in. I guess my mind was so blown away when I listened to it, I forgot how to spell heaven :smileytongue:

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I've faced the quicks, the wind, the fire
I've conquered country, crown and throne
why can't I cross this river?
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Those were both good chapters. :smileyhappy:
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So hey, I got a REALLY busy week ahead. so don't expect a new chapter til friday at the earliest. But I could see putting out two this weekend, one for sure.

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I've faced the quicks, the wind, the fire
I've conquered country, crown and throne
why can't I cross this river?
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That's fine man, do what you can when you can. Just can't wait to see some good knightmare fighting.
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That's okay. Real life comes first. :smileyhappy:
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thanks guys, don't be surprised if the next two chapters come out on friday and saturday (their really fillers for the one coming after, but REALLY good fillers)

 

the ones that come next week might blow your mind!

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I've faced the quicks, the wind, the fire
I've conquered country, crown and throne
why can't I cross this river?
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why must you always try to harm me physically? melt my face, blow my mind :smileyvery-happy:



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idk, I guess it's my ting

 

if I do manage to literally "blow your mind"....please let me know.

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I've faced the quicks, the wind, the fire
I've conquered country, crown and throne
why can't I cross this river?
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not sure how i'd go about letting you know. if my mind was blown it probably wouldn't function, so no posting :smileyvery-happy:

either way i look forward to more chapters.



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alikatt_25 wrote:

not sure how i'd go about letting you know. if my mind was blown it probably wouldn't function, so no posting :smileyvery-happy:


I see that the joke was lost on you......because that was the point.

 

I start writing the next chapter tomorrow, might be up that night, might be up tomorrow.

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I've conquered country, crown and throne
why can't I cross this river?
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New chapter up by midnight

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I've conquered country, crown and throne
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 Stage 11

The Truth

 

 

“Holy Fire”

 

*Falio is with Suzaku and the rest of the Knights of the Round, trying to understand what happened at the compound*


Falio: So what happened here? How many members of The Light Brigade were here to do something like this?


Suzaku *a little dazed*: I don’t know, we only encountered Ragnarok.


Falio: Just Ragnarok did this to you guys!?!?


Suzaku *getting off the ground*: Yeah, it’s a long story


Salaand: There were five, including Ragnarok. I’ve just looked over the surveillance system, there was just five.


Falio: Wow, that’s unbelievable.


Luciano *still losing blood*: OH YEAH! What’s so unbelievable about it!


Suzaku: Luciano! Your still bleeding, you need to get medical attention fast or you’re gonna bleed out.


Zack: AHHH! My head kills. I would give a limb to give that bastard Ragnarok a piece of my mind right now!


Falio: Well he’s long gone man, and we need to get moving too. The Black Knights are here and need to be dealt with.


Suzaku: Right! Hey, are you ok Gino?


Gino: Huh? Oh yeah I’m fine, just a little shell shocked I guess. Let’s get back to the ship and get ready for battle.


Zack: Yeah! Now how are we getting out of here?


Falio: Oh, about that….


*Outside the military compound, The Black Knights are preparing to make their move*


Zero *Commanding from the Shinkiro*: Attention all units! We have the Britannians surrounded. Without the Knights of the Round in the battle we can wipe them out with ease. THE TIME TO CLAIM VICTORY IS NOW!


Kallen: You heard Zero, let’s show these lousy Britannians what we’re made of!


Tamaki: YEAH! These stupid Britannians won’t know what hit them!


*The Black Knights begin to engage the Britannians, quickly dominating the battle*


Six: Wow, I love it how we’ve been getting the upper hand on Britannia lately. *attacking a knightmare* I wonder how they feel now that the shoe’s on the other foot!


Shiro: Haha, I don’t. *attacking a knightmare* All I care about is taking them down to size!


Six: Well look who it is! Hello there ladies!


Iyumi: Hi boys! We saw that you were getting all the action and figured we could come help.


Shiro: Yeah, it sure did look like we needed help.


