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Ranlsa
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The Journey Home: A Bebop/Bleach fanfic part 3

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OK, guys, here'spart 3 of the fanfic, where we found out what happened in Soul Society. It'spretty sad, so brace yourselves:

 

(disclaimer: For this version of Bleach I’m using- cause it’s my fanfic- the Soul Society is a form of Purgatory which people who die with sins on their soul must stay until they get sent to Ultimate Heaven (which is what happens when they “die” there.) All clear? OK!

 

Also, this is IchoHime AND RenRuki, OK? OK. If this next chapter makes no sense to you…hey, neither does the manga right now!! This chapter takes place after the current manga arc ends…whenever THAT may be!)

 

Session 29- Butterfly, Fly Away

 

The next day- Kurakawa Town, Tokyo….

 

A knock was heard at the Kurosaki house. 17 year old Ichigo ran out of his bedroom, coming down the stairs and at the same time trying to straighten his tie, calling out, "Dad, I'll get it!" he smiled in anticipation, expecting his girlfriend, Orihime,who would meet him at the front door every morning to walk to school with him. Happily he flung open the door, to be greeted by the sight of a small young woman with short dark hair. "Rukia!" he cried out in surprise.

 

Issian stuck his head into the hallway, "Rukia!" He cried out. "What a pleasant surprise! Come in, come in!" Ichigo stood away from the door so she could come in. The twins came running down the stairs just then.

 

"Rukia!" Yuzu cried out, flinging herself at her.

 

"Hey, Rukia!" Karin gave her a High-5. "Great to see you again!"

 

Kon came down after them,. "Rukia!!!" He threw himself at her, but Ichigo managed to grab him before he landed on her body and sat him on the bannister with a warning glance.

 

"Hi, Kon. It’s great to see all of you, too!" Ichigo noticed Rukia was in her gegai form, which consisted of a white skirt and blue sweater. She stopped and smelled the air. "Oh God, is that French Toast I smell?"

 

"Why yes, we just finished breakfast,“ Issian said. “Would you like some?"

 

"Yes, please!" she went over and sat on the couch. "I'm getting my appitite back. I haven’t eaten since lunchtime."

 

"You haven't eaten since lunch yesterday?!" Issian creid out in alarm. "We must remedy that. Yuzu, heat up some French Toast. Would you also like some bacon and eggs?"

 

"Thank you!"

 

Ichigo then glanced outside as the familiar form of his girlfriend came running up the pathway. "Orihime, look who it is!"

 

Orihime’s eyes lit up. "RUKIA!" she cried out as she ran to the couch and hugged her. "Rukia, how great to see you again!!"

 

"Orihime, it’s wonderful to see you too, you look great!: she smiled. "What's been going on here?”

 

"Oh you asked at just the right time!" she smiled and pulled Ichigo's class ring from a chain around her neck. "Ichigo and I are going steady!"

 

"You are not!"

 

"I am so!!" She hugged Rukia tightly again.

 

"Oh Orihime, that’s great news! I wish my news was that great."

 

"Why? What's happened?" Ichigo asked. "There aren’t any more Hollows up there, are there? Or Arroncars?"

 

"Ichigo..remember what Kiscke said!" Issian warned him. "You don’t have all your powers fully restored yet! Remember what happened last time when you and Chad tried to take the easy way out!"

 

"I know, Dad."

 

"Your powers WILL return, but you HAVE to be patient, Kiskue and Yurorichi are doing the best they can to restore them quickly, but it’s gonna take time, she has to go to Uryu in the meantime. You can go back to Soul Society now, but you can’t fight yet."

 

"I know, Dad."

 

"Actually, it's nothing like that. No invasions or wars at all so far, Actually the reason I came is..I have a favor to ask you."

 

"If it’s ours to give, it’s yours, you know that."

 

Rukia looked down as the twins brought the food on a tray. Happily she started to eat as fast as she could.

 

“Man, you ARE hungry!” Ichigo said.

 

“Hey, hey, take it easy!” Issian warned. “You‘ll get a stomach ache if you swallow it without chewing!”

 

When Rukia had eaten a but she put down her fork."Actually I just want to know this. Can I stay here for a while?"

 

Ichigo looked surprised. "Of course you can. You can stay here as long as you like. Why, what’s going on?"

 

"Let me put it to you this way....if the guards come and take me again don’t come after me,. I'll be back here before

you know it."

 

"Why?"

 

"Cause that means I'll have STRANGLED Bayakua, but the jury will NOT convict me this time!" Orihime and Ichigo stared at her, surprised.

 

"Obviously a mercy killing," Kon broke in.

 

"Rukia,..,.I’ve never heard you say anything bad about Bayakuya."

 

“You mean that pompous, arrogant, self-centered, life wrecker who would rather strut around in his own pride rather than allow people the right to their own happiness?”

 

“That’s it!” Kon said.

 

"Well, you can say I’ve come to my senses BIG time!"

 

"What did he do now!" Ichigo asked.

 

"Oh, you will NOT believe it!!”

 

Ichigo exchanged a look with Orihime. "Yes we will." In between bites of food, Rukia explained the situation. When she was done everyone was staring at her with open mouths. Finally Issian’s jaw set grimly.

 

"Karin, SHUT THAT DOOR. Don’t let any of the neighbors hear." When she did so, he raised his voice, "BAYAKUA, I CAN’T BELIEVE YOU!! YOU **tut-tut** BASTARD, HOW COULD YOU DO THAT!!!"

 

“Excuse me, Rukia?” Ichigo asked. “I realise that I haven’t been up there in almost two years so may I ask…when did Captain Yamamoto retire and give his post to Bayakuya?!”

 

“He didn’t,” Rukia said. “Bayakuya just thinks he knows it all and thinks his way is the ONLY way!”

 

“What were they DOING that was so terrible?! They were having a picnic! So what..”

 

“He caught them kissing.”

 

“SO?!”

 

"Wait, wait, let me see if I got this straight," Karin said. "Toshiro....was kissing...what’s her name?"

 

"Rangiku.”

 

"OK, he was kissing Rangiku...and for THAT they got in trouble?! Just for a kiss?! ONE kiss?!"

 

“Must have been a hell of a kiss!” Kon said.

 

"It wasn’t just a kiss, it was a kiss between a Captain and Lieutenant. of the SAME squad!"

 

"So, who cares about that?! "

 

"Bayakuya...him and his **tut-tut** rules!! He actually said, ' if you would spend more time exploring new strategies instead of exploring your Lieutenant's lips, you would get a lot more done!"

 

"Why that..." Ichigo said. “Doesn’t he KNOW what both of them have been through, Rangiku especially?! God, I was THERE when Gin died, I saved her from being skewered by Aizen! She was completely torn up, I didn’t know if she would make it.”

 

“None of us knew,” Rukia said. “In fact if it weren’t for Captain Hitsugaya we don’t know what would have happened to her!”

 

“Bayakuya should have been thankful or at least happy that she was able to even FIND someone else, no matter who it was!! “

 

“But they were guilty of Flanderization, which us a strict violation of the code of Soul Reapers!”

 

“What? So falling in love with someone and finding happiness again is against the law?!”

 

“If it’s in the same squad.”

 

“DIDN;T THAT BASTARD EVER CONSIDER THAT’S WHAT GOD MIGHT WANT FOR THEM?!”

 

Orihime was sobbing quietly. "Oh poor Rangiku!!! Where did she go?"

 

"Ya mean she’s not with you?“

 

“No, I haven’t seen her at all.“

 

Rukia sighed, “No one knows where she went. Apparently Bayakua was gonna tell on both of them to Yamamoto. He actually told Rangiku if Captain Hitsugaya lost his post it would be all her fault. I guess she didn’t want to be responsible for him losing his position,...so she left before he could."

 

"Oh no!!" Orihime said.

 

"That **tut-tut** son of a ..." Ichigo said.

 

"You got THAT right!!! And that’s not all..”

 

“There’s more?!”

 

“Hell, yes! Turns out Ise found out what’s been going on with the two of them, and she promptly kicked Rangiku out of the Shinigami Women’s Society.”

 

“What? Why?” Orihime asked.

 

“Because you know what a feminist Ise is! According to her Rangiku disgraced the Women’s Society by getting too close to her male Captain and therefore was guilty of insubordination.”

 

“Figures,” Ichigo muttered. “But isn’t Yuchiro the President of the Women’s Society? Ise’s only the Vice, isn’t she?

What gives HER the right to kick someone out?!”

 

“Believe me, Yuchiro was NOT happy with her! I got this news from Momo, apparently she overheard everything. The most heartbreaking part was Captain Hitsugaya ran to Yamamoto's office before Bayakua had a chance to go there. The reason being Bayakuya was scolding Rangiku! He just lit into her,and he wouldn’t let her get a word in! He called her name after name, said that now Captain Hitsugaya might be put on probation because of her, if not removed from his post, and she was irresponsible, unprofessional, and not even fit to be a Lieutenant.”

 

“Hey, people can’t help how they feel!”

