Creative Works

[mercenaryninja94]

i'm writing something and i need help describing this------>>http://media.teamxbox.com/games/ss/2186/1265740014.jpg
 
 this-------->>http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20100201065828/masseffect/i
mages/0/0d/Alliance_Fighter.jpg

and this----->>http://images.wikia.com/masseffect/images/3/35/HMWA_AR.png
 
for reference this is what i'm currently writing------->>>http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7826072/1/under_the_blood_red_iron_sk
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fanfic.net messed up the format

[MegaNaraku]

For the second one I may be able to help out. just give me a minute

[MegaNaraku]

Alliance Fighter - The ship had a long narrow snout made of pure metal with a black colored blade at the end specifically made for combat. The window for the Captain's seat was painted black. it was painted red on the sides. It had wings to help its flight patterns as well. Attached to the right side of the ship, was a long arm. It was painted the same as the ship. (I'm not sure what the arm is for)

[mercenaryninja94]

thanks alot right now i'm describing what the invaders look like for now they look like the first picture

[Jingai]

I have a question about the first picture, what kind of context are we describing them in?
Are they good guys, bad guys, we don't know yet guys?

[mercenaryninja94]

they are the bad guys in the scene im currently writing a woman is hiding a closet in an office she is a soldier and this is the first time we get a discription

of what they look like 

[Jingai]

 Alright, I'll try to do my best for ya.

  <female character> stood motionless in the closet, the heavy footfalls of the fully armored <dudes>

echoing through the office. The lights buzzed, casting a soft silver glow from the articulated brushed

tritanium plates and sending beams scattering from the bronze mirrored face plates which formed

the center of the helmets on the fully armored <dudes>.

  Hope it helps.

[mercenaryninja94]

Thanks now I just need to know what their weapons look like

[MegaNaraku]

your welcome