Kareko: Well maybe it didn’t, but that doesn’t mean you boys couldn’t share.


Six: Whatever, less talking more fighting!


Iyumi: Haha, I’m gonna like you Six.


*On the other side of the battlefield, Kallen is preparing to command a small unit for a special assignment*


Kallen: Haya, Ginger, Folka and Teinei. I have orders from Zero to lead the four of you into the compound. We’re going to try to capture the Knights of the Round.


Ginger: No way! That’s awesome.


Teinei: Why us though?


Kallen: I’m surprised you ask, you are the four individuals that C.C. gave the power of Geass too. We believe it will give us an advantage in capturing the Knights.


Haya: Kallen! I didn’t know that you knew about Geass. Do you have one?


Kallen: No, not really my style. But let’s get going, we need to get into the compound before the Knights can get out.


Folka: You heard Kallen, let’s get moving!


*Back on the main Britannian Cruiser, Cornelia is watching the battle unfold*


Cornelia: Dammit Dmitri! How much longer until that weapon is ready?


Dmitri: Sorry your Highness, its ready now. We will fire on your command.


Cornelia: Finally! Time to teach these elevens what happens when you oppose Britannia, FIRE THE WEAPON!


*Two massive beams of energy are shot at a large pocket of the Black Knights armada, whipping out over a thousand units. Alex, Matt and Valde witness the blast from a far.*


Alex: Holy hell! What in god’s name was that?


Matt: That was the Holy Fire, it’s a weapon Dmitri and Llyod were working on for the flagships.


Valde: It certainly was powerful, and now we have the slip on The Black Knights.


Alex: Hell yeah! Now is our chance to reclaim control of this battle.


Marc: HEY! Don’t forget about us.


Ashtyn: Someone sure is excited for battle.


Marc: Yeah, I feel like Rambo right now!


Matt: Haha! Oh Marc, that’s fantastic. So what are we waiting for? Let’s get in there and kick some @$$!


*Zero watches on as the Holy Fire wipes out large numbers of his men*


Zero: Dam(n) Britannians! You think that will be enough to take us down? This doesn’t change the fact that you’re still hopeless without The Knights of the Round. ALL UNITS, SHOW THE BRITANNIANS OUR RESOLVE!


*As The Black Knights charge on, Cornelia is flustered and looking for a way turn the tide*


Cornelia: Kasparkova! When can we fire that weapon again?


Dmitri: Not for another thirty minutes your highness. But the next time we attack it will be with the Holy Fires from all of the flagships.


Cornelia: Very well then, I’m sending the Glaston Knights into the battle to keep us above water, but we need the Knights of the Round. Gilford, assemble our finest available pilots, we need to bring The Knights their Knightmares.


Guilford: Yes your Highness!


*Back at the Compound, The Knights are being briefed on what is about to happen*


Zack: So they’re bringing our Knightmares to us?


Falio: Yeah, that’s what I’m being told.


Gino: Well they better hurry, we’re sitting ducks here. It’s only a matter of time before The Black Knights get through our units and get in here.


Suzaku: Well if they do get in, we’ll just have to deal with them when it happens.


Salaand: Is that your flimsy way of saying we need to come up with a plan?


Suzaku: Yeah


*Back on The Swollen Goat, Ragnarok and his crew are arriving from their siege on the military compound, ready to initiate the second part of their plan*


Ragnarok: Ahhh, my home away from home, so good to be back!


Isaac: Yeah, too bad we have to leave soon, but I’m actually pretty excited to go out and fight today.


Layla: Me too! I can’t wait to have the full team out on the battlefield, it’s going to be amazing.


Akesato: Are you really going through with that Ragnarok, all the tyrants including us?


Ragnarok: Of course, why shouldn’t I. We’re about to perform on the biggest stage on earth, I say we do it right.


Giliis: I have a feeling you will boss, come you need to see it before you go online.


Ragnarok: Very well, see you soon friends. Today we meet destiny.


*Ragnarok and Gillis head to the Knightmare Deck*


Gillis *opening the door*: Well boss, here it is.