 

“Rangiku actually left in tears! Later Captain Hitsugaya ran out of Yamamoto’s office, I don’t know what happened but he then went to see his Grandmother for something, and went to Rangiku’s house...but she was already gone.“

 

“Gone?

 

“Gone. She just disappeared! He went to the office, and all that was left was her mantle folded neatly right in the middle of the desk , her necklace she always wore that she left with him, and a note. He showed it to Momo and she told me what it said. It said,

 

'My Dearest Love, I know what we were doing was wrong, but I also know we can’t help how we feel..I know I can't. I love you so dearly...you were the only one who could have saved me from drinking myself to death after the Winter War and what happened with Gin. You opened my eyes…you were there when I needed you…you showed me how to love again…But I can't risk being responsible for you losing your post. You've worked too hard to get where you are and I’d never forgive myself if you got exiled to Rokungai. Please don’t try to find me..just remember I love you, and I always will forever. I'm doing this so you'll be safe." Orihime bawled when she heard that.

 

“That‘s so awful!!!"

 

"That's not fair!" Yuzu cried out.

 

"Tell me about it. It gets worse. The entire 10th squad went out on Strike!"

 

"All 200 of them?!"

 

"Yep. When Captain Hitsugaya was giving them the news Byakuya walked in and said they ought to be pleased she was gone because now they could buckle down and start acting like a real Squad, they could always get another Lieutenant. Right after he said that they threw their swords down right in front of him and walked out! They don’t WANT another Lieutenant! Not long after that the 5TH Squad went on strike, lead by Hinamori, who only stopped to give Bayakuya QUITE an earfull! They all just walked out! Then Renji quit.”

 

"Renji quit?! He always had dreams of becoming a Captain!"

 

"Yeah.but he walked out anyway, Rangiku‘s his friend too...he actually said that if it meant having to work under that jackass Bayakuya it’s not worth it anymore. So now he’s working for Kiscke in his shop, he‘s renting a room upstairs from the shop...and I walked out on Bayakuya myself!"

 

"YOU did!"

 

"Yep. I love Rangiku too! I stormed into his office and told him exactly what I thought of what happened and what I thought of him!! I stormed right in. At first he said in his cold manner to not storm in and not slam the door. I said I couldn’t believe I wasted so much time defending him now that I NOW what kind of jackass he is, I said to him that what he did had to be the most heartless, self-centered, inconsiderate, horrible thing!! I told him I couldn’t BELIEVE he was my brother and I had wasted so much time defending him, I actually upended a few chairs in my fury, took down his calligraphy, and tore it up!“

 

“Right in front of him?!“

 

“I liked it too…and for the final blow I told him I was dating Renji."

 

"Must have gone into conniptions over that!" Kon said.

 

:"You have no idea! I called him so many names..and for the coup de grace I slapped him right across that face. Took off my Kuchiki ring, threw it at him, disowned him, and told him I never wanted to see him again! Of course the moment I left Captain Soifon AND Yurorichi stormed right in! Apparently Captain Soifon told Yurorichi all about what happened too. Luckily I got out of the office before the carnage started in droves."

 

“So THAT’S what that thunderstorm was last night!“ Ichigo said.

 

“Yeah, luckily I was busy packing up all my stuff and leaving along with Renji, so we missed the whole thing. But from what Yurorichi told Renji Bayakuya’s office was NOT a pretty sight when they were done!“ She sighed, "It's a big mess now. We’re all so scared and worried about Rangiku!! Members of Squad 10 have been combing practically the whole world looking for her. Poor Captain Hitsugyaya is beside himself with sadness and worry. He's trying to throw himself into work, but it's not working, Hardly anyone is talking to Bayakuya or Ise, Captain Yamamoto is routinely scolding them both, mostly because the 10th and 5th Squads are protesting right in front of his office, and God Isn’t too happy either. It‘s all messed up!"

 

"Poor Rangiku...I hope she's alright.." Orihime said. “But..why didn’t she come down HERE? I don’t understand…why didn’t she come to ME,I would have gladly given her a place to stay!”

 

“She didn’t come here at all, Orihime?”

 

“No,she didn’t, she hasn’t been to my house at all! “ Orihime stood up and stared out the window. “I would have given her a room. In my own home, I would have given it gladly. Why didn’t she come to me?”

 

“Maybe she thought you were still mad at her..”

 

“Mad at her for what? I was never mad at her!”

 

“Maybe because she listened to Yamamoto when he said you turned traitor. I don’t think she’s ever forgiven herself

for doing that.”

 

“But…but Aizen tricked us! He tricked all of us. He tricked ME into going with him to Hecho Mundo in the first place

to protect you….only to find out he was going to destroy you anyway! How can I be mad at her for being tricked when I was tricked? Oh, I’m not mad at her, I could never be!!” She sniffed. “Oh Rangiku, I could never be mad at you! Oh, where are you?”

 

“How’s Toshiro doing?” Ichigo said.

 

“Oh, he’s a mess. He tries to hide it as best as he can, but we can all tell he’s hurting so much. Only Ikkaku is in there helping him now.”

 

“Ikkaku?! I didn’t think he liked Rangiku!”

 

“Actually he feels kind of responsible for what happened. I guess he feels guilty for all the times he fought with Rangiku or called her a fruit loop. He’s Captain Hitsugaya’s acting Lieutenant until they find Rangiku to try to make up for it. Captain Zuraki gave permission. We tried to tell him he didn’t have anything to do with it, but he still feels guilty…and no one’s taking to Bayakuya!!”

 

Issian then stood up. "Rukia, you are more than welcome to stay here for as long as you like," .

 

'Can I?"

 

"Of course.”

 

"I can stay here, I can really stay here?"

 

"Of course," Ichigo said. "You can bunk with the twins, like you used to. You can even come back to school again."

 

“That’s a great idea, Rukia!” Orihime said. “If you brought your uniform you can put it right on and come with us now! We can get you re-enrolled!”

 

Rukia smiled from ear to ear. “Excuse me,” she stood up, walked to the door, and pulled out two large suitcases from just inside the door from where she had left them. Issian smiled.

 

“Welcome home, Rukia!”

 

Later on after Rukia had donned her uniform the three of them headed out for school, meeting Chad, Uyru, and

Tatsuki so they could walk together like they usually did. They turned their heads when thy saw Ichigo and Orihme.

“Hey, Ichigo,” Tatsuki said. “Orihime?’ Orihime gave her a look and turned away. “Hey, come on, Orihime, you still mad? Orihime look I didn’t mean it when I told Ichigo I could make him call me sensai..honest. Look, I’m sorry I said that, OK?”

 

“What?” Rukia whispered from behind Orihime

 

“I’ll tell you later,“ Orihime whispered before turning to Tatsuki. “Don’t tell ME, you insulted MY boyfriend!”

 

Tatsuki sighed. “Ichigo, you know I didn’t mean it when I said that. Look, I’m sorry I said that…”

 

“ALL the things you said to him?” Orhime asked.

 

“AL the things I said to him, OK?”

 

“AND for knocking him through the wall and hanging him out the window?”

 

“AND for knocking him through the wall and hanging him out the window. Honest, I Take it all back. You’re right, I’m wrong, I’m sorry. Forgive me?”

 

“It’s up to Ichigo. I do if he does.”

 

“Yeah, I do,” Ichigo relented. “Besides, we got bigger things to talk about then that!”

 

“Oh? What?”

 

“Well, we got some news! Look who’s back!” He stepped to the side so they could see Rukia standing behind them.

 

“Rukia!” Tatsuki cried out.

 

“Rukia, nice to see you again,” Chad greeted her.

 

“Hello, Rukia,” Uyru greeted in his usual dry way.

 

“Hi guys,” Rukia said.

 

“Rukia, what brings you back to us?” Tatsuki asked.

 

“You’d never believe it,” Ichigo said. He and Orihime related everything.

 

“He did WHAT?!” Tatsuki asked. “Because he was dating his Lieutenant?! So what,why is that a crime?! You cant date who you want to?”

 

“Apparently not in the Soul Society,” Ichigo said,.

 

“Not in any branch of the military according to Bayakuya. Flanderization is what he calls it, you get involved with a member of your Squad you don’t put the Squad first.”

 

“That’s crazy!!” Tatsuki said.

 

“Yeah, tell me about it,” Ichigo said.”I was THERE, I saw how bad Rangiku was! It’s a blessing she could find anyone else. You’d think he’d have a heart just ONCE and make an exception!”

 

“I don’t believe that,” Chad said.

 

“I do,” Uyru said. “Believe me, I can believe it.”

 

“How…I mean..is he ALLOWED to do something like that?!”

 

“I didn’t THINK so,” Ichigo said.”But apparently he thought he was! His status, his power, and his sky high nobility all got to his head.”

 

“I’m not surprised,” Uryu said.

 

“Ironically it looked like Captain Yamamoto was going to make an exception, but by that time Rangiku was gone.”

 

“And this guy is YOUR brother, Rukia? I mean…he’s YOUR brother?!”

