oboefreak wrote:
Ooooh, along Explosivo's vein, would he even have told Stopframe this early in the show that he loved him? I seriously wasn't expecting it at all when it happened. If anything, I was expecting it to happen the other way around.
Also, what was supposed to happen in the six other episodes that you haven't talked about? I was able to read "Raped" but I'm curious about the content of the other six.
Yeah, we wrote Honor before we knew it was the series finale. We may have gotten a little more info on Clay's life post-gut-spilling, but I don't think it's necessary. What definitely would have happened would be more of a lead up, a few episodes showing Clay and Orel's degenerated relationship in more detail.
Having it happen the other way around? You mean Stopframe declaring his love for Clay. I feel the audience experienced that in "Satan." Maybe it wasn't a literal declaration, but we all knew what Stopframe was thinking.
Here's something I posted on another site about the remaining episodes:
Well, I don't have any other scripts I want to post, just because they're all in pretty rough states, but here's some quick descriptions.
1. Easter: Orel's Grampa (Clay's father) comes to Moralton to tie up loose ends before he dies. He ends up sharing Orel's bed as his death bed for the last ten episodes, giving Orel good advice. (happens during the Sacrifice episode).
2. Nurture: Shapey and Block nurture each other and grow emotionally.
3. Narcissism: After cutting it off with Florence, Putty becomes disillusioned with all women. This makes him incredibly attractive to all the females in Moralton and he becomes the most available bachelor in town, fukcing tons of poossy. This makes him even more bored with every lady out there. He starts picturing Florence as he's fukking everyone. When he finally runs into Florence, she is dating someone else and is really really thin. Putty's disappointed in her appearance. He's been picturing fat Florence, and even though she's prettier on a shallow level, longs for her previous look. She explains that she got so depressed when he stopped seeing her that she didn't feel like eating. He happily tells her now that he's back and she can get fat again. She is insulted by his self-centered attitude and tells him to go away. In the end, I think he probably wins her back though by showing he really cares.
4. Untitled: Bloberta and Officer Papermouth accidentally bump into each other late at night, both reaching into the garbage can outside Nurse Bendy's apt. and simultaneously grabbing the "Sonny" Teddy bear. Papermouth chivalrously let's Bloberta keep it, and this starts off an affair between the two of them. It ends up being very good for the both of them. Not sure how Clay reacts. Didn't get very far on this one.
5. Untitled: I wanted to write the continuing saga of Orel and Christina, but never got to it. No solid ideas on this.
6. Raped: You may have read this. I'll probably put it up on my blog again.
7. Death: Orel's Grampa finally dies. Orel doesn't find too much solace from anyone and becomes a Goth kid, getting heavily into the Christian Death Metal band: Multiple Godgasm. Don't want to say much more about this, on the remote chance that there will be a Moral Orel movie, I'd like to use a lot of this story.
Message Edited by dinosta on 01-03-2009 03:19 PM