Ragnarok *eyes gleaming*: Oh my, forgive me Gillis, but I think I might cry a little.


Gillis: Haha, go ahead boss. But seriously, how powerful is this thing supposed to be?


Ragnarok: Oh, you’ll see my boy, you will see. But now I must be off, the time has come for me to formally introduce myself to the world. Dare I say it’s long overdue.


Gillis: Very well my lord, onward into The Day of the Swollen Goat.

 

*Ragnarok leaves the Knightmare Deck and heads for the conference room, which is completely empty, enters and turns on the TV*


Ragnarok: So, what’s on the news?


Reporter: At approximately 11:00pm last night, The Light Brigade staged a small attack on the Britannian Military Compound just outside of Area 11. Sources say that Ragnarok did lead the attack, claiming control of the compound and engaging in some conflict with the Knights of the Round. At about 2:30am, Ragnarok and his men escaped from the compound in the wake of an
attack from the military, leaving the compound in ruins and killing a few hundred men. At 3:00am The Black Knights officially appeared on the scene and engaged in all out battle with the military. With The Knights of the Round still trapped in the compound, we can only wonder what will become of this high stakes fire fight.


Ragnarok: This story’s boring, let’s watch something entertaining.



“The Truth”


*Ragnarok flips three switches on a panel in front of his chair, and looks up to the TV to see his face, the same thing the rest of the world is seeing*


Ragnarok: Hello Britannia, my name is Ragnarok. I’m sure many of you are familiar with my work, but please allow me to take this moment to formally introduce myself to all of you. Over the last year I have waged war with your nation, bringing it to the brink of chaos. Well it is with great pride that I tell you all that today marks the beginning of that chaos. You wanted an Armageddon, well here I am.


*Meanwhile, Kallen and her squad of soldiers are beginning to enter the military compound, preparing to do battle with The Knights of the Round*


Folka: I can’t believe how easy it was getting through their defenses, this whole battle would have been a route if all those flagships hadn’t shown up with such force.


Teinei: Yeah, but I still plan on making it a route. Let’s get inside and find the Knights, we have no way of knowing when they might escape from here.


Ginger: Well I think it’s safe to say that they are here now, should we split up or stick together?


Kallen: We’ll split into three groups and sweep each floor separately. Haya and I will be one group and you and Teinei will be another. Think you can handle being alone invisible boy?


Folka *turning invisible*: Yeah, shouldn’t be a problem.


Kallen: Alright then, let’s start hunting.


*As Kallen and her unit begin searching for The Knights of the Round, Ragnarok continues with his statement to Britannia*


Ragnarok: I don’t expect the blessed to understand the words f the cursed, and your divine ignorance isn’t entirely your fault. But in this world the good and evil have suffered side by side. No one is safe from injustice, that is unless you have ascended to a point where you can choose what is just and unjust. This is why your nation must be cleansed of its arrogance, you believe you dictate right and wrong to this world, you believe that others deserve to die in your name for your own benefit. Well let me show you what those “others” looked like in their dying moments.


*Ragnarok flips another switch creating a panoramic video on the walls around him, it’s footage from the day Britannia official took power over Japan, the lives that were taken that day*


I want you to look closely at these images, images of innocent men, women and children being slaughtered worse than animals. I want you to become comfortable with these images, because they do not even compare to the future that lies ahead, a future I will bring upon you all.


*Back at the compound, the Knights of the Round are waiting for the Knightmares to arrive so that they can escape before any hostiles show up*


Suzaku: Falio, who else came to rescue us besides you and your squad?


Falio: Nobody sir, we’re the only unit in the facility.


Gino: You’ve gotta be kidding me! They only brought six guys for us!


Falio: Yeah, command just shifted the focus onto fighting The Black Knights once they got here.


Salaand: That’s pathetic, when the hell are our Knightmares showing up?


Falio: Soon, probably 20-30 minutes.


Zack: Well we might as well set up a perimeter on this floor, no doubt The Black Knights will be here soon.