 

“WAS my brother, Tatsuki. As of this moment I’ve disowned him! I never want to be associated with that name, I never want to be CALLED that name, I don’t wanna have anything to DO with him, his name, his family EVER AGAIN!! He and I are DONE forever!!”

 

“So..what are you gonna call yourself, Rukia?”

 

“Oh, I’ll think of something.”

 

“Better think of something fast if ya wanna get re-enrolled in school,” Tatsuki pointed out.

 

“Ya know, Rukia,” Ichigo said slowly, “Seeing as how you’re gonna be living with us from now on, how about taking OUR last name?“

 

“Yours?”

 

“Why not? You’re gonna be living with my family, I already think of you as another sister..no reason why you can’t become one officially. We can talk to Dad about adopting you when we get home.”

 

Rukia smiled from ear to ear. “Thanks, Ichigo. I appreciate this so much!” She went over to give him a hug. “I owe ya one….brother.” They were unfortunately interrupted by an unwelcome “Yeep!” Slowly they all turned just in time to see Chizuru rubbing Orihime in her usual morning greeting.

 

“HELLO, Orihime!! You’re looking as lovely as ever!”

Tatsuki made a move toward Chizuru, "Look, Chizuru how many TIMES have I told you, Orihinme is dating.."but Rukia quickly stopped her.

 

“Tatsuki, please, let me. I need this!”

 

Tatsuki slowly stepped back. “Be my guest.”

 

Rukia quickly moved to the back of Chizuru and tapped her on the shoulder. “Hi, Chizuru.”

 

She turned back.”Oh, Hi, Rukia….wha….whe….R…RUKIA!!” she stared in shock at the short dark haired girl with her hands folded in front of her with a cold grin on her face. “Uh, Rukia! Well, nice to see you again, when did you get back?”

 

“Oh…quite some time ago.”

 

“Well…you’re looking as lovely and voluptuous as ever…”

 

“Oh thank you…now how about you let go of Orihime?!” Chizuru did so and backed away carefully….just in time for Rukia to pound her right in the face and knock her unconscious to the ground. “That was VERY theraputic!”

 

“Come on, we don’t want to be late for school,” Uryu said.

 

Chad looked at the knocked out Chizuru and shook his head.

 

“Leave her down there,” Tatsuki said, “Save US the headaches today. Besides Rukia’s been through enough without having to deal with HER!”

 

“Tempting,” Chad said. “But no, we can’t,” he picked up Chizuru and carried her toward school.

 

“Hey, Rukia can work off some aggression on her this afternoon!” Ichigo pointed out.

 

“Just what I need, brother,” she agreed.

 

Orihime deliberately lagged behind the rest. She stared up at the sky with tears in her eyes again. “Poor Rangiku….I hope she’s alright.”

 

Ichigo put his arm around her confortingly. “She’s a tough lady, Orihime. I know she’s OK, wherever she is..”

 

 

Meanwhile on the Bebop…

 

 

“And that’s basically training according to Ikkaku!” Rangiku finished up, causing Faye to laugh like crazy.

 

“Oh man, that guy is crazy!!”

 

“I know!! And he called ME a fruit loop sometimes!”

 

“Oh, YOU?! Please, the shiny one is calling the mirror bald!” Both women were sitting on their respective bunks, where they had been all day. They had stayed up pretty late talking and had continued after breakfast. Rangiku was wearing black stretch pants with a grey sleeveless top. Faye would tell Rangiku about the many adventures she, Spike, Ed,and Jet had had chasing after bounties, weather they had gotten away or not. Rangiku would tell Faye about the people she had known in the military. Of course Faye couldn’t help but notice she had looked a but sad telling some of them, and there were pauses. But Faye decided to let them be for now, mostly cause she was having such a great time, just sitting on their beds, chatting like schoolgirls. In fact, this was one of the reasons that Faye had insisted on Rangiku coming to join the team.

 

She needed a best friend.

 

Ordinarily Faye had considered herself a pretty independent person, dependant on just herself and not trusting people too much. But now that she realized she basically had no home, no family, and nowhere else to go she came to trust the guys more. Despite the occasional tiffs she still had with Spike every once in a while she did feel like she belonged…except for one thing. She had never had anyone she felt really close to. Even though she was friends with Jet and Spike, she could see they were already best friends, and neither one of them was hers. Ed was far too young and she was her niece now anyway. She had thought numerous times that a best friend of her own might be nice…and now here was her chance to have one!

 

The computer beeped out loud. “Bounty, bounty,” Ed called out. Spike, Jet, Faye, and Rangiku all ran into the room.

 

“Twice in one week?” Jet asked.

 

“Hey, let’s not ask questions, let’s just be thankful,” Spike said. “Who is it this time?’ Ed brought up the information. “Hmm…looks like more jokers trying to smuggle Red Eye.”

 

Rangiku looked up. “Red Eye?”

 

“Yeah, you weren’t around when we dealt with Red Eye the last time. It’s a brand new drug that you aim right at your eye,” her eyebrows went up. “You aim it at your eye and a little hose comes out, and you squeese the drug from the hose into the eye.”

 

Rangiku shuddered. “Uugh!”

 

“Yeah, the bad part is it makes the one who uses it ten times faster than he was before.”

 

“Yeah, only you could take that guy, Antonio on after he took it, Spike.”

 

Rangiku smiled. “I don’t think you’ll be the only one, Spike. In the military, my Squad was known as one of the fastest around.”

 

Spike looked at her with his eyebrows raised. “Really?”

 

“Oh yes. That was 10th Squad’s specialty. We were KNOWN for speed!”

 

“Well, you may have a chance to demonstrate,” Spike said, standing up. “You ready for your initiation?”

 

“I couldn’t be more ready,” Rangiku said, taking her sword and sheathing it on her back. “Let’s go!” she and Faye headed for the RedTail.

 

“We’ll see how she does with this,” Jet said.

 

Jet lead the way in his Hammerhead. “According to what Ed brought up in the computer, those jokers were last seen on Mars. I’ll send you both the info.”

 

Spike studied the map that was sent to him. “OK, according to this, they didn’t get too far. I’m guessing these guys are gonna try to push it at the first place they land.”

 

“Or they might be meeting with a dealer somewhere.”

 

“Yeah, that too. From what I remember their code for Red Eye is tomato juice, so my guess is that they’re gonna meet up at some bar.”

 

“Ya know, there’s a bar not more that ten feet from where they were last spotted, my guess is that’s where they might be.”

 

“OK, let’s go there first. Spike, you and I will take the back. Girls, you listen in at the front.”

 

Faye ad Rangiku looked at each other and smiled, Faye especially. SHE saw Rangiku in action, but she knew the boys hadn’t. “Just wait!” she thought eagerly.

 

When they landed their ships Spike and Jet casually waked into the bar in the back and sat down pretending that they had been there for a while. Spike took out his special spy glasses and looked around for the suspects. The girls meanwhile walked up to the front and casually ordered drinks.

 

“So, Rangiku,” Faye said, leaning against the bar. “Tell me, how are the bars where you come from?”

 

She smiled. “Oh, they’re great. I was definitely a regular there.”

 

“Were you really?”

 

“Yes, really,” her eyes got a faraway look to them and she fingered a small silver heart shaped locket that dangled from her neck. “The drinks tasted so great, and well…I was the first to admit that I did get drunk quite a number of times..”

 

“Oh?” Faye asked, amuzed. “How drunk?”

 

“Ya know.,I can’t remember.. But my Captain can!” She fingered the locket again and Faye could have sworn her eyes were starting to glisten before she blinked them away. “The finest man anyone could ever know..” she whispered softly before clearing her throat. “Anyway, I would get so drunk sometimes he would follow me to the bars JUST to drag me home!!”

 

“That bad, huh?”

 

“Well, believe me, not as bad as a few of my fellow soldiers!”

 

“Oh?”

 

“Yeah. One of them, Ikkaku, the one I was telling you about….he would get so drunk that he would go to the karaoke machines and sing his heart out…and cause some windows to break!” They both laughed. Soon a whole gang of rugged muscled men came into the bar, A few of them sat at the bar, some pulled up tables. One in particular stared at Rangiku, then stood up and leaned against the jukebox.

 

“Hey, Babe,” he called out to Rangiku. “Hey, this jukebox got anything on it from Dolly Parton?” Most of the men with him laughed. Rangiku slowly slid off the stool and sauntered over to him. He grinned and put in some money.

Rangiku looked at the selections and picked one. Soon soft rock filled the room. The guy grinned,. “Wanna dance, Babe?”

 

“Why, you don’t have any rhythm!” she went back to the bar amid the ‘Ooohs’ of the others in the bar. Faye smiled and gave her a high-five, liking her more and more. Even Spike had to grin at her retort.

 

“Come on, come on, morph already..” Jet mumbled, fiddling with the glasses he was wearing. Soon the image that was reflected in them began to change and morph until the same picture that was in Ed’s computer was staring back at him. “That’s the guy we’ve been looking for!”

 

“Ok, so how do we approach him?” Spike asked.

 

“We’ll take the front and the ladies can bring up the rear,” Jet said, taking the glasses off. He stood up and casually walked over to the guy he was staring at through his glasses, casually sitting down next to him,. “Yo,” he said casually while Spike staid a few feet from him and leaned against one of the tables, folding his arms casually. “This where ya buy the tomato juice from?”

 

The guy looked over at him. “Yeah, we got some. You interested?”

 

“Yeah, in fact. Ya get pretty tired of vodka and whiskey around here, not enough of a buzz. I’m in the mood to have a mix myself.”

 

The guy smiled. “I got what you need right here. But the light here is a bit dim. Why don’t we go outside where it’s brighter and I can show you just what kind I got?”

 

“Oh, that won’t be necessary…” Jet said casually. He wrapped his metal arm in a stranglehold around the guy’s neck. “Hand over the Red Eye, buster and no sudden moves, you got it?”

 

“Geez, it’s a bounty hunter!!” Another guy cried out, standing up. Some gang members pulled out guns, another tried to run, only to be blockaded by a spinning hook kick knocking him clear to the ground.

 

“Ooooh….ehhhh…” the guy mumbled, holding his head in his hands. When he looked up he gasped in horror as the one person he did NOT wish to be there came into focus. He grinned a sly grin.

 

“You guys going already?” he asked smugly.

 

“Ooooooohhhhh…..shiiiiiiiiitake mushrooms…SPIKE SPIEGAL?!?!”

 

“Very good, you got one of us..you know HIS name?” He said pointing to Jet.

 

Faye and Rangiku then ran over to the goons. Faye pulled out her gun, “Don’t try anything understand?!”

 

“Yeah, I understand,” said the one who she was pointing at. “And here’s my answer!” He pulled his own gun out…but before he knew what was happening a sword seemed to come from out of nowhere and sliced the gun in half! He whirled around to see Rangiku standing there with the blade of her sword pointing at his throat.

 

“You’re too slow,” Rangiku pointed out to him.

 

“Geez, bounty hunters with SWORDS now?!” Rangiku just grinned at that. “Oh, I get it now…ya can’t USE a gun, can you?”

 

Rangiku’s face hardened. “What’s THAT supposed to mean?!”

 

“It means due to those **tut-tut** implants you so generously gave yourself ya can’t possibly operate a gun! Ya can’t see IT and ME at the same time!!”

 

Rangiku’s voice lowered to a dangerous tone.”For your information, these are REAL!”

 

“HA, in your dreams, **tut-tut**…oh excuse me, TOOTS..or rather…in MY dreams!”

 

Faye’s face hardened. “Pal, you do NOT wanna do that!” She quickly whirled around and shot his friend’s arm before he could shoot her first. “You don’t wanna do THAT either!” Next thing she knew two tables were upended as bullets began flying and Faye jumped behind a counter, shooting back. She got one in the shoulder and shot the hand of another.

 

“Yeah, you heard me, **tut-tut**, you don’t think I don’t know why you got cut to have those **tut-tut**? To try to catch men off guard so you can act like Robin Hood once they’re distracted! But in case ya didn’t catch on I didn’t fall for it.”

 

“Oh too bad, I’ll have to try harder than!” Without another word Rangiku kicked him right between the legs, twirled him around and aimed the sword right at his neck. “Don’t make any sudden moves, or ou’re gonna regret it. I’m pretty good with this sword, and I’d be more than happy to give you a demonstration!” With that she traced a huge ‘R’ on his back, making sure he could feel it.

 

“YYYYYYEREEEEEOOOWWW!! YA GOD **tut-tut** **tut-tut**!!!” With that Rangiku knocked him out with a punch to the head knocking him out cold. “Jet!” she called out. Jet tossed her a pair of cuffs.

 

Meanwhile Spike was engaged in a one on one fistfight with another goon. The guy was throwing punches left and right which Spike expertly ducked before countering with a roundhouse kick to the gut and elbowed him in the spine when he came up for air. Slapping on some cuffs he felt another guy come running up to him with a switchblade. Spike ducked, grabbed the guy’s wrist and flipped him over, causing him to land right on one of the tables. He turned around to see another goon reaching for the Red Eye while coming right at Rangiku, but before he could rush over to help Rangiku began to duck and dodge his punches almost as fast as him! Spike tried to look at her eyes to make sure SHE wasn;t on Red Eye herself! No..as far as he could see her eyes were still bright blue, but she was dodging every blow and kick before firing back herself. Spike coudn;t believe it, especially when she brought out her sword. The guy on Red Eye took out a switchblade and came at her throat, but she blocked it with her sword, flicked it away, used her sword to cut his arm severely, before knocking him down. He whisled, clearly impressed. Rangiku looked at him and smiled as Spike tossed her some cuffs.

 

Jet meanwhile was busy with his group of goons. Reaching into the pockets of the guy who he had grabbed he found case after case of Red Eye. “Well, lookie here. Two, four, ten, twelve, you got a whole factory here in your jeans! Hey, Spike, we got ourselves a live one here!” Using his metal arm he managed to bend back the guys arm and twist it a bit, causing him to drop to the floot in agony. Jet held his gun on him. “don’t ya move or you’re gona get it in your other arm, got it? Oh, whiskey, don’t mid if I do,” he grabbed the guy’s half finished glass. “don’t mind me, I’ll help myself!” before chugging it down. He turned just in time to see a whole bunch of the guys friends charging at him with loaded guns. Pulling out his own, he started firing joined soon by Spike. Back to back they carefully shot down the bunch, making sure not to kill them.

 

Faye had jumped out from her hidden place behind the bar and both she and Rangiku started punching and kicking the rest of the man surrounding them. Faye noticed one last guy trying to sneak out the door while trying to old a baggy overcoat closed. Going by instinct she took careful aim and shot…spilling loads of Red Eye on the ground. Smirking slyly she made her way over to him.

 

“Well, well, where do you think you’re going?” the guy frantically dropped to his knees and tried to pick up the vials…only for Faye to step on his hand, causing him to scream. “Oh, sorry, did that hurt?”

 

The guy shakily stood up. “Yeah…does THIS hurt ya **tut-tut**?!” He promptly took a swing, only for Faye to dunk and shoot him quickly in the leg. “YAAHH..oh ya **tut-tut**!!!” Standing up he tried to grab her, only for Rangiku to punch him in the face.

 

“Don’t you DARE call my friend a **tut-tut**!!” she yelled. Faye smiled, took her shawl and filled it with the Red Eye as Rangiku dragged the lasy guy back inside and added them to the pile. “Here’s the last one!”

 

Spike took in the sght of what was around him, and gave a long low whisle. “Hey, Jet, look at this!”

 

“Yeah,I think we got all of them!!”

 

Faye smiled and patted Rangiku on the shoulder. “And we have Rangiku to thank for it!”

 

“You were great too, Faye!”

 

“But you were amazing at fighting these jerks, especially that one that took the Red Eye.”

 

Rangiku shrugged. “I told you, my Squad was known for being one of the fastest.”

 

Faye smiled at Spike. “So, Spike, what do you have to say now?”

 

Spike looked around him at what he saw and his eyebrows went up. He waked over to Rangiku and held out his hand. “Welcome to the Bebop!”

 

Rangiku smiled snd shook his hand back. “So, does that mean she can stay?”

 

“Are you kidding, I hope she never leaves!” Jet said. “Come on, these guys have an appointment with the police station, and it’s rude to keep them waiting!”

 

As they were leaving with their bounties Jet put his hand on Spike’s shoulder. “Spike-O my friend, I have a feeling things are gonna be better for us!”

 

“Ya think?”

 

“Oh yeah. Rangiku’s becoming our own good luck charm!”

 

Later that night Rangiku tossed and turned in her bunk, unable to fall asleep. She looked across the room at Faye in her bunk, but she was already sleeping deeply. Rangiku sat up in her bed and stared quitly out the window at the stars that were glistening down. Her eyes traveled, looking for one star in particular. One extra special one. Finally she found it…a light blue star that seemed to be directly above her head, shining down upon her. Her eyes tendery glistened with unshed tears and without even looking her hand trailed up to feel the heart shaped silver locket that was around her neck. Three words softly came from her lips.

 

“Good night, Toshiro.”

 

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That was pretty good!

 

You might wanna mark it for spoilers though, since the Winter War hasn't aired yet and not everyone reads the manga *points to self* :smileyvery-happy:

 

I'm kinda sad you made Nanao kind of a bad person. I like her...she's my favorite female character. But hey...it's your story, i have no say in it :smileyhappy:

 

Also, I see you made Rukia and Ichigo's relationship a little different. They are a little less violent with each other. I know how much it bugs you when Rukia hits him :smileyvery-happy:

 

But all in all, i liked it! It was pretty entertaining. Can't wait for the next installment :smileyhappy:

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Yeah, I don't read the Bleach manga, so I'm getting spoiled to all hell here. But that's OK; I don't mind spoilers near as much as some people. Even if a character has to die or something, getting there is half the fun.