Suzaku: Hey Luciano, how are you holding up?


Luciano: Would you please quit f*cking asking me! I’m fine, I stopped the bleeding and I can move just fine.


Gino: Alright then, let’s set up.


*Back on the battlefield, Six, Shiro, Iyumi and Kareko have begun to battle Alex, Matt, Valde and Marc*


Six: You think you’re strong huh? Let me show you what the Rampage can do!


*The Rampage hits Valde’s Lucifer with several blows, but can’t make any real damage*


Valde: Sorry kid, I’m not impressed, my Lucifer is just on another level!


*The Lucifer and Rampage speed away as their battle grows more intense, as they do, Matt and his Springfield Alpha begin to do battle with Iyumi and the her Sutherland*


Matt: That’s a nice Sutherland you’ve got there, too bad its way overmatched against my Springfield!


Iyumi: Someone sure is cocky, let me show you what that’s gonna cost you!


*The battle between Iyumi’s Sutherland and Matt’s Springfield continues on the ground. Meanwhile Shiro’s Arbiter and Alex’s Springfield Beta*


Shiro: You might be a good shot man, but you can’t stop the strength of the Arbiter!


Alex: We’ll see about that you punk! Aim is everything!


*As the battle between the Arbiter and the Springfield Beta gets heavier, Marc is giving his all against Kareko and her Knightmare*


Marc: I can’t believe how exhilarating this is, real combat, battles of life and death with everything at stake.


Kareko: Well I’m glad you’re having fun, but you have a lot to learn.


*Kareko’s Knightmare lands a strong blow against Marc’s, sending it flying*


Marc: Darn it! One of these days I’ll be a real fighter!


*As the battle rages on outside the compound, Ragnarok continues his message to Britannia*


Ragnarok: This is what your vanity has done to the world, now brothers are fighting brothers and lovers are lost without so much as a ounce of remorse. You kill in the name of your honor, your country and your god. Your excuses are your self glorifying salvation, a crutch you’ve made to pardon your sick actions. Your country has raped this world of its beauty, but it is only the byproduct of the real problem. As a society we believe we live without consequence, we think our will dictates that of the world. We are conceited and vicious, and we disguise it as glory and favor from on high. But now, we will become one, one world unified by one event. Can you guess what it is? It’s the end of the world.


*All of a sudden, something becomes visible in the skies of Area 11, leaving people speechless. Back on the Main Britannian Battle Cruiser, Dmitri is preparing the Holy Fire for a second attack*


Cornelia: Well then Dmitri, how much longer until we can make our next attack?


Dmitri: Ten minutes your Highness


Cornelia: Excellent, soon we will reclaim control of this battle. With the Knights returned and their forces laid to waste by the Holy Fire, we will be victorious!


*Back inside the compound, Kallen and her unit are one floor underneath The Knights of the Round*


Kallen *on com-link*: Everyone, my motion detector is picking up something above us, it’s gotta be the Knights. Folka, I want you to head up to the next floor and scope out the situation for us.


Folka: Ok, I’m on it.


Kallen: Alright, everyone else regroup around me and get ready to engage.


*As Kallen begins to lead her unit towards the location of The Knights of the Round, Ragnarok is finishing his message to the public*


Ragnarok: So I’m guessing you all saw that big dark thing in the sky? Well don’t worry, it’s not coming for you folks yet, consider it a gift to your precious army.  But make no mistake, I want the world to remember this day. Today the world spirals into the chaos it’s been lead towards for thousands of years.


Zero *looking to the sky*: Oh my god


Ragnarok: Today is a crucial moment in the history of mankind.


Cornelia *looking to the sky*: DAM(N) HIM!


Ragnarok: Today begins the journey that will make us chose between peace and annihilation.


Valde *looking to the sky*: Unbelievable


Ragnarok: Today we are all in the wake of the Swollen Goat.