It would be nice in the next chapter not to go so deep into the Bleach manga storyline, to avoid spoilers for the [as] first timers crowd (including myself). But the stories are VERY compelling and I like the Bebop action scenes! Rangiku's Zorro-esque antics, constantly insisting that her boobs are indeed REAL, and epic skill with a Samurai Sword from her Soul Reaper days are all very nice touches.

Also, I guess your view of Soul Society as a sort of purgatory is probably accurate. One would think that when they die in that afterlife, Soul Reapers have some sort of after-afterlife to look forward to. But then again, unless they fall in battle, they're pretty much immortal, right? Oh well; no need to nit-pick.

An excellent story; another A+ and I'm looking forward to Session 30!
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Thank you so much. What did you think of the overall situation, mainly that it was Bayakuya's fault that it happened? I'm glad that you liked the fight scenes, for me those are really hard to write. Oh, sorry, I didn;t know that you haven;t read the manga yet.

 

 

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That was pretty good!

 

You might wanna mark it for spoilers though, since the Winter War hasn't aired yet and not everyone reads the manga *points to self* :smileyvery-happy:

 

I'm kinda sad you made Nanao kind of a bad person. I like her...she's my favorite female character. But hey...it's your story, i have no say in it :smileyhappy:

 

Also, I see you made Rukia and Ichigo's relationship a little different. They are a little less violent with each other. I know how much it bugs you when Rukia hits him :smileyvery-happy:

 

But all in all, i liked it! It was pretty entertaining. Can't wait for the next installment :smileyhappy:


Well, thanks a lot but if I can recall Rukia and Ichigo were never that violent with each other! I mean SHE hits him but from what I remember HE'S never hit HER. He wouldn;t hit a girl.

 

But what di you think when it turns out to be Bayakuya's fault, when the Squads went on strike, or when Renji quit?

 

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I just meant that they like to tease each other and give each other a hard time. You made them less like that. But that's ok! It's your story, and at the end of the day, they are good friends and Ichigo would totally be there for Rukia. Giving her a place to stay would totally be something he would do! :smileyhappy:

 

Good for Renji! It shows how good of a friend he is to Rangiku

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Well, with the catastrophie that happened in Soul Society (thanks mainly to Bayakuya) I figured that they might not be thinking of teasing each other rght now (besides, I dont think Rukia takes it all kindaly when Ichigo teases her if ya know what I mean.)  Rukia is still steamed at Bayakuya and can only think of getting far away from him right now.

 

What did you think of 10th Squad going on Strike?

 

Again, I'm sorry for not being there last night. I can't BELIEVE I feel alseep!! I'll mak it up to ya I;'ll start writuing the next chapter rght away nd see if I can post it up soon.

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Well over all i must say that this was a pretty good part. Sure the relationship between Ichigo and Rukia was a little less violent, but hat doesn't really matter. I was proud of Renji. He was a great friend. But for Nanao, it kind of surprised me. It seems that she was a bit of a bad person, or so it seemed. But this part 3 was overall great and i enjoyed it.
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 That was pretty good. Overall the story is nice, and I can see the characters doing

and saying what they are. I kind of laughed at everyone giving Byakuya a hard time,

he deserves it in principle. :smileyvery-happy:

 

  There are a couple little things though I noticed. As others have said, be careful

about spoilers from the manga in particular. Most people aren't current with the manga,

so you might want to keep that in mind. The other issue is that we try to keep the

stories here in one thread. It is easier for people to go back and to read the whole thing

if all the chapters are in the same thread, and giving how complex this story

seems to be shaping into, having the ability to go back to re read a chapter might

be really handy.

 

 

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Well over all i must say that this was a pretty good part. Sure the relationship between Ichigo and Rukia was a little less violent, but hat doesn't really matter. I was proud of Renji. He was a great friend. But for Nanao, it kind of surprised me. It seems that she was a bit of a bad person, or so it seemed. But this part 3 was overall great and i enjoyed it.

I'm really glad you liked it. Well, with the whole Soul Society kinda bing turned inside out due to Bayakiua I figured Rukia (and eventually Ichigo) would be too upst to tease each other right now. Especially Rukia who's main concerns was asking if she could stay at Ichigo's again.

 

What did you think of the 10th Squad walking out? Do you think that's something they would do?

 

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You do? OOps. I just wanted to make sure people could find the new chapters easily.

 

I'm so gad you liked it. Yeah Bayakuya's a bastard and he finaly got what he deserved here,...nit that he really learns his lesson..

 

What do you think of the 10th and 5th Squads walking out? Think it;s something they would do?

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Well, with the catastrophie that happened in Soul Society (thanks mainly to Bayakuya) I figured that they might not be thinking of teasing each other rght now (besides, I dont think Rukia takes it all kindaly when Ichigo teases her if ya know what I mean.)  Rukia is still steamed at Bayakuya and can only think of getting far away from him right now.

 

What did you think of 10th Squad going on Strike?


Ah yeah...that's a good point. That totally makes sense :smileyhappy:

 

I don't blame them! Rangiku may be a little lazy with the paperwork, but otherwise, she's very good at her job. She takes being a lieutenant and protecting her captain and the others seriously. I don't think she would ever let them down, so they have every right to be angry and walk out!

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Well, the fifth squad doesn't have a captain really, and Momo isn't going
to pick Capt. :smileyindifferent:'s side over Toshiro's side, so that makes sense.
Squad 10 seems about the same way honestly.
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Ranlsa wrote:

Well, with the catastrophie that happened in Soul Society (thanks mainly to Bayakuya) I figured that they might not be thinking of teasing each other rght now (besides, I dont think Rukia takes it all kindaly when Ichigo teases her if ya know what I mean.)  Rukia is still steamed at Bayakuya and can only think of getting far away from him right now.


 


What did you think of 10th Squad going on Strike?




Ah yeah...that's a good point. That totally makes sense :smileyhappy:


 


I don't blame them! Rangiku may be a little lazy with the paperwork, but otherwise, she's very good at her job. She takes being a lieutenant and protecting her captain and the others seriously. I don't think she would ever let them down, so they have every right to be angry and walk out!



 


Aw, thanks. I'm so glad you liked that part. Needless to say it starts to get crazy in Soul Society, especially since there are over 450 people protesting rght outside Yamamoto's door! You can IMAGINE how well he takes that!!


 

Also, Momo is gonna let Bayakiya HAVE it big time in the next few chapters, so keep a look out for that!

 

Yeah, Rangiku is pretty loveable, and especially in the Diamond Dust Rebellion it was obvious her Squad holds her with the highest respect.

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Hey guys, I was told to put chapter 4 right here where chapter 3 is. I did promise that the nxt part would be done this week and here it is. Hope you like it.

 

 

 

 

 

The song Orihime sings is ‘Wonder Child’ by Helen Reddy

 

]Session 30- Even Angels Fall

 

Rangiku and Faye were hanging out in the main living room of the Bebop the next day, just talking on the old couch. “So, Faye,” Rangiku asked. “What do you guys do when you’re not out looking for bounties?”

 

“Oh…pretty much whatever we want to,” Faye said. “Either we play some card games or dice games…”

 

“I wouldn’t go playing with HER, though,” Spike broke in, coming through the doorway. “She’s a known cheater.” Rangiku raised her eyebrows at Faye.

 

“Oh, Spike, you hurt me,” Faye said, making a mock sad face. “thinking I would ever cheat..”

 

“Oh, really? Did you let her in on this?” Spike asked, nudging her bracelet, which caused two dice on the tabletop to turn by themselves. Spike looked at Rangiku. “Yeah, if you’re gonna play against her, make sure you don’t bet your clothes. Jet made that mistake once and he ended up walking the ship naked.”

 

“Oh, you don’t have to worry about that, I’m not a gambler,” Rangiku said. “I don’t play those games. I’d much rather go shopping myself.”

 

Faye’s head perked up, “Did you say shopping?”

 

“Yes!” Rangiku said, smiling. “I love it, I love any and all sort of clothes!” She smiled sadly. “Whenever we were stationed somewhere I used to drive the other military members, especially Ikkaku, crazy with it.”

 

“I bet your Captain loved ya for that,” Spike said.

 

Rangiku’s face lowered a bit. “Well, truth be known he was never too happy about me doing it whenever the urge hit me,” she sighed a bit.

 

Spike grinned. “Kind of like you with the Race Track, Faye!”

 

“Shut up, Spike!”

 

“But he never got too upset about it. He never yelled at me for it or anything…just scolded me a bit, and tolerated my fashion shows, but he never openly said anything too bad…” she sighed again. “He’s the most wonderful man…I miss him so much..”

 

Faye noticed how sad she suddenly looked so she changed the subject. “Have you ever seen the clothing stores on Venus?”

 

“No, are they good?”

 

“Are they good? The best! Hey, wanna go this afternoon?”

 

“Let’s!”

 

“Hey, Jet?” Faye called out. “When are we gonna be arriving on Venus?”

 

“In about an hour so we can grab a bite to eat and fuel up,” Jet called out.

 

“So, what else do you do besides shop and play cards?”

 

“Oh watch TV if anything’s on, play some checkers or chess..”

 

“That’s it?”

 

“Well, that’s it, pretty much.”

 

“You don’t do any paperwork of any kind?”

 

“No, Jet takes care of that pretty much when we turn in a bounty. There’s only one paper to fill out basically, then we get our cash. When we don’t have any bounties to chase we just do our own things.”

 

“Truly Paradise,” Rangiku said, stretching.

 

Spike picked up a checkerboard. “So, ya wanna play some checkers?”

 

“Sure!” Spike set the board up between them. Faye sat on the steps filing her nails and Ed was updating a new program on her computer.

 

After a while the game was dead heat. “I have to say, Spike, you’re not a bad player.”

 

“You’re not that bad yourself,” Spike admitted. “Nice to play with someone who’s not gonna cheat for a change.”

 

“Hey, I heard that!” Faye called out.

 

Rangiku layed her cheek in her hand. “I have to say, Spike, you remind me of my Captain whenever he plays checkers.”

 

“I’ll take that as a compliment.”

 

“It is,” she assured him. “Toshiro was an excellent checkers player. He was so serious when he played, so focused on the game.”

 

“Was he really?”

 

“Yes. He did everything to absolute perfection, Every move was so well thought out, he planned it all in his head. He was the same way whenever it came to fighting and when it came to things like paperwork. He’s so dedicated to his work, some people have even called him names for that.”

 

Spike’s head snapped up, “Really?”

 

“Oh it never bothered him all that much, but they’ve said he was so grumpy, and a killjoy. But he wasn’t, he was just extremely dedicated to his work. That’s what makes him a fantastic Captain. He’s devoted, intelligent..one of the finest Captains in the whole Squad.” She looked down and fingered the small silver locket dangling from her neck. “I miss him…” she said softly.

 

“So give him a call,” Spike said.

 

“Oh…I can’t…it’s a long story, but we’re not in contact anymore. I was in a way forbidden to associate with him again…it’s a long story…nothing either one of us did to each other…it was because of a fight I had with another Captain…I’d really rather not talk about it.”

 

Spike shrugged. “All right,” and moved a checker. “Ya don’t wanna talk about it yet,m ya don’t have to. It’s sort of an unwritten rule we got here. We all got pasts, all got dark stories, but if we don’t wanna talk about it, we don’t, and no one prys it out of us.” He jumped two of Rangiku’s red checkers. She looked at the board for a moment…then moved her checker and jumped over three of Spike’s! He raised his eyebrows. “Tease!” he smiled, causing Rangiku to giggle. He moved a checker and jumped hers, reaching the end. Rangiku crowned his…then moved her red checker to the end. “This game might take a while,” Spike said, crowning hers.

 

Rangiku smiled as Ed ran over to them. “Uncle Spike?” Ed asked. “Is it time for Ed’s martial arts lesson?”

 

“As soon as we land in Venus, Ed,” Spike promised.

 

“Your neice is so cute,” Rangiku said.

 

“Uncle Spike is teaching Ed kicks, and punches, and hi-ya!” she demonstrated. “Look, Uncle Spike!! Look, Ed’s doing it!!!”

 

“That’s great, Ed.” Rangiku laughed.

 

“You’re a very good uncle to her.”

 

“Thanks. I’m kind of new at it myself.”

 

“What do you mean?”

 

“Well, Ed is Jet’s adopted daughter. Her mom died a long time ago, and her dad abandoned her. She basically had no one until she came.”

 

Rangiku looked as Ed. “I know just how she feels.”

 

“You were an orphan?” Faye asked. Rangiku nodded.

 

“I have no memory of my parents, or even who they were. I was born poor and had to fend for myself.”

 

“That one of the reasons you joined the military?” She nodded.

 

“I heard that the military can improve your lot in life and you can raise yourself up from where you were.”

 

“Did it?” She nodded, then looked down. Before Spike knew it she had guided her last checker to home.

 

“I win!” Spike smiled and shook her hand.

 

‘Nice game., Good to pay with someone who doesn’t cheat.”

 

“Hey!” Faye protested. “Spike!”

 

“Faye?” he asked innocently.

 

:”So, Rangiku,” Jet said, coming into the room and sitting down on the sofa, “What did you do when you were off duty in the military?”

 

“Wel, a lot of things. Usually though, you could find me in the bars,” the men chuckled. “Hey, I’ll admit it, I drink.”

 

“That all you did?” Jet asked.

 

“No! I was known to do several other things!”

 

“Like what?” Faye asked.

 

She smiled. “I dance!”

 

“Dance?” Spike asked.

 

“Mmm-Hmm. Dance. I love dancing myself.”

 

“Can Rangiku show us dancing?” Ed asked. Ein barked a reply. “Please, Rangiku, show Ed how you danced!”

 

She smiled. “Well, I use a special kimono for dancing. Hold on, I’ll go put it on!” She ran into her room and a little bit later came back in in a fancy pink kimono. She held out a CD to Faye. “Would you put this into the player?”

 

“Sure,” Faye got up and inserted the CD in. Immidately Japanese music filled the aur. Rangiku opened several Japanese fans she had with her and began to move her body to the song that was being played. She swished her fans around and twirled around, causing the kimono to swirl around her. She moved her arms in lovely patterns, perfectly in time to the music being played. It was so lovely Jet, Spike, Faye, and Ed just sat back and watched her admiringly. She finally finished and spread ut her fans, causing them all to applaud.

 

“That was great!” Faye said. “You’re amazing!”

 

“Thank you very much.”

 

Jet went back to the ship. “We’re just about to land on Venus,.” Rangiku quickly went back to change her clothes.

 

“Ed, you better get ready too, we have your martial arts lesson in a few minutes,” Spike reminded her.

 

“Right! Ed’s been practicing, Uncle Spike! Watch Ed!” she stood up and demonstrated some punches. “Hi-ya!!”

 

“That’s great, Ed. I think you’re ready to learn some kicks now.”

 

“Yeeeeeeeah!!”

 

“But remember, you have to be relaxed when you do them, Remember, be like water.”

 

“Water. Ed will remember.”

 

Rangiku came back out of the room dressed in a bright yellow and black dress that came to her knees. Faye smiled. “All ready to shop?”

 

Rangiku giggled. “When it comes to shopping, I’m born ready!” Both women left then. Jet watched them go.

 

“Ya know, having her around really made the time go fast,” he observed,

 

“Yeah. Nice that she doesn’t have that much of an attitude..unlike some people…”

 

“I agree, buddy. These past few days we’ve nailed so many bounties it’s amazing! A few more like this and we just might

have a full safe!”

 

“And more food?”

 

“Of course!”

 

Spike pulled out a cigarette pack,offered one to Jet before taking one himself, and lit them both. “If she manages to keep Faye away from the horse track and actually IN a shop, I’ll hold her up nothing less than a miracle worker.”

 

Once they reached the shopping mall on Venus, Faye lead Rangiku into the first clothing store they saw and began to go to town. Rangiku took a bright red mini dress off it’s rack and held it up to Faye. “Oh, this would look soo cute on you!”

 

Faye took it and held it up to her. “You think?”

 

“Of course! I think it goes with your eyes. Try it on!!”

 

“Oh..I don’t know..”

 

“Go ahead, try it on!!” She took a blue skirt and yellow blouse from another rack. “And I’ll try this one on!!” Both women went into adjoining rooms and came out together, admiring their reflections in the big mirror. “Look at us! We look good!!”

 

Faye laughed. “Oh man, I think I’m taking this!”

 

“Oh take it, take it!!”

 

When they changed back they walked around the racks some more. Rangiku’s eyes fell on a black short sleeved dress that came down to the knees. She took it and look at it. “Oh, I would love to see Orihime in this! It would look so nice on her!”

 

“Who’s Orihime?” Faye asked.

 

Rangiku’s eyes got a faraway look to them. “Someone I used to know…in Kurakawa Town.”

 

“That place in Japan?”

 

“Yeah,” she looked down. “Orihime..she was the sweetest person you could ever meet in your life. She’s so pretty…but so shy. Yet..you could say she had a heart twice as big as her! When my Captain and I were stationed in Kurakawa Town a while ago and we needed a place to stay, she let us stay with her. She cooked us such delicious food!! Like I told Jet she’s a creative cook. She can take the most unique ingredients and make a culinary masterpiece. You should taste her food.”

 

“Well, we’re on Venus now, and Earth is right there, buy the dress for her and we can ask Jet to fly us down there and you can give it to her.”

 

Rangiku shook her head with tears forming in her eyes. “No..” she said softly “There was…a misunderstanding quite a while ago…I..I don’t think she wants anything to do with me right now…” she quickly hung up the dress.

 

“Why don’t you give her a call or something, try to talk it over..”

 

“No,” she said quietly. “Believe me..she went through such a traumatic experience and I wasn;t there to help her..and she had to fend for herself…Id rather not talk about it.” She picked up another skirt.”Oh, look at this!!”

 

Faye giggled. “I don’t know if you can fit in that!”

 

“See if you can!” Rangiku said, playfully throwing it at Faye. When Faye went to change Rangiku walked over to the window of the store and stood there with her arms folded, staring at the direction of the Earth. She softly started singing quietly

 

“Wonder child,

This I know,

It’s no wonder that I love you so…”

 

 

Meanwhile in Kurakawa Town…

 

 

Ichigo knocked on Orihime’s door, and stepped back waiting for his girlfriend to open it. When nothing happened he knockd

again. “Orihime?” he asked. “Orihime?” He said a little louder. Finally he tried the door and found it open.”Orihime? I’m coming in.” He walked through the door and looked around. “Orihime?” He called out again.

 

His girlfriend’s small quivery voice came from around a corner, “Ichigo?”

 

“Where are you?”

 

After a small **tut-tut** she answered, “In the kitchen.” Ichigo ran in there and found his girlfriend sitting at the table, her arms folded in front of her, and her head bowed, Ichigo sat next to her.

 

“Orihime? What are you doing in here?”

 

After a **tut-tut** she answered, “I…I’m praying really hard for any kind of sign that Rangiku is OK.”

 

“In the kitchen?”

 

“Yeah,” Orihime sobbed. “Rangiku used to love my cooking so much. She always had wonderful things to say about it. We used to have the most wonderful talks right in here. She was like a big sister to me. I could talk to her about anything and she would listen and give me advice,” she sobbed again. “I…I hope she’s OK…”

 

Ichigo took Orihime into his arms and let his girlfriend cry softly against his chest. Tenderly he stroked her hair. “She’s OK, Orihime. I know she’s OK. She’s a strong lady, she’s been through a lot already. I know she’s alright.”

 

“It’s not fair, Ichigo! After everything that went on she was finally happy! Why….why wouldn’t they let her be? Why…why can’t she love who she wanted to love no matter who it was?”

 

“It’s not them, Orihime, it’s Bayakuya! Him and his **tut-tut** pride and his stupid “I am of the noble rule-loving Kuchki clan, I must follow the rules, no exceptions for anyone! But what else can you expect from a guy that tried to off his own ex-sister?!”

 

Orihime laid her head on her boyfriend’s chest. “Rangiku was the sweetest woman I ever knew in my life. She always listened to me whenever I had a problem or just wanted to talk. She even sang to me sometimes whenever I was really sad.”

 

“Really?”

 

“Yeah.”

 

“Can I hear one of the songs, Orihime?”

 

“Now?”

 

“Sure. Maybe it’ll make you feel better.”

 

Orihime leaned against him and stared outside, tenderly singing one of her favorite songs:

 

“Rainy days are bright for me
And rainbows shine at night for me
It's you, you taught me how to see
You opened up the world for me

Everything I see is new
The sky's a nicer shade of blue
And look, the grass is greener too
Since the time I first saw you

Flowers grow around my door
I've never seen that rose before
And now, a rose means so much more
Must be you, its growing for

'Cause you're a wonder child
Living in a world that's all surprise
And you make me see things through your eyes
Wonder child, this I know
It's no wonder that I love you so
Wonder child, wonder child.”

 

Ichigo hugged Orihime close to him again. “That was a beautiful song, Orihime.”

 

“She sang it to me whenever I was sad or scared about what might be happening. It always made me feel better.”

 

Ichigo hugged her Again. “Well, I have some good news to share. It’s not a song, but hopefully it’ll cheer you up a little.

 

“What is it?”

 

“Dad just came back from the courthouse where he had adoption papers drawn up for Rukia, and she signed them! They’re on their way back to the courthouse now to make it official.”

 

“Congradulations!!” Orihime hugged her boyfriend. “Oh, that’s wonderful, now Rukia has a real family!”

 

“Yeah, so she’s Rukia Kurasaki now. My sister.”

 

“That’s wonderful. You have 3 sisters now!”

 

“Yeah. Kisuke gave Renji half a day off, and he’s gonna take Rukia to the movies to celebrate, then we‘re gonna have a special family dinner at my house. Wanna go with them and make it a double date?”

 

“Sure,” Orihime looked up and sighed. “I wish I could tell Rangiku this. She’d be so happy to hear this news.”

 

“I know,” Ichigo said., “But from what I heard from Yurorichi, they’re all doing their best to find her.”

 

 

That night, on the Bebop…

 

Rangiku opened her eyes that night, looking over at Faye who was sleeping quietly. Slowly she got up from the bed and walked into the darkened living room of the Bebop. She stopped at the huge window and stared at the many stars glittering the sky with a faraway look in her eyes. She touched the locket again and moved her hand down her arm, looking down as the quiet sobs began in earnest. Faye got up to go to the bathroom and stopped on her way there, quietly watching Rangiku, curious as to what was wrong. But as usual she shrugged it off. Hey, if she didn’t want to talk about, she didn’t want to talk about it. But when she came back, she was aware of a feeling of concern that she had hardly ever had before about anyone. She pretended to be asleep when Rangiku finally came back to bed, but at the same time wanting to hug her and tell her she was gonna be all right, wondering again what was wrong and if things were all right with her? But she didn’t want to pry…yet at the same time she did. Faye then decided to make Rangiku’s time on the Bebop adventurous and fun to be SURE she would be happy. She gazed upon Rangiku, and wondered again about these newfound feelings, Was this how it felt to have a best friend?

 

 

Two months later…

 

 

In New York City Soifon, Omaeda, Kira, and Yumichaka in their gegai forms all raced through the crowded lobby of a dog racing track, heading toward one of the pay phones. “HOW THE HELL COUD YOU HAVE LEFT THE PHONES UP IN SOUL SOCIETY?!?!” Soifon was screaming at Omaeda.

 

“Well, we were in a hurry we had a lot of stuff to carry and..

 

“Aw, shut up!!” Soifon said angrily as they came to the nearest phone. “Sir? Excuse me, I’m sorry but we need to use the phone right away, please?”

 

“Wait a minute, lady, I’m cashing in here!”

 

“Sir,can you use another phone, we need this one right away!”

 

“Wait your turn!”

 

“Look, this is an emergency,” Yumachaka said.

 

“Please, we’re looking for our missing friend!” Kira tried to explain.

 

“Hey, that aint my problem!”

 

Siofon by now was running out of patience, “Yeah? I can MAKE it your problem!”

 

“Look..”

 

“Give us the phone!” Yumachaka said, grabbing it from the guys hand and giving it to Soifon.

 

“I’m sorry,” she said as the guy left and she slipped into the booth. “I’m sorry, I’m sorry, but thank you for your cooperation. Yumachaka, I’m gonna call Yoruichi-Sama, see if she’s found out anything about Rangiku yet,” she handed him her bag. “I know you and Ikkaku went to the World of the Living before. Here, take some change out of here, call everybody you’ve met down there, see if they’ve found out anything. Kira,” she took some papers out of the bag and gave it to him. “Ask the people in these shops if we can post these posters Kiskue made in the windows.” They went off.

 

“What can I do?” Omaeda asked.

 

“What can you do? STAY OUT OF THE WAY!” Soi Fon said, turning to the phone. “What am I doing? Hello? Hello? Oh, he’ll have to call you back,” she quickly pressed the reciever down.

 

In Kisuke’s shop….

 

Kisuke was on the phone in his shop. “Hi, uh, do you speak English? Uh..Peux-tu parler l´anglais? Uh…uh…nous sommes à la recherche d'une femme rousse…”

 

Yoruichi came in just then. “Any luck?”

 

Finally Kisuke ran out of patience and screamed, “I’M LOOKING FOR OUR FRIEND, DO YOU KNOW WHERE SHE IS?!” before he slammed down the phone. “No, no luck. I’ve been calling any and all shopkeepers I know of in France, China, Italy, no one’s seen anyone that resembles Rangiku.

 

Yoruichi sighed and leaned against the counter. “Me neither. I called people in Spain, Mexico, Canada. No luck at all. Did

Renji come back from making his delivery?”

 

“Yeah, he’s in the stockroom,” as soon as she had gone the phone rang. Kisuke answered. “Hello, Kisuke’s Shop of Mystical Wonders. If we can’t put a smile on your face, your skin’s too tight. How can I help you? Oh….right…OK…hold on,” he walked to the back of the shop. “Yoruichi?”

 

“I’m busy.”

 

“It’s Soifon!” He held out the phone. “3.….2.…1,” as Yuruichi ran out and took the phone.

 

“Hi, Little B.”

 

“Hello, Yuruichi-Sama!”

 

“Where are you?”

 

“In New York City, at…” she checked. “At the Lightening Fast Dog Racing Track. We’ve been looking and looking for Rangiku in almost all the clothing stores, restaurants, bars, theaters…no luck.”

 

“We’re having no luck either. We’ve been calling all shopkeepers we know in any and all parts of the world. No luck here either. How’s Toshiro doing?”

 

“He’s a mess! He’s trying to cover it up, but anyone who’s anyone can easily see he’s falling apart. He’s falling behind in his paperwork, which is unusual for him, I know. He hardly ever comes out of his office, probably the only one who dares to go in there is Momo, and not even SHE can do anything to lift him. He can’t concentrate. He can’t focus, nothing gives him satisfaction anymore.”

 

In Captain Hitsugaya’s Office…

 

Captain Hitsugaya was sitting at his desk in his office. Ikkaku was sitting at the Lieutenant’s desk. He looked around him, unable to concentrate at all. Something was missing…something was out of place. The office was neat as a pin, quiet and peaceful…TOO quiet. TOO peaceful! He looked at the now empty couch without anyone in it, next to the open windows. He tapped his pen on his desk, looking down at the paperwork that was laying in front of him. He picked up his pen and tried to focus on it….but every time he tried he felt familiar soft movements around him. “Rangiku? Rangiku?” he asked, lifting up his head…only for the awful truth to come back to him. He closed his eyes, trying to focus. He suddenly felt two arms go around him and he opened his eyes eagerly…only to find no one there at all! “Rangiku?” he asked again. Finally he gazed back at the paperwork. Ikkaku stopped his work and came over to him.

 

“Captain?” he asked. Toshiro glanced up at him. “It’s OK, Sir. I miss her too.”

 

He sighed.”We’ve been together since the very beginning. Without her I feel like…there IS no 10th Squad,” He sighed. “If only….if only I could have told her before how much she meant to me…”

 

Why not tell her now?”

 

“Now? What do you mean?”

 

Ikkaku cleared a place on his desk, opened up a drawer, took out a blank piece of paper and a pen. “You’ve been doing paperwork for Captain Yamamoto all this time now. Maybe it’s time you did one for someone else.”

 

“I don’t even know where she is.”

 

“Maybe getting it down on paper will help.” He started to leave the room. “Just a suggestion…”

 

Toshiro glanced at the paper..and took out a picture of Rangiku he kept in his desk. He put in on the desk and picked up the pen.

 

“Dear Rangiku…wherever you are…I miss you more than anything in the world…”

 

Ikkaku meanwhile left the room and stopped outside, glancing up at the sky. “Hey…Rangiku? Ya know…all those things I said to ya…look I didn’t mean them. Really I didn’t. If you just come back, I’ll never call ya a fruitcake again. I promise.”

 

 

Back in New York…

 

“Yeah, it’s pretty much a mess up there, no thanks to that pompus, arrogant, stuck up jackass who calls himself a Captain…” as she was talking Faye came out from the entrance to the dog race counting out a huge sum of money. Omaeda follwed her for a few moments.

 

“Uh…Captain?”

 

“Not NOW, Omaeda!”

 

“But, maybe we could ask that woman..”

 

“Omaeda I’m NOT interested in your girl watching right now! Stay RIGHT THERE, UNDERSTAND?!”

 

“Yes, Ma’am..”

 

Faye continued to walk down the hallway counting her cash and passing by the windows of shops. Directly after she walked by, Kira pasted on the shop window a poster that Kisuke had printed up. A picture of Rangiku in her yellow dress was in front and in big red letters was printed

 

MISSING

NAME: RANGIKU MATSIMOTO

AGE: 27

HAIR: BLONDE- RED

EYES: BLUE

HEIGHT: 5’ 8”

ANYONE WITH ANY INFORMATION ON HER WHEREABOUTS PLEASE CALL KISUKE URUHARA (PHONE NUMBER)

80,000 WOOLONG REWARD FOR ANYONE WITH ANY INFORMATION ON HER WHEREABOUTS.

 

 

 

Bad timing on Faye's part, right? You also notice how many times I said 'GIRLFRIEND' and 'BOYFRIEND" in this chapter?

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  Thanks for putting this chapter in the same thread. I think this will help people

in the long run, in case they need to catch up or want to re-read anything.

 

  I'd suggest editing the title in your first post to get rid of the Part 3. That

way people will know this is where all the chapters are.

 

  Faye cheating, Spike warning Rangiku about Faye cheating, and Faye complaining

were all pretty classic. The checkers scene was nice too, it was a good backdrop for

the story.

 

  Orihime is adorable.

 

  Rukia is Ichigo's adopted brother now. Didn't see that coming.

  Omeada **tut-tut** up and forgetting the phones, saw that coming. :smileyvery-happy:

 

  Poor grumpy shota Toshiro. Even Ikkaku is trying to help snap him out of his funk.

 Wow, Capt. :smileyindifferent: goofed up big time if even Soi Fon, who is as much a rules stickler as anyone,

is on his case about this.

 

 Well done, this was a nice chapter.

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Alright, I just finished reading this chapter. And I must say, this chapter was no doubt, the best one so far. It had some great classic scenes :smileyvery-happy:
And who cant love Orihime? She is so CUTE!
And you did a good job with the characters. I thought it was funny with Omeada. He forgot them, of course XD
Overall this chapter deserves an A++!!!!!!!!!!!
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Sorry I didn;t get a chance to reply until now. Well, Tosiro isn;t grumpy as he is broken-hearted. He's deeply in love with someo who's been chased away and he has no clue where she is. He's missing her ike crazy!  Just like she misses him.

 

I'm so glad you liked Orihime's part. Not too many people like her for some reason.

 

I'm so glad you like it. Thanks a lot.

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Does Orihime sing much in the anime? If not, then this could be considered a hidden talent. And then it hit me...the huge, glaring anachronism that makes this storyline kinda ridiculous: the Bebop time period is 2071, but is it even believable that the period of time of the events of Bleach could be 2068 or something like that? I guess so, but it seems very far-fetched to me. Yet you work masterfully within this improbable concept, interweaving the storylines of the Bleach captains and the Bebop crew with such intricate grace that the fact that Earth might be little more than a scorched meteor-ridden wasteland in the original Bebop anime is easy to overlook.

The streak of awesomeness continues! A+!

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Thanks for your review. I hop to get the next part up soon.

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Very nice, as usual!

 

Favorite line:  “Hello, Kisuke’s Shop of Mystical Wonders. If we can’t put a smile on your face, your skin’s too tight." :smileyvery-happy:

 

Omaeda irritating Soi Fon was hilarious as well. And i love the Renji x Rukia pairing you got going on :smileyhappy:

 

Great job! Can't wait for the next chapter!

"Don't be ridiculous. You must have me mistaken for someone else. I didn't come here so we could paint each others' toe nails like it was some kind of slumber party. I came here to kick your ass." -Renji

Loly: "How did you get in here anyway?"
Grimmjow: "What do you mean how? Through the wall of course!"
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Ranlsa
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Re: The Journey Home: A Bebop/Bleach fanfic part 3

Reply to renjifan22 - Message ID#: 60498494

Thanks, I'm so gla you liked the chapter. What dd you think about the checkers game between Spike and Rangiku, and the scenes with Orihime?

 

Did you feel for Toshiro, broken-hearted as he is? I really wanted you to.

 

How about the end when Faye JUST missed seeing the posters?

COWBOY BEBOP FOREVER!!
MAY YOU GO ON FOR 10 MORE YEARS!!

Never underestimate a girl- never underestimate Balsa!

YOU CAN'T STOP THE BEBOP!

Don't let go....Durarara, FLCL, Big O...
See ya, Space Cowgirls!
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renjifan22
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Re: The Journey Home: A Bebop/Bleach fanfic part 3

Reply to Ranlsa - Message ID#: 60507050

I thought it was funny how Spike kept mentioning how Faye's a cheater :smileyvery-happy:

 

Like i said, i'm a romantic. So i thought that the scene between Orihime and Ichigo was really cute and sweet :smileyhappy:

 

Yeah...poor Toshiro :smileysad: No one can cheer him up even a little

 

I loved how Omaeda wanted to ask Faye about Rangiku and Soi Fon just ignored him. But he would have actually had a good idea, for once :smileyvery-happy:

"Don't be ridiculous. You must have me mistaken for someone else. I didn't come here so we could paint each others' toe nails like it was some kind of slumber party. I came here to kick your ass." -Renji

Loly: "How did you get in here anyway?"
Grimmjow: "What do you mean how? Through the wall of course!"
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Ranlsa
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Re: The Journey Home: A Bebop/Bleach fanfic part 3

Reply to renjifan22 - Message ID#: 60511580

Well, if Spike's anything if nit honest. And he likes Rangiku as a teammate so he felt he shoud warn her.

 

Yeah,I wantd you to feel for poor Toshiro. His heart is broken, and it;s gonna get even more broken in the next chapter.

 

Yeah I wanted you to laught but at the same time be frustrated that Faye just missed the posters.

COWBOY BEBOP FOREVER!!
MAY YOU GO ON FOR 10 MORE YEARS!!

Never underestimate a girl- never underestimate Balsa!

YOU CAN'T STOP THE BEBOP!

Don't let go....Durarara, FLCL, Big O...
See ya, Space Cowgirls!