NEXT TIME
Chapter 12: (in the wake of) The Swollen Goat
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All The Same/Downfall Of Us All/King Of Arizona/Built For Sin/Fighting Tao


"angel, angel what have I done?
I've faced the quicks, the wind, the fire
I've conquered country, crown and throne
why can't I cross this river?
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Character List

 

Layla - cidthekittyisfun

Iyumi Aogo - Poke_Nirvash

Kareko Gohsawa - Poke_Nirvash

Isaac Sadique - Noble10

Ashtyn Melangell - mgangel1124

Alexander Joeri - HeeroYuy135

Matthew Donnelly - HeeroYuy135

Marc D'Arcy - DangerHikky

Gillis - DangerHikky

Folka Endo - PenguinBoss

Salaand du Marsaal - WavemasterRyx

Teinei Kyū - WavemasterRyx

Dmitri Kasparkova - _Boxers_

Zack Masters - CC-Kallen

Valde Crudelis - Zonbaru-Bonbaru

Taren Lynch - DeaconPhenix

Ginger Snapple - AS_anime_watcher

Akesato Konata - alikatt_25

Yn Tybio Falio - Crau

Ryu "Shiro" Marquez -JQuest15

Haya Kobayashi - Bad_Witch

Neil Fallon - Omega3030150

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I've faced the quicks, the wind, the fire
I've conquered country, crown and throne
why can't I cross this river?
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This chapter was the intro/beginning of the second battle between The Light Brigade, Black Knights and Britannia. The next two chapters will be upping the ante and bringing serious action. Hope you guys enjoy this one.

All The Same/Downfall Of Us All/King Of Arizona/Built For Sin/Fighting Tao


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I've faced the quicks, the wind, the fire
I've conquered country, crown and throne
why can't I cross this river?
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Very good chapter, I wonder how things will turn out.

Should be fun to see what happens with the knights.

Really enjoyed the little battles between the Knightmares, can't wait to see a full fight with Lucifer.

The Swollen goat has to be something, Zero, Cornelia, and Valde were impressed.

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good chapter :smileyhappy:

nice set up for what's to come. i liked the individual fights. and the girls showing up so the boys couldn't hog all the fun lol.

i kinda hope the Knights can catch a break and get outta there before getting another beating. Gino and Zack at least. and maybe Suzaku :smileyvery-happy:

i can't help but giggle when i read "swollen goat" :smileyvery-happy:, but it seems like it's a scary looking thing from the reaction everyone had.

interested to see what Ragnarok's plans are for it.



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Nice chapter.

 

I can only imagine what the Swollen Goat must look like, if it made Ragnarok cry and everyone else s**t their pants...

 

...unless it actually is a swollen goat. After all, if you saw a gigantic, swollen goat in the sky, that would be a legitimate reason to s**t your pants. :smileyvery-happy:

 

Can't wait to see how this battle ends...

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"I watch the world. The sun shines. Stars twinkle. Plants grow. Animals feel. And humans have souls. I watch the soul. The soul can hear the voice of God. Taste its sweet fragrance. Savor its words. Touch its outstretched fingertips. I watch the world. I watch the soul. I realize that the light guides my footsteps."


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Glad everyone is enjoying it, the next two will really go all out. Think I'm gonna write the next one tomorrow afternoon.

 


Noble10 wrote:

I can only imagine what the Swollen Goat must look like, if it made Ragnarok cry and everyone else s**t their pants...



The Okkam (his Knightmare) is what made Ragnarok cry, just to clarify.

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I've faced the quicks, the wind, the fire
I've conquered country, crown and throne
why can't I cross this river?
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Oh, okay.

 

I'm guessing it's going to be the Lancelot/Guren of the fanfic (by which, I mean a machine that mass-produces hax:smileyvery-happy:).

"I watch the world. The sun shines. Stars twinkle. Plants grow. Animals feel. And humans have souls. I watch the soul. The soul can hear the voice of God. Taste its sweet fragrance. Savor its words. Touch its outstretched fingertips. I watch the world. I watch the soul. I realize that the light guides my footsteps